SS-You made me what I am (SR) Last part-Page 84

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is a short story on Siddhima/SR which starts from where the show ended. All the characters are the same.

Part 1

Though he smiled and showed a thumbs up to her, it was killing him inside. Only he knew what and how he was feeling. He felt so alone so left out and so out of place. He thought why at all he came to India? He cursed the moment he met her at the airport. He wanted to rewind everything, forget everything. He wished there was a Ctrl+Z in his life with which he could delete all what had happened in his life in the previous one year.

But no he knew that would not happen. He knew he could not go back to the past. He had to accept the fact that all this indeed happened to him and he was brutally hurt by the one whom he trusted more than himself. Trust! A mockery was made out of his trust.

"Sid!" called out Yuvi pushing him out of his thoughts.

"Huh.. Ya.. I'm sorry. Have to go now. Got some work. Will call you. Bye"

Sid hurriedly rushed out of that place, went to the parking lot, searched for his keys and started the car. He didn't know where he was going neither did he know where he had to go. He was driving like crazy in the night on the lonely isolated roads at full speed. His thoughts were also racing in the same speed. He remembered how she told him the truth, how she confessed to someone that she always loved that person and not him, how she assured to always stay with him and finally how he let her go. These thoughts were coming back again and again to him how much ever he tried not to think about them n HER.

He somehow reached his pent house and frantically searched for the keys. When he stepped inside again memories started flooding him. His thought went back to the time when he stopped her from leaving the house, when he carried her inside from the hospital, the funny gruhapravesh. This brought a faded smile on his face which immediately vanished seeing her photo. He was angry and sad at the same moment. So angry that he wanted to go and punch someone real hard and so sad that he wanted to cry on someone's shoulder. He had tears in his eyes and at the same time a determination.


"That's it! I'm not gonna think about her anymore. Neither will I ever talk to her or anyone related to her. Its THE END now. Everything is over forever. She will never come back to me and now I wish that she never comes back at all. Yes! Now I'm gonna live MY life. A life without any compromise, rules, humiliation and a life free of her."


Then he remembered someone who's life changed like his because of THE dreadful incident. He took out his mobile and pressed 3 and the green button. The phone was showing Dialing Shilpa..


There was no answer from the other side. Sid dropped the idea of calling back and started packing his things. He made sure he was not carrying any of "her" things with him even by mistake. He wanted to get out of that place immediately. He already booked the flight tickets to Hyderabad the previous day and informed his family that he was shifting there citing some reasons which were just made at that moment. He didn't want them to know anything that happened here.


"Now I'm going to start a new life in a new place. Far away from everyone" He said to himself with firmness and wiped away the tears falling from his eyes.

Just then he heard the doorbell. He wondered who it was at this time and walked towards the door. He was a bit surprised seeing the person standing in front of him.


Part 2
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44351779


Okay since this is the first time I'm writing something I need to know how it is. So please do comment. I know its short but comment.. šŸ˜†

Now you might be wondering why and how all this started (my writing). Blame DJ coz he was d one who wanted me 2 write something and I did.šŸ¤”

So do let me know how it went and if you want it to be continued. I'll be happy if you don't want me to also coz u know I'm a super nikammi and I hate to do work.. šŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res 😳

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Nammiii 😲

This is beautiful . I loved this part <3

Loved how u've described Sid's emotions , I could actually feel his pain :| and thanx for reminding me how much I hate Maiya for what she did to Sid :x:x

Hmmm I think Shilpuu is at the door :S

Continue soon nikammi

PS - I love DJ bro for this šŸ˜† showering rose petals on him šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

PPS - one more FF to give dhamki's buhuhaaa šŸ˜†
Edited by -Harshu- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nami 😲

I am gonna be bck...nw Zzz šŸ˜› but continue nikammi n I lub DJ 4 this <33 LoL

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Nami 😲

where have u been hiding...why have u been hidingšŸ˜”šŸ˜†

This is amazing yaar!!! great start...I love how u described Sid's emotions...I can so feel them and my love for Sid and my hatred for maiya has increased more now...I still can't believe how badly she hurt our Sid😔

But now Sid's gonna start afresh...a new life...with his love which his maiya only..so I'm looking forward how she gets back in his life...plzz torture her A LOT 😈

and whose at the door... Maiya?? Hormaan 🤢

continue soon nikammi...yaayyy another SR FF matlab another FF to give dhamkis in 😈
Edited by indian_beauty - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Namii this is awesomešŸ‘

I just loved how u wrote this and it sounded so real to me! Im again feeling soo bad for Sid and im hating Ridz maiya even more for doing this to Sid..

For a moment while reading this i thought it was gonna be abt SidShi since you said he dialed her number but nevermindšŸ˜† I would love it if you start another FF abt SidShišŸ˜†

Im just waiting for you to continue nikammi.. i mean you have too.. And i wonder who came to his housešŸ˜•

Eagerly waiting for you to continue.. I lob DJ for thisšŸ˜†
Edited by -Vidz- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nami😲😲😲
Sweetie where have you been hiding your writing talent!
This is such a lovely start and Im so happy you decided to write.😳
Now coming to the update...I hated the end scene in DMG. As for AR...they deserve each other and I hope they live unhappily ever after. They are the most selfish couple I have ever seen and thank goodness Sid is rid of them.
Now, take Sid on an awesome journey and find him the love of his life...and if it is Ridhimma after all, then have her chase him!😳
Looking forward to the next part sweetie.šŸ¤—
P.S Are you going to bring the girl in your dabba.šŸ˜†
Edited by -Farrah- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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even i liked SR than AR... do continue..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DEEEJJAAAYYY hahahaahah THANK YOUUU forrr pushing Nami to write this!!!

Yayyy another SR FF!! I am literally dancing out here!!! šŸ˜† And LOVED the start!!! 😳
"You made me what i am" enchanting title i wd say!!! šŸ˜‰ Sooo looking forward to the next part!! Do update soon!!! and lol THAAANKKK YOUUU for listening to DJ!!! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I told you its gonna be a dhamaka opening 🄳


Nami I always knew you could write well ... and I am sure you are gonna do a fantastic job with this SS ... and I am going to reap all the benefits of it ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†


All the readers are gonna Loveee me for pushing you to write it ...

I am already thinking I should change my name from DJ to Kanaiya ...


🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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All I see is shocked faces 🤣🤣

And I told u ppl dat if der any chappals, tomatoes n eggs den throw them at DJ.. Any compliments den m gonna take them 😈🤣

Okay now officially Thank you DJšŸ¤— for dis coz ab tak I saw positive responses




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Posted: 14 years ago
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namiiišŸ¤—
gr8 wrk re i didn noe u write so wellšŸ˜‰
no chappals 4 u šŸ˜† but muahhh 4 writing
thnx 4 d pm n continue soon samjhišŸ˜‰

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