=Silent whispers= (MaanEET)updt ch11 pg 65 14sept - Page 12

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Priya...thanks 4 da reply! Please update soon n pm wen u do! Btw wen will u update prejudice??

Chapter 4

"Ouch!" cried Radz as she collided with Geet.

"Geet!... sambhal ke chala kar yar… vaise mujhe ache se pata tha .. that u'll be here only.. do you even know we were waiting for you from so long? " said Radz getting angry.

"ohh I m sorry… where is Sheila?" Geet asked looking around.

"Vo chali gayi…. She had some work… chalo ab hum bhi chale…?" Radz said.

Han… yar.. I m really sorry.. mujhe ye book issue krvani thi bass isiliye…" Geet said in a low tone.

"yeah.. yeah.. I know …tumhe koi na koi book issue krvani rehti hai…" Radz said in frustration.

"radz… ab tum bhi Sheila ki tarah bol rahi ho?" Geet said complaining.

" uff… nahi yar… achha chal." Radz said smiling.

Then both walked down the stairs along the basket ball court.

"Come lets sit here, BTW I have to show you something…. U know what… I have written lyrics…yesterday… have a look." Geet took out a paper from the bag and handed it to radz.

"um…." Radz read. and many emotions played upon her face. Like surprise, happiness, and excitement.

All she could utter was "WOW".

"Geet you write so well… its beautiful yar..." Radz said all excited. She had never knew this facet of her best friend.

"Hey Geet..." Yash shouted, he was in basket ball court when he saw Geet and Radz.

"Yeah" Geet stopped kept the lyric paper on the book she brought from the library and kept it on bench and looked at him in question.

"Please pass the bag…" Yash requested.

"Umm…" she looked here and there in confusion.

"Geet" Yash exclaimed in frustration, she looked at him in question. "About turn" he said.

Then she located the bag and threw it to him," here you go."

"Thanks" he said and jogged back to the field.

Geet then turned around and looked at Radz whose cheeks were already red.

"Radz … kya hua aise chup chup kyu hp?" Geet asked.

"nahi… nothing" saying this she turned away her face from Geet.

"Radz … I know there is something wrong.." then suddenly she turned back and looked at the boys playing basket ball.." no way… is it… I mean you like some one?" she asked with surprise and excitement.

"n..nahi… toh.." Radz struggled.

" I mean you really like some one… who? " Geet asked without giving any notice to her words.

"Geet… I have to go" Radz started walking.

"is it Yash?" Geet said with excitement and held her hand which prevented her from moving away.

Radz looked at her in astonishment and then a slight blush curled up her cheeks. She nodded.

"Omg omg… I just can't believe it yar…." Geet said in excitement.

"Hey Radhika.. I want some notes from u... The poetry notes... Can you bring them from me tomorrow?" Yash's voice came from back.

Before any body could say anything Radz ran out side the campus towards the gate. And Geet followed. They both stopped near the gate all panting.

"kya hua? Aise bhagi…. Vo notes ke liye hi toh pooch raha tha.." Geet said teasing her…

"chalo ghar chale… kafi der ho gayi hai.." Radz said changing the topic… they started walking home.. but they have reached half way when.."OMG…. Radz.. my book… I left it there in school." Geet panicked.

"Ohh… chalo lets go… back then" Radz said.

"nahi… tum ghar jao.. I'll bring it myself." Geet said assuring.

"u sure right?" Radz asked.

"yeah." Geet said and with that she ran back.

She reached the school. But now there was no one. The school was empty. She quickly reached the place the bench where she had kept the book. But to her utter surprise there was a boy sitting reading the same book… she looked at the book from far.. then she noticed it was her book.

She came near him.

"Excuse me. This is my book." Geet said.

"Ohh... its your book." Saying that he gave her the book back. Then without waiting he started walking.. and Geet too turned towards the stairs and when she had climbed the few only she heard some one calling her.

"Geet Handa" he called out

She turned toward him in confusion.

"the original lyrics are better than yours" he said and chuckled... and started walking away.

DAMN… her mouth opened in a big O shape … then she quickly checked her book then looked at the lyric paper… and then shouted at the top of her voice. "This is original.. I have written by my self."

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"idiot…. Gawd! That stupid jerk"

This was all she could think.. how dare he read her personal lyric and call her a cheater.

She sat in her room mouthing a million abuses to Him.

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Precap is a surprise…

Thats all for today…

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priya

Brilliant Parts!!!

Oh nice faceoff (:
luvd his entry.
Tips for dating always include the tip of doing sumthing strange in the first meeting so u can not easily b forgotten. As a writer, I luvd the way u came up with the line of their first meet !

so now I'm wondering if maan was also searching for her all this while .. But then geet always
issues books after his turn so she can c the card with his name not vice versa unless he has a habbit
of reading his favorite books over n over ... ;)
thanx for two updates in a row... I wud luv to read how the story unfolds.

Originally posted by: -dia-

Brilliant Parts!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Is that guy is MSK???

Part 3

awesome

nice way to build up the suspense

Part 4

superb n pretty awesome...

I think Its Maan ...n he entered ur story!!!!!!!!!!!

i have fallen in love wid dis ff...😳😳😳really very very exciting yaar...👏👏👏
tum ne maan ka ek jhalak toh dikha diya😳😳 lekin poore ke poore intro kab milega yaar...😳
n i am in love wid ur FF...😆😆 amazing ...👏👏i think am really reading something new dese days...😊

wow lovely updates.. am sure the guy is Maan...

AWESOME PARTS N THNKS 4 PM