newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 49

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
mission mannet is superb
so dadim knows who is riche rich
great
i think so they come near each other


love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd dear
amazing
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa


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Posted: 14 years ago
i love u dadi...😉😉😉
great update dear... luking 4 more...👏👏👏
n get well soonnn...😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg...dadi knew everything...thatsy she did this...mission maaneet...wow dadi...u r all set to find a bride for ur akroo pota...continue soon n thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update dear ...😊.
Maaneet mission superb..👏
Precap interesting...tat to geet telling dusht danav👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update piya thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome.. wow dev, dadi n annie playing cupid... how sweet.. cant wait for the next one..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Piya,

sorry for being late with the analysis... I was busy with my school...

The story begins with two entirely different personalities... Maan Singh Khurana and Geet Handa...😛😛
Anni...waiting for her best friend Geet... telling dadi how appropriate Geet would be for Maan... and her desire that Geet should also become her bhabhi...her trust that sirf Geet Maan ko badal sakti hai and the praises she speaks in front of Dadi... the way she expresses that Geet is not only intelligent and talented but also very beautiful...😛😛
Meanwhile, Geet comes out of the train and aww!! she is described so sweet by you Piya...😛😛
OMG... Geet ka cell phone... sahi time pe coma mein chali gayi🤣🤣 searching for telephone booth...
Maan's car bumps into Geet... hey babaji...aaj to Maan ki khair nahi😆 and on top of that... Geet's dress gets spoiled... wow... ab mazaa aayega

Geet thinking Maan will apologise... but he's MSK after all... how can he do so... Maan thinking Geet trying to create a scene by over-reacting... Geet all aag-babula😡😡 lol! Maan ka ghamand... Geet ka super duper cool reaction...😛😛 My favourite part... Mr. BHK...🤣🤣 still rofling... Maan signs the check and Geet tears it into pieces... Geet's long speech to Mr. BHK...😆 and then... omg slaps... bechara BHK... wow...!!! awesome yr...

Geet reaches KM... intro to dadi...dadi impressed... there Maan reaches office where Pinky is talking about her new flat... Oops... BHK again... Maan😡😡 and he leaves... bechara richi rich...
Geet narrates the entire thing to Anni and dadi...
Dadi confirmed that only Geet can change Maan... Dev returns... annie greets him... and the Maaneet meet yet again... but first in darkness yet again... beautifully described... Geet scared of darkness falls in Maan's arms and both of them have a cute Mahi moment... and again light aane pe BIG BADA BOOM...!!! Geet explodes and so does Maan... Both Maaneet feel that there is some feeling that is growing in them... Geet gave so many names to maan on a single day... 😳😆😉

Now... Maan gets evil...😈... plans to revenge on Geet and hires her in KC...under special contract... Geet plans to take away his attitude and they sign the contract...

Anni has a misunderstanding that Maan took Geet to talk alone and she discusses this with Dev... uff!! what a confusion...

Maan makes it clear that Geet cannot stay in KM for long...hmm!!!
Geet self talking... i love her independence...

Geet decides to leave KM and take a house on rent... i like it... Dadi and Annie not liking it...planning something else... wow dadi has a nice plan... Geet shifting to Outhouse and then paying rent... wow dadi...!!! dadi cool...!! dadi happy with the fact that Geet is always independent...

Mission Maaneet... thanks... not Dev-Geet confusion... dev seems nice guy...dadi tells dev that richi rich is none other than Maan anni-dev shocked... they plan the make Maan and Geet come together anyhow... outhouse near Maan's room and Dev's constant eye on Maaneet... wow...

The way you've brought up all the characters specially of Dadi, Geet and Maan is hats off... Dev is not a devil here... that's lovely... liked it... Maan too arrogant...wanna see more of this MSK... ahem ahem... BHK😆😆

Luv,
Shivangi
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mission Maaneet is here...wow I am so excited...bring it on baby
today's update set the tone of upcoming track...seriously ab to mujhe lagta hai i also should have added a cool dadi in my FF too...i love her yaar...mwuuah

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