Jaania Haania Tu Vi Sikh Ke De Dukh Sukh Pholna

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Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

This OS is written with inspiration to my all favourite song, sang by Nusrat Fateh Ali - Tere bin Nahin Lagda Dil Mera Dholna and piya re piya and the OS is about a circular love story: Karan-Arohi and Arohi-Arjun.

For those who do not know the song, here is the clip attached:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLO-rrdh4a0[/YOUTUBE]

and

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zw4iaxyGhWo[/YOUTUBE]

My OS will be as reply to this post,the song needs to be played when the OS will be read and this one will be a shot only:)

I hope you guys will enjoy it. Comments are welcome, I will post in 15 mins.

Style of writing: Lyrics of the tere bin nahin lagda has been scripted with the state of mind of Arohi and the piya re piya will be a retrospective song. It is an intense story but the songs need to be accompanied as the sequence would have been much better as seen rather than writing because it is scene full of emotion.

I will end this post by my new quote:

''Love does not fade away,it grows to new shapes.''

Edited by Eshu11 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

''Jaane Khuda Meharbaan Tere Siva'' wept Arohi's agony of her heart in the devotion of Lord Krishna. She is seeking the mercy of Lord Krishna

Kon Mera Kadi Na Howi Juda Chori Na(Tori Na) Saath Mera
''Exactly.Krishna,Is it the phase of test of the depth of my love to him or is the test of my words when I confessed to him ''I will always be by his side and walk my path of life with him.'' continued perplexed Arohi when she was looking her adorned Lord in his eyes.

Jaania... Haania... Jaania Haania Tu Vi Sikh Ke De Dukh Sukh Pholna

''Oh my Lord, when fate made me lived a year of happiness with him, why in his sorrow, he went for it alone and left me in more pain. How I wish, Krishna, that he shared what is in his mind that is making him shunning the established truth between us.''

Tere Bin, Tere Bin Nahi Lagda Dil Mera Dholna ''The pain is so real,dear Lord,if that is an illusion, then why am I feeling that without him my heart is not at peace.''

...(repeated lyrics,I did not write back,it is similar where other parts there are ...)

Puchh kaale baddlan to Seene Vich Ag Lage Lang Gaya Kayee Barsatan... ...Tur Gayo Sajna Neendran Kho Ke Jaag Ke Katiyan Rataan

''Dearest Krishna, how did I breath those air when he is away for a year. He left me when I said to him I will never ever leave his side and when in his eyes there was so much love to me then how can he just walked away without having proper communication to me. If only he could have felt that he is the special person to me where without him at my side, I felt there was something missing in the air that made me no longer smile.Oh Krishna,if he has been in that phase on his own too,I prayed he remembered that he was the one who go without answer and I am still where he left me. Oh Krishna,this pain is so real. When I work out in gym,I can feel the pain in my heart, it is so real that I have stopped fighting with myself.''

Avija Na Sata Wasta Pyaar Ae ruttan Sohniya Murr Nai Aaniya

''I prayed he realised that the time bygone will not come back and I prayed for him to understand he has to come back to me again as he knew in my eyes I am true to him, he knew he is the real him with me, then why did he go back to that life he thought he was happy with but he was not hundred percent happy. The way he was with me,I remembered,initially I took our relationship as that of the moon and the venus planet that they are together but can not bridge the gap. Now I understood and I crossed all the limits for him, why did he go away without hearing what I have to say.''

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Dil Tenu Day Bethi Khabre To Aisay Nai Karna Ey Beparwaiyaan

My life is no longer mine as I gave my heart and soul to you,dear Arjun,then if you let it wander,how will I be peaceful? How have you been so careless,babe? Is my pain not strong enough for you to hear the tears of my heart.Arjun,I love you like the girl who will walk the pathways of life with you, I love you to the extent I see you the father of my children that will be pride of their father. Don't underestimate yourself,I am still here,please for the sake of my Lord Krishna,''don't crush your feeling'' I understand that man moves on easily to the more beautiful creature but Arjun,you know as well as me that we are self image and complement as soulmates. At least give me an answer if you do not want me in your life. I will never be able not to love you.

Keetay Waday Qasmaan Tenu Yaad Kadi Nai Aayan/Ey Gila Pyaar Da Khol aake suna pyiase naina te Ker Mehrbaniyan

Oh Arjun,have you forgotten that we were best buddies and all those promises you made to me. Oh Arjun,when you asked me when we were together that if I will miss you when he will go back because no one think of him and he continues to make new friends.At that moment,the warmth of your eyes to mine,I can still feel it, and I answered you ''yes, '' How did you then forget the intensity of my eyes and you left me craving in torments and madness. Arjun, I need you because you are my life. Come back nah. Oh Krishna,what should I do? I cannot longer focus on my real goal when he has left my side abruptly and I am unable to control my thoughts. Please show me the way.

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Du_Nish

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Part 2

Arohi closed her eyes in stance and all suddenly she felt a warm hug on her. She needed rightly and as she is alone in the temple, she wants to keep the moment like this because she knows that she will feel better later. She felt the warmth in her heart but then she saw Karan when she closed her eyes.

His smile brings her warmth in her heart,The man she thought she loved more than anything else until now when she really fell in love,she realised that her relationship with Karan, Karan was the one who kept the strings of their love together. How immature she was when she thought she was the girl that is having wise talk with her man. Yes,Karan was her first love, though now she felt he was more of an experienced,as if it was the starter in her love life and Arjun is the main dish.

Yet Karan was a man who she blindly trust,they were the perfect match but it was fate only who was not with them. They shared a virtual living relationship through the instant messenger years ago and when the moment for Karan's happiness, she let him go like his parents want. Still the caring nature of Karan to her is still sweet memories. He used to call him 'sweet baby'', the chirpy Arohi and the pensive Karan. The man though was distant away,they never miss to share their moments,sometimes by watching the stars and moons together from each other's house and sometimes by fasting for each other.

It was perfect. Arohi thought she found the man of her life but circumstances wanted something differently. When she saw her dad in the jaws of death, she realised that she would never be able to leave her family for the guy she loved. She sacrificed her love rather than telling her family about him. Karan was still supportive,the way they both cried that day is still fresh in Arohi's mind.

A song Karan dedicated to her and said to her that whenever he needs her,he will be by her side,he might not be romantic but the song he dedicated to him was what he feels for her.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zw4iaxyGhWo[/YOUTUBE]

The way both were by their side without being physically present raised so many doubts in their friends' minds but still they trusted them and for that feeling Arohi had to Karan, she said to her she would never married in her life because the moments she had with him is enough for her to spend her life and Karan asked her to promise him that she would never do such a thing, she will settle to a better man than her and he will always be her shadow.

She was teenager then and for her she thought moved on meant to go for another man and she still remembered how hard was that. She still remembered she never got a man like her Karan. When Karan tried to pop on once or twice in a month to her, she still felt her hearthrobs for him and after a year she returned to Karan again.

She grew to Karan's character. She can stil remember the innocent blabber she was and now she turned to be the sweet Karan. ''Oh days''

She can still feel the way Karan was so happy when she said to him that she can not severe relationshio with him. They grew in this relationship made of love,friendship,romance,understanding,care but then now Arohi realised Karan loved her deeply and thats why she said to her that ''the real strength is when you hold it when everything seems to fall apart.'' He did it in their relationship. Time passed by and circumstances brought the topic of wedding to Karan and as he did not want to leave her, he was avoiding the topics.

Arohi for the happiness of him and his family decided to pretend that she was seeing a dude here and as they never met, they can not be more than friends. Months later Karan announced his wedding to Nandini and Arohi was really happy for him because she knew the man is so compassionate that will be happy couple for Karan and Nandini.

Their relationship ended 2 years before she met Arjun and their relationship lasted for 7 years.

Arohi still fell the warmth in her but with a realisation that Karan was patient with her. She loved Arjun as much as Karan held her. She has now respect for this man and is proud to know someone like him.By herself,she realised that he is the one then who could take care of her and she begins to feel that love is a cycle to her. She met Arjun the same standstill where she left Karan. However it is role reversal. Arjun is the sweet childlike sparkle she got attracted and Arohi resembled Karan's character now, the maturity,the patience,the chilled behaviour she has is so much inspired by Karan.

It is also true that despite nothing matched between Arjun and her,fate was with them when they met, she still feel fate is with them but Arjun is defying the fate. She still remembered in her confession she said to him that ''a little faith,a little fate and a little time will show whats best for us.'' While she has questioned the faith part, Arjun defied the fate part that made her indeed to have tough time.

Now she felt better,the pain is gone too, she feels good and open her eyes and smile to Lord Krishna saying to the Lord ''I am giving him another chance. All I wish is we meet once again and that will be enough for us to decide where we are. I know that nothing is forever lasted,just that some last longer than others but I refused to step back because of miscommunication. Oh thank you,krishna.'' she said to the Lord.

She bowed obedience to the Lord,heeded to take the panchanvrit and walked away from the temple with great zeal that she would not let Arjun to run from both her and himself. ''I love you Arjun,if you want to try me this way,on to what extent I can go for you, then I am on.''

[the end]

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow, eshu, great one

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kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow nisha , when you told me the concept I knew it will be briliant. What she learnt from karan she could use the experience so she wont loose the second chance she got in life 👏. and you paired karan with nandini the names match because that jodi is also loved. loved the songs too.

Edited by kavyasam - 14 years ago