Mayur FF |Ibaadat| Epilogue Pg#77 [26-Sep-11] - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
nice..
pls continue soon..
pls add me 2 ur pm list,..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
phew..!! finally edited ma comment on page 3...!!

sry for taking it so long..!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pearl10

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nautanki...🤗🤗🤗

wohhhaaa...congo for ur new ff...🥳

i totally loved the CS...especially nupusi's...!!

mayu is canosava...😲 i love to read love story of bad guys...its a treat.😃

lage raho nautanki...on writing...!!!

the banner is so beautiful...!!😃

i love to read ur stories...!!

keep writing..!!😃

payal_


You commented?! I hope I'm not dreaming! Phew!😆
Anyways I'm glad that you liked the CS!😳
Yeah our Mayu is a play-boy.. I was blushing imaging him like that..☺️
Banner credit completely goes to Maria (maria-soniarti)..😊
Aww thanks a lot!😳
Will continue soon sweetheart!😃

And thanks to everyone for your overwhelming response! I'm so glad that you all liked my FF! Thanks a ton!😳
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
part 1-

ommgg..nupur started taking alcohol and drugs...how disgusting..! but i can understand her pain and POV. so much guilt in her heart and it torture her like hell.

mayank...kitni GF hain uski?? such a bad guy...!!😡😆

beautiful part!!

waiting for their first meeting !!😃

payal_
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: pearl10

part 1-


ommgg..nupur started taking alcohol and drugs...how disgusting..! but i can understand her pain and POV. so much guilt in her heart and it torture her like hell.

mayank...kitni GF hain uski?? such a bad guy...!!😡😆

beautiful part!!

waiting for their first meeting !!😃

payal_


@red large-sized font- This line seriously made me ROFL🤣
Glad you liked it, Payal!😳
Thanks a lot!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely concept..loving the updates...continue soon..😊
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Greetings to all my dear readers..🤗

Thank you so much for such an overwhelming response..😳..You all have made me sooo happy..😃..I am glad that you all liked my FF and wanna read more..😛..So here's the third update of "Ibaadat"..😊..Hope you all will like it..😳

Scroll down and have lots of fun..😉

-Bidushy❤️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Banner Courtesy: Maria (maria-soniarti)

Chapter 2 - Hui Dono Ki Mulaakat

Mayank was sitting on the couch and watching TV.. He was irritated.. He continuously kept changing the channels because of his being irritate..

"Tina, kitni der lagaayogi? Jaldi aao naa!", Mayank shouted in an annoying tone..

"Coming darling!", shouted Tina from inside the room..

Mayank annoyingly said to himself, "Yeh kiske chakkar mein phas gaya yaar! Isse acchi toh woh Ria hai."

"Kuch kaha tumne?", said Tina in a suspicious tone..

Mayank nervously turned back and said, "Arey nahin nahin!"

Tina pointed her index finger toward Mayank and said, "Dekho..tum.."

Cutting Tina off in her talk, Mayank grabbed Tina's finger and said in a flirtatious tone, "By the way, you are looking hot today!"

Tina blushingly smiled and said, "Thank you!"

Mayank smirked and thought in his mind, "Tareef kya kardo, yeh ladkiya toh usse hi pighal jaati hai.."

"So chale?", Mayank asked in a soft tone..

Tina nodded in a yes.. They held hands of each other and went out..


Everyone was dancing and enjoying to the hell in the disco.. The lights were dim.. Mayank was dancing very closely with Tina.. Both were enjoying a lot..

"Mayank, mere liye ek drink le aao, please.", shouted Tina as there was loud music.

"Abhi laata hoon.", shouted Mayank and walked toward the bar.

Mayank came to the bar and ordered for a drink.. Just then the music stopped.. Mayank astonishingly turned around and saw DJ in the middle of the disco with a mike in his hands..

"Hey guys! Well, today is the 2nd anniversary of our disco.. So we have arranged a special performance for all of you..", said the DJ excitedly..

Everyone clapped smilingly and gathered around the dance floor.. The performance started and all were whistling.. A girl stood in the middle with her face turning at the back.. She wore a black sari with silver glittering embroidery and a sleeveless blouse.. She was looking hot without any doubt..

Jhoomka Girade, Jo Mila Le Agar Woh Nazar Se Nazar Mitade
Nachke Dikhade, Sabki Dhadhkan Bhi Kadam Se Kadam Milade
Lehron Se Chal Ke Jaal Bicha Ke,Dil Ko Ye Behaal Banade
Saare Deewane Maane, (Na Dekhi Koi Aisi Girl ) - 2
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl
In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl

She turned back and she was Nupur.. She moved her waist, gave some sexy thumkas, twirled around and matched her steps along with the song..

My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl''
Pade Kamar Pe Jo Nazar, Saare Saapnon Mein Rang Bhar Jaaye
Jo Tham Le Woh Haath Toh, Haske Hi Aashiq Mar Jaayein
Dhoondon Jahan Mein Chahe Kahin, Na Tumko Milegi Koi Aisi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl''

Mayank stared at Nupur as if he was impressed with her.. He was enjoying her performance a lot.. There was something special in Nupur which made Mayank attracted toward her.. That was maybe because of his flirtatious attitude..

Jahan Jahan Bhi Jau Main, Saari Nazrein Toh Peche Peche Aiye
Ruku Zara Mein Jo Yahan, Thandi Thandi Saari Saase Tham Jaye
Sabki Nigahon Ne Hai Kaha, Ke Khwaabon Mein Hai Dekhi (Meri Jaisi Girl ) - 2
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl,My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl,My Desi Girl

The boys gathered around Nupur and danced with her.. Mayank stood at the bar counter in a still position and kept staring at this angelic beauty.. "Hot!", he said with a mischievousness in his voice and his way of looking at Nupur..

Jhoomka Girade, Jo Mila Le Agar Woh Nazar Se Nazar Mitade
Nachke Dikhade, Sabki Dhadhkan Bhi Kadam Se Kadam Milade
Lehron Se Chaal Ke Jaal Bicha Ke, Dil Ko Yu Behaal Banade
Saare Deewane Maane, (Na Dekhi Koi Aisi Girl ) - 2
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Ain't Nobody Like My Desi Girl
Dekhi Lakh Lakh Pardesi Girl, Sab Toh Soni N Saadi Desi Girl
Who's The Hottest Girl In The World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
Thumka Lagaike She'll Rock Your World, My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl
My Desi Girl, My Desi Girl, Girl Girl Girl Girl''

Mayank was still standing at the bar with a glass of drink in his hand and staring at Nupur.. The performance ended and all clapped.. Mayank just smiled in a flirtatious and mischievous way.. "Too hot!", he said again looking at Nupur. Tina witnessed Mayank's attitude for Nupur and got furious.. She went to Mayank and said, "Mayank!" Mayank didn't respond.. He was gazing at Nupur and admiring her hotness.. "MAYANK!", Tina shouted. Mayank jerked and came back to his senses..

"Kya hua?", he said annoyingly..

"Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho, Mayank?", said Tina sobbingly..

"Please stop irritating me and just go!", said Mayank in anger and left from there..

Tina cried and went away..


Mayank was searching for Nupur in the whole disco.. Suddenly, his eyes spotted her at the bar.. She was wearing something else now. It was a black half-sleeved dress up to her knees. She was looking damn hot, Mayank thought..

Mayank went to Nupur and sat beside her.. He stared at her smilingly and thought, "I should start the conversation."

"You dance really well!", said Mayank in a way of complementing Nupur.

"Did you just said something to me?", asked Nupur while drinking alcohol..

"Yep! I said that you dance really well..", said Mayank again..

"Oh thank you!", said Nupur smilingly and took a sip of her drink..

"So you are a dancer, right?", asked Mayank curiously..

Nupur smilingly said holding her glass of drink in her hands, "I'm both singer and dancer.. And performing in these kinda parties is my profession!"

Mayank smiled and said with an expression as if he was interested in her, "Oh! That sounds cool.. So, what's your name?"

"Nupur.. Nupur Bhushan!", said Nupur while still busy with her drink..

Mayank expressed in a way as if he liked Nupur's name.. He extended his hand and said smilingly, "Hi! I'm Mayank Sharma!"

Nupur stared at Mayank's hand weirdly for a moment and then shook hands with him.. Just then, someone called her from the dance floor, "NUPUR!"

Nupur looked at the dance floor, then at Mayank and told him, "My friends are calling me! I gotta go!"

"Sure!", said Mayank smilingly..

Nupur went to the dance floor and started dancing with the guys.. Mayank stared at Nupur and observed each of her activity.. She was madly dancing and enjoying, he thought.. But the truth was something else.. She was dancing really abnormally because of the drugs' effect.. Mayank was unaware of that.. He stared at her and smiled mischievously.. "Isko resist kar pana mushkil hain!", said Mayank and smirked..

Mayank went to the dance floor and stood near Nupur.. Their backs were facing each other.. Mayank was dancing with some other girls.. Mayank stared at Nupur from a corner of his eye.. Just then, he saw that the guys Nupur was dancing with were misbehaving with her.. He got angry and stood in between Nupur and those boys like a shield.. The boys didn't care and went on dancing with some other girls.. Mayank took Nupur out of the crowd of the dance floor and made her sit at the bar.. Nupur was not in her senses..

"Hey! Tum theek toh ho? Hey!", said Mayank while jerking Nupur's face holding her cheeks.. Nupur wasn't responding and Mayank was confused what to do.. He turned his face to the waiter at the bar and asked pointing at Nupur, "Yeh akeli aayi hain?"

"Sir, yeh madam toh har roz akeli aati hai aur bohot jyada piti hai.. Har roz yeh kisi ladke ke saath chali jaati hai.. Par aaj shayad woh ladka yaha aaya nahin hain..", said the waiter..

Mayank listened to the waiter and became worried.. Suddenly, his expressions changed into annoyance and he thought, "Main isske liye itna pareshaan kyun ho raha hoon? Strange!"

Then he became worried again and thought, "Par isse aise toh nahin chod sakta.. Main thoda bura zarur hoon par itni toh insaaniyat hain mujh mein ki iski help karoon.."

Thinking that, he carried Nupur in his arms and went out of the disco..

Mayank made Nupur sit in his car.. He started the car and said to himself, "Iske ghar ka address toh main jaanta nahin hoon, iss liye isse apne ghar hi le jaata hoon." Saying that, he drove home..


Mayank carried Nupur to a room in his house and made her lie down on the bed.. He pulled the blanket on her, turned off the light and walked out..

He went to his room and sat on his rocking chair.. He had the flashbacks of Nupur in his mind.. "Isse jyada hot ladki maine aaj tak nahin dekhi!", he said and smirked..


Precap:
Nupur was thrown out of her hostel and Mayank took her to his home..😉


The song used in the update is "Desi Girl" from the movie "Dostana"..😃 I hope you all liked the update and MaYur's meeting.. Waiting for your valuable feedbacks.. Please don't forget to press the LIKE tab.. Thanks..😳

-Bidushy❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bidushy
awesom update dear
loved Mayur meeting
do continue soon
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Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

Bidushy

awesom update dear
loved Mayur meeting
do continue soon


Glad you liked it.. Maria!🤗😳
Thanks a ton for your awesome feedback!😃
Will continue soon!😊

-Bidushy❤️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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