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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

yeh toh fair baat hai baba, Nicky ke share main chand pal toh hone hi chahiye na .. bechari missed all the fun !!!😭

Originally posted by: mohini4u
aap aur aap ke couple of minutes... 😡😭

hum toh bin batiyaae reh gaye!

dil ke armaan aansoo-on mein... complete it 🤢

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Mohini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: queenofhearts01

Monz - I am honestly speechless and though this comment deserves a long and elaborate reply I am too overwhelmed to say anything other than that I am extremely honoured by the praise you have bestowed upon me and even more so by the story you have shared - it's something that I will always remember.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

😊 abhi time mila toh sukoon se aap ki comments padhi! Mohini need not receive an elaborate response from baba on any of her writes😍! your couple of lines are enough to sprinkle magic darling. Waise since thank you bolna allowed nahi hai (Yeh hamara hi rule tha na naaspeeta 😆), I will just say that aap ki har kahaani ke jagaaye hue saare ehsaas, jazbaat aur khayaalat ke saamne, hamara yeh chota sa nazraana bada hi nacheez tha. Bas remember yeh sab aap hi ke aashirwaad aur chamatkaar ka asar hai 😳😛

Apna pyar bhara haath hamare sar pe aise hi banaaye rakhiyega hamesha baba!!!!

❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗

Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago

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Mohini

@mohini4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Ooo - I LOVE this nickname Monz! 😆

Me 3 baba 😆 - Wish I could use it in more places. Suits you just so well. Until of course, the next one comes around 😉 but it seems everything I've called you so far never leaves my zubaan though new ones keep getting added - baba tinanandeshwaracharya 😳🤣

I just couldn't resist bringing the bangle power back 🤣

Yes Bangles are Arnav's significant others aren't they😆! Saari fasaad ki jad, aur sulah ki wajaah bhi! kya kehne! 🤣

I am once again astounded by the small symbolism you've picked up in HD! In my opinion, your analysis is more mesmerising than my writing! 👏

Mohini stumble on the path where she get humble and mumble forbidden jumble!

🤣🤣🤣

Keep dhak dhak-ing Monz's pyara dil 😳 I'm glad you saw that no matter how strong I portray Arnav being - he too has his own vulnerabilities 😊

You bet sweet baba! ☺️🤗 aaj kal aap hi ke afsaano aur daastaano se dil dhadakta hai! Sab aap hi ke haath mein hai na! 😳

Arnav's vulnerabilities make him a strong and powerful man Baba. If it weren't for those insecurities, he wouldn't have gotten as far as he did in life. Remember the show wali khushi, she always says, hum darte hai, lekin darke bhaagte nahi hai. Though it's not the case in this scene, a man owning up to his shortcomings is extremely attractive. Makes him all the more lovable. 😍☺️

Are you by any chance a mind reader Monz?? Or should I say antar yami 😆

😉😳 nnnaaahhhiii!!!!! My name is Mohini Bhami 🤣🤣🤣

I told you before as well never keep your emotions in control when you reply to my FF!!! I'm glad you liked Arnav's pretty intense reaction. The sole purpose of this part was to convey his view of their relationship which at times will be completely different to Khushi's - something which I will bring to the forefront more as time goes on 😃

waise bhi ab yeh kambhakht emo-sons mere control mein kahaan rahe hai. Jo karna hai wahi karte hai. 😆 waise yeh achi dictatorship hai aapki! Hum viewers ki misery na hui aap ka intoxication ho gaya 😉☺️

Hmm, don't know if I have caught on to this yet. Looking forward to this suspense probingly. Be assured I'll be looking out for it. 😈

I'm glad you enjoyed this part monz! Haha - I'm never going to let your dil stop doing dhak dhak 😆

❤️🤗 awww was that a cute line or what! Me floored!☺️😳

I wanted to show Arnav's slightly more mature side through this part. Arnav seeing Khushi as his responsibility stems not only from his love for her but also from something which will be revealed later 😉

Tch! Tch! Tch! Itching to watch some gripping upcoming drama! 😛

I thought some romance shomance was needed 😳

Indeed! Itna tadapne ke baad, romance toh banta hai boss! Khushi ki beqarari was zoro se dhadkaaofying my dil. But of course you knew that! 😉☺️

NO NO - come back to life Monz!!! 😆

"Acha?" ☺️🤣

I'm glad everyone seems to be liking Kaka so much! Shayad aage jaa ke unhe zyaada footage deni paregi humein 😆

🤣🤣🤣 itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai aap ko? Personally salary deni padti hai kaku ko kya???? 🤣🤣🤣

Kya kehne? 🤣

Oh jeej-us! 🤣

I have to say that you (and Vodku) also never fail to dissapoint me with your AMAZING comments!!

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Jhappi daalna bhool gaye na 🤣 ... chalo main add kar leti hoon... GROUP HUGG 😳

🤗🤗🤗

I couldn't have chosen something better myself 😳

☺️ too modest baba! You keeper of outworldly song collections you😈.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFZwqsgnYo4

☺️Dekhiye bas itne responses mein bhi kitna saara blushing overdose karwa liya... aap agar Arnav hoti toh aaj aap ki khushi hum se zaroor jalti 😆☺️

❤️🤗

Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago

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queenofhearts01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Recap: The sight of his home after three long years meant that Arnav forgot Kaka's earlier statement. He stepped out of the car and went to help Khushi out too. As they both walked towards the mahal, both Khushi and Arnav stopped as Arnav let his eyes take in the sight of his home for as long as his heart wished. _________________________________________________________________
Part 5A

'Taqdeer ne kahin likha na ho zindagi main koi toofan, pyar se hi beethe Humari Daastan'

Arnav's reaction to seeing his home after so many years brought tears to Khushi's eyes and just as one pearl of emotion rolled down Khushi's cheek, it fell into Arnav's outstretched hand. Khushi turned towards Arnav and saw him shake his head slightly and just smile. He then took her hand and they both made their way to the front door.

As they both came to a stop, the heavy oak doors opened as if right on cue. Arnav's eyes welled up as he saw his mother dressed in a deep purple sari that he had sent her a few months ago. Arnav's mother - Savita, took in the sight of her young son standing before her after three excrutiatingly long years and also could not stop the moist pools of emotions from forming in her eyes.

Arnav and Khushi both stepped forward as Arnav proceeded to seek his mother's blessings by touching her feet. Savita smiled and ran her hand lovingly through her son's hair and blessed him from the bottom of her heart. Arnav then surprised Savita by engulfing her in a massive hug.

'Aapki bahut yaad ayi Ma.' Arnav said, his voice thick with emotion.

Savita smiled and tightened her hold on her son,

'Yaad toh mujhe bhi bahut ayi Arnav. Par ab tu aagaye hain na, ab mein tujhe kahin nahi jaane doongi - samjhe?'

'Mein toh pehle bhi nahin jaana chahta tha Ma.' Arnav said looking straight into his mother's eyes.

A guilty expression took over Savita's face as she tenderly stroked Arnav's right cheek,

'Jaanti hoon beta, main jaanti hoon.'

Just then Savita saw Khushi bend down to touch her feet. Savita immediately pursed her lips and grabbed Khushi by the shoulders before she could reach her feet.

'Maine tujhse kitni baar bola hai, beti pair nahi choothi!'

Khushi smiled and held onto Savita's hand,

'Kya betiyon ko aashirwaad ki zarurat nahi hoti Ma?'

Savita smiled before lovingly placing her hand on Khushi's head,

'Ma ka aashirwaad humesha beti ke saath hota hai. Maangne ki zarurat nahi hoti. Aur maangna hi hai toh gale lag kar mangna theek hai!'

Both women laughed ad hugged each other as Arnav looked on - his face a picture of bliss as he saw the heart warming interaction between Khushi and his mother.

Just as he was about to tease the two, his Mami's voice came floating through the hallway.

'Arre Arnav beta! Tum aagaya!' His Mami screamed and pushed past Khushi to trap Arnav in a hug.

Arnav grimaced and cheekily replied,

'Mami, main yahan karah hoon toh aagaya hoon na? Yeh kaisa savaal hua?'

Everyone laughed at Arnav's cheeky retort and his Mami lightly smacked his arm before going to stand by Savita.

'Chalo chalo Arnav andar aajao ab. Apna daiyaan per pehle rakna.'

Savita then turned to Khushi and said,

'Khushi tu bhi Arnav ke saath andar aa.'

'Arre Didi, kyun apshagun ko nyota de rahi hain aap? Khushi apna daiyaan per pehle toh nahi rak sakti na.' Mami exclaimed, her voice conveying her deep dislike for Khushi.

Arnav and his mother immediately looked at his Mami - or Manorma. Anger immediately taking over both their expressions.

'Manorma!' Savita scolded.

'Didi - maine kuch jhoot toh nahi kaha na? Arnav beta itne dinon baad lauta hai. Aisa mauke par kuch ooch neech na ho isliye maine-'

'Mami please. Kuch mat kahiye. Khushi kabhi bhi, kisi bhi tarah mere liye apshagun nahi ho sakti.' Arnav said, rage dripping from his every word.

Meanwhile Khushi had been looking towards the ground, wishing that the tears that had pooled in her eyes would not fall. Just as she felt the tears threaten to run down her cheeks, she felt Arnav's hand grab her arm.

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Okay my lovlies! Joote mat marna - I know this part is very short! But this is all I have time for at the moment! I will get 5B to you tomorrow!!

Love Always

Tina

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Edited by queenofhearts01 - 14 years ago

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ayesha786xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Thanks for the lovely update I'm hooked :) can't wait for tomorows part! X

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Zeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Tina!!!!

Love the update...too short though!!😉😉

But it was great nonetheless. I love the affection Arnav shows towards Khushi. The bond Savita shares with Arnav and Khushi is really lovely too.

Your FF's are pure magic hun, so keep up the fantastic job!!!!

Really looking forward to the update hun!!!

😊

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sharneil92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

ooohhh!!!! how lovely!!!!! that was absolutely beautiful... poor khushi... i feel for her... and mamiji toh... let's not talk about her..😆 but it's so refreshing to see arnav in a new light... he seems more concerned, happy, etc etc.. basically more emotional!😆

all in all, it was lovely! i await the next one eagerly!😳

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queenofhearts01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: ayesha786xxx
Thanks for the lovely update I'm hooked :) can't wait for tomorows part! X

Thank you Ayesha!! 😃

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queenofhearts01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Tina!!!!
Love the update...too short though!!😉😉

But it was great nonetheless. I love the affection Arnav shows towards Khushi. The bond Savita shares with Arnav and Khushi is really lovely too.

Your FF's are pure magic hun, so keep up the fantastic job!!!!

Really looking forward to the update hun!!!

😊

Thank you so much Zeba! 😃

Glad you liked Savita! 😊

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queenofhearts01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: sharneil92
ooohhh!!!! how lovely!!!!! that was absolutely beautiful... poor khushi... i feel for her... and mamiji toh... let's not talk about her..😆 but it's so refreshing to see arnav in a new light... he seems more concerned, happy, etc etc.. basically more emotional!😆
all in all, it was lovely! i await the next one eagerly!😳

Thank you so much! 😃

Glad you enjoyed it - even though it was so short!!