newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 64

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dev & dadi making maan's idea flop...
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Ok I m really sorry kal updating likhar main rafoo chakkar ho gayi thi there was some problem jis k wajah se I couldn't update pls forgive me dear friends. Here is the next part hope u like it

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Part 13

Maan geet ko apne baho mein uthakar lift ki taraf badtha hain

Dadi: Maan aapne shayad humari baat thik se sunni nahi'lift kaam nahi kar raha hai aapko seediyon se jaana padega (Maan I informed u right now that the lift is not working)

Maan: Ji Dadi

Maan has no other option. Wo seediyon se neeche aane lagtha hain

Maan: Ye main kaha phas gaya' seediyon se aana kya kum tha jo mujhe iss nautanki ladki ko utthana pad raha hai

Maan: Khair jaldi se isse hospital chod deta hoon phir mujhe iss musibat se chutkara mil jaayega

The driver opens the door of the car

Maan Geet ko peeche k seat par sula detha hai n then

Maan: Driver inhe kisi hospital mein chod aana

Driver: Sir aap nahi aayenge

Maan: Main kyun aane laga'inhe aas paas k kisi bhi hospital mein chod kar tum bhi jaldi aa jana samjhe tum (leave her in any hospital n then immediately u also come back)

Driver: Ji Sir

Maan is returning back but then something makes him to stop

Maan: Are main tho bhool hi gaya office mein tho dadima baithi hai agar unhe pata chal gaya k geet ko maine driver k bharose chod diya hai tho wo mujhe chodengi nahi ( O dadi is here if she comes to know that I have left geet with the driver she won't spare me)

Driver starts the car

Maan: Are rukho main bhi aata hoon ( wait even I m coming)

Maan opens the door.

Maan carefully lifts geet's head and places it on his lap

Maan: Haan chalo

Maan:( thinking ) kahi maine kuch zyaada toh nahi kar diya'geet ke maathe se behnewala khoon rukh hi nahi raha'

He removes his handkerchief and places it on top of the wound

Driver stops the car in front of a hospital

Maan: Ye tum ne gadi kaha rokh di

Driver: Sir aapne hi kaha tha na jobhi pehla hospital aaye waha gadi rokh du

Right now maan is confused he is not sure what should b his behaviour with geet in this particular situation

Maan thinks for a while and then

Maan: Ek kaam karo gadi ghar ki taraf mod do

Driver: Ji Sir

Maan dials a number from his mobile

Maan: Hello Dr. Tej. Main MSK bol raha hoon

Tej: Hello Mr. Khurana khaiye kis liye aapne yaad kiya koi emergency hai

Maan: Yes Doc aap fauran se KM pauch jaayiye to b clear aap outhouse mein aa jayiye

Tej: Ok Mr khurana I will b there

Maan: Thanks Doctor

Call ends

Maan: (thinking) Geet ko wakai mein serious chot lagi hai agar main usse hospital mein chod deta toh waha uska khayal rakhne k liye koi nahi hota'ghar mein annie geet ko samal legi'aur main meeting k liye jaa paaunga'

Maan: But why m I bothered about this girl'I always wanted to trouble her'lekin iski chot se mujhe kyun takleef ho rahi hai

Khurana Mansion

Maan geet ko outhouse mein lekar jaata hai aur usse bed pe letha detha hai

Nakul comes

Maan: Nakul jaakar Annie ko bulakar lau immediately

Nakul: Sir Annie madam tho shopping k liye bahar gayi hai

Maan: matlab ghar mein filhaal koi bhi maujood nahi hai

Nakul:Ji Sir

Tej arrives

Tej: Good morning maan

Maan: Good morning Doctor

Tej: O tho ye hain patient

Maan: Ji Doctor

Tej starts examining geet

Tej: Innhe toh behet gheri chot lagi hai'kahafi khoon bhi beh chukha hai

Maan: (gets worried) Doctor koi fikr karne ki baat tho nahi hai naa'ye thik toh ho jaayegina'mera matlab hain inhe hosh kab aayega

Tej: Relax Maan' fikr karne ki koi baat nahi hai'she will b alright haanmagar inhe aaj complete rest ki zaroorat hain'main kuch dawaiya likar de deta hoon aap unhe waqt se de dijiyega'n yes proper time pe inhe khana bhi khana hoga'warna kamzoori aa sakthi hai'

Tej: Ye ek ointment hai aap inke wounds mein ye laga dijiyega

Maan: Ok Doctor

Tej: Well Maan I should say she must b a very special person in ur life warna MSK kisi ladki ki itni fikr kare ye toh koi sapne mein bhi nahi soch saktha'

Maan doesn't reply

Tej: Ok Maan main abhi chaltha hoon agar koi aur problem ho tho mujhe bata dena

Maan: Thanks doc

Tej leaves

Maan:(thinking) Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai'main kyun iske liye itna worried hoon'forget it

Maan: Nakul jaakar ye dawaiyaan le aao

Nakul: yes Sir

Maan: Ab main kyun yaha rukh raha hoon'doctor ko dikha diya ab mujhe chalna chahiye'Annie aayegi toh nakul usse batadega'mujhe kya pade rehne do geet ko iss halat mein

Maan about to leave. But then he realizes k geet's dupatta is trapped in his watch

Maan turns around. Something forces him to look at geet

Maan: She looks so innocent even in this condition'no I can't leave her alone'I won't' she is my responsibility'I will b there for her forever

Maan removes the dupatta from his watch and then takes the ointment and applies it on the wounded area

He is doing this very carefully' as if he cannot even dream to hurt geet'

He gently careses geet's face'and goes on admiring her'

Maan: itna khoobsurat tho koi khawab bhi nahi ho saktha'(smiles)

Annie: Geet'geet

Maan immediately gets up

Annie: Bhai geet ko kya hua'

Maan: Annie darne ki koi baat nahi hai'Tej aakar gaya tha'.she will b fine'ok main ab jaata hoon waise bhi iss geet ki wajah se mera kafi time barbaad ho chukha hain

Maan does not wait for any reply and immediately leaves the room

Annie is sitting besides Geet.

Maan phir se ek baar mudkar geet ki taraf dekhtha hai'and then he goes

Khurana constructions

Dadi: Maan aap geet ko akele hospital chod aaye

Maan: Nahi dadi geet ghar par hain'tej ko maine ghar par hi bhula liya tha n right now annie is there with geet

Dadi: Thik hain maan ab humhe bhi ghar jaana chahiye'magar yaad rakhiye aayenda aisa incident dubara nahi hona chahiye

Maan: ji Dadi

Dev: bro meeting k liye chale

Maan nods his head in approval

Meeting starts

But maan is unable to concentrate on the meeting he is constantly thinking about geet

Dev: Bro mere hisaab se hume ye project le lena chahiye'

Maan doesn't answer

Dev: Bro'bro

Adi: maan sir dev sir aapse kuch keh rahe hain

Maan: Haan dev meeting shuru karo

The entire staff is shocked to hear this

Dev: Bro meeting khatm ho chuki hai'aur main aapse yahi keh raha tha k this project is good

Maan: Haan tumhe jaisa thik lage waisa karo main abhi aata hoon

Maan leaves the conference room and heads towards the parking lot takes his car and drives back to KM

Outhouse

Dadi and Annie are taking care of geet

Geet ko hosh aa jata hai

Dadi :Geet bete aapne toh humari jaan hi le lithi'kya zaroorat thi aapko uss stool par chadne ki'agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh

Geet: Dadi aap logo k hothe hue mujhe kya ho saktha hai'aur waise bhi uss stool se girne ka toh fayda hi hua hai

Annie: Fayda..itni chot lagi hai aur tu isse fayda kehti hain

Geet: Haan chot tho lagi hai magar aap logo ka pyar bhi toh mil raha hai na'toh hua kya nahi fayda ka sauda

Dadi: Bete aapko humare pyar k liye apne aap ko chot pauchaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai'

Geet: (smiles) Ji dadi samaj gayi n thank you aap logo ne mera itna khayal rakha

Annie: Thanks hume nahi maan bhai se keh'hum toh abhi abhi aaye hai'tera khayal tho maan bhai rakh rahe the

Geet: kya Maan sir mujhe yaha lekar aayethe?

Annie: Sirf lekar hi nahi balki jab tak main wapas nahi aayi wo tera khayal bhi rakh rahe the'ye ointment bhi toh unhone hi lagaya hai tujhe'

Geet: (thinking) wo itne bhi bure nahi hai jitna k maine socha tha'

Precap: Maan: "Geet ko tho andhere se darr lagtha hai'agar uski neend beech mein se khul gayi tho kamre mein andhera dekh kar shayad wo ghabra sakthi hai'mujhe kuch karna hoga"

PART 14: PAGE 115

Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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wow
mann apne geet ki etne fikar
great
want to see how he makes her to aware of current gone
waitng for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!
Kuch loug guilty feel kar rahye hain aur unknown attraction
Cont Soon
Keep rocking
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update maan is concerned about geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Maaneet scene superb...⭐️
Precap interesting...😊
Slowly maan concerned towards geet..⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
well another superb update dear!!!
loved it...!!
so maan has started taking care of geet...!!! hmm...jo bhi hai maan apni geet ko pareshani mein nahi dekh sakta...!!
precap too good.. so maan candle leke ab geet ke room ke bahar to nahi rehne wala???😉😉
continue soon
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maan started to care about geet and she too is trying to think positive about him cool ...

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