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aashuuu 🤗...kaisi hai???I went out in the evening so couldn't call u...kal baat karenge... 😛
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Thanks a ton buddies for all your sweet comments and apologizes for not being able to reply to the comments so far... will do it tomorrow😳
here comes the next part 😳...
the flashback here is a random happy flashback😳
P.S.: Will send the PMs in the morning😊
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Part 37

He watched as Adi rushed to Geet' he watched as the elderly lady sitting beside her stroked her forehead and mumbled calming words to soothe her' he watched as she broke into hysteric pleas' he watched as she sat bolt upright before throwing herself into that lady's arms and sobbing incessantly' but when he tried to move towards her his legs failed him. Everything was running past him in frenzy as her cry echoed in his ears, "Get off me'" the inference of her words was hitting him like a pile of bricks and world was crashing down around him. He had a vague idea of what that might mean but as his mind tried to formulate the thoughts, his stomach churned and he felt bile rising up his throat. Every time his heart took a beat, he felt the stab' each breath was scorching his insides.

With great difficulty, Maan attempted to raise his hand towards her as he tried to grab the fragments of his sanity that was fast slipping away from his grip. It was then that she raised her head and saw him. He watched as her expressions changed from grief to shock to horror as she looked at him with wide eyes. And the look on his face conveyed that he had heard it all' she froze. As Adi and Pammi became aware of his presence, Pammi grew uncomfortable while Adi simply looked away. Maan's eyes drifted to the ground as he silently left the room. Geet kept staring at his back till the door of the room blocked her vision. Fresh tears fell on her cheeks as she mourned over the broken pieces of her dreams and her love.

The moment he stepped out of the room, he inhaled sharply as he stumbled and placed his hand over the wall to regain his balance. He couldn't face her at this moment. He didn't have the strength to look into her eyes. He shut his eyes and saw the Geet he had fallen for. He remembered their first meeting in the dark corridor of Khurana Estate and the memory brought a smile to his face' he remembered her child-like innocence and her cute antics' he remembered her endearing smile' her deep twinkling eyes' the purity of her soul' her contagious laughter' how could this happen to her? How could this happen to his Geet? How could life be so cruel and ruthless to the one person who loved and cared for anyone and everyone. The girl who won over the hearts of each and every employee at Khurana Estate' the girl who would greet the security guy every morning with tulips' why she? His face contorted in lethal mix of pain, horror and rage as it finally dawned upon her that his Geet was sexually assaulted.
The door of her ward opened and then shut and he turned to see a pained and enraged Adi slamming his fist into the wall. Drawing a deep breath he moved forward and placed a hand on his shoulder. Adi instantly turned to him and then turned his head away. He removed his glasses and wiped out the tear that escaped his eye. "That man destroyed my sister, sir" Adi said with difficulty and Maan's hands balled into fists as his jaws clenched and he found uncontrolled fury and anger emancipating through the core of his being. "Who was he?" he asked through gritted teeth. Fire cascading through the dark pits of his eyes as it threatened to burn everything in his way. Adi was too overwhelmed by his sister's pain and so he lost the gravity of Maan's expressions as he shook his head and replied, "He was her fiance." Adi gulped the lump in his throat as he refused to divulge into the details of Geet's ordeal while Maan clenched his fist so tight that his knuckles grew white, however Adi was quick to add, "Yeh toh achcha hua ki... Geet's taya ji reached in time... or else..." Adi shook his head unable to complete the sentence while Maan shut his eyes as the ghastly details began to absorb him in its obscurity. He knew he was on the verge of breakdown and he knew he needed sometime to gather his thoughts or more precisely to decide upon his course of action. He fought back tears as he peeped through the glass door of the hospital ward to see Geet who by now was lying back and had her eyes shut. "Adi Call me if you need me for anything. And let me know when Geet is discharged. I need to sort a few things" Maan said determined as he rushed off.
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Arjun was seething. Wild emotions conjured his thoughts as he remembered how close she was. She was right in front of him and then she tricked him. "Damn you Geet!" he cursed her as desire to conquer her welled inside him and so did his obsession to make her his flare. If only he would have got his hands on her once he would have taught her lesson for playing such childish games of hide and seek with him. He had already informed the detective agency of the place where he had met her. The fact that the place was close to the hotel had not gone unnoticed by him. And he had also seen Vicky in the mall and had managed to hide himself in time. But he was sure about one thing that the rift he had created between his prey and her savior could never be surpassed. He was more than sure that Geet had not reached Maan yet coz he knew if Maan had an inkling of his little devious plan he wouldn't have spared him at all. Over all he was enjoying this thrill. His little game had started treading dangerous path but that didn't deter him as the lure of the goal was more overwhelming than all.

Just then his phone buzzed and the minute he saw the caller id flashing Naintara's name he disconnected the call. He had told her he would return in two days but now that was out of question. The phone buzzed again and it was his father this time. Grudgingly he took the call, "Yes Dad" he said without any interest and then within moments his expressions changed from disinterested to charred, "I told you I have some work to accomplish in Banglore... (pause) engagement agle hafte hai toh phir ab is puja ki kya zaroorat hai... you know dad I don't believe in all this... (irritated) What am I suppose to do if its Dadi Ma's wish... I have commitments... (pause) I can't make it' (pause) But dad... (through gritted teeth) fine... I'll be there by tomorrow" he slammed the phone down and checked the Anu's mail box once again.

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It was his fault... it was all his fault... her misery was coursing through his veins... had he not left her alone... had he not been away at that point of time... this would have never occurred. His Mishty would have been safe... there was no way he could have let any living creature on this earth harm her... But he wasn't here... he was so far away from her... fulfilling his dream when his Geet was being eroded layer by layer. If only he knew the fulfillment of his dream would cost him his entire life... would cost him his Geet... he would have never left her alone. It was his fault. And for the moment his memories drifted to the morning after he had proposed her. The last time Geet was with him...

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Flashback
Geet sneaked into his room to wish him good bye before she left the mansion. His bags were packed and were neatly placed in a corner. She looked around for him but the room was empty. She sighed and walked over to his bed and picked up his photograph that was kept beside his bed. She smiled at his picture and said, "Geet Khurana... (making a face) nahi... Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana" she beamed as she said it to herself and then kissed his photograph affectionately.
Just then he slid his arms around her waist from the back, startling her. "Maan, aap?" he frowned at her. "Aur kaun ho sakta hai? Maan ke rehte... Maan ki Mishty ko choona toh door koi dekh bhi nahi sakta" he said assertively and nipped her ear-lobe. "Maann" she tried to pry his hands off her waist. But he didn't budge. "Bohut jaldi hai... Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana ban ne ki?" he asked her whilst brushing his lips over the exposed skin of her neck. "Main woh..." she realized she was still holding his picture. He smiled and walked in front of her... Taking the picture from her he looked at her disapprovingly, "Jab banda yahan hai toh... pyar tasveer se kyun?" She blushed and took a step back. "Abhi se darr gayi?" he smirked and raised his eyebrows at her challengingly.

She gaped at him and putting on a brave front asked, "Aap mujhe challenge kar rahe ho?" He put his hands in his trouser pockets and replied casually, "Aisa hi kuch samajh lo Geet" she squinted her eyes at him. "Maan don't under estimate me" she warned him. "Warna?" he asked taking a step towards her. Geet stepped back. "Maan' aap'... she whimpered and raised her index finger towards him accusingly. "Kya?" he asked as he held her index finger. "Theek hai phir" she said determined and slammed her lips over his. Surprised, Maan staggered backwards and just then Geet bit his lower lip. Maan groaned and slid his arm protectively around her waist as he pulled her towards him. He smiled against her lips before she pulled away and hid herself in his chest. He chuckled at her antics. He was just trying to tease her but it seemed that his Mishti never ceased to surprise him. "I never knew losing a challenge to you would be so fruitful" he said. She hit his chest slightly and then kissed him over his heart.

"I don't want to go" he whispered sincerely while still embracing her. She stepped away from him, "Par jaana toh padega na" she replied sweetly. He nodded and taking her hands in his, he kissed them. Holding back her tears, she said, "I'll miss you Maan... Please come back soon" He nodded his head as she stepped in his arms for one last time.

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Back to Present

Standing on the shore... as the faint hue of the last traces of light left behind by the setting sun submerged itself into the darkness... as the waves crashed the shore splashing the saline water all over him... Maan couldn't help but loathe himself for letting her and their love down. How could he not see her pain when he met her in Hoshairpur? Why did he leave her alone? And then when she met him here... she urged him to believe her... she kept pleading him to listen to her once and what did he do? He misjudged her... he disregarded her and her presence... he scoffed at her... he left no single opportunity to put her down... he was hell bent on inflicting pain on her when he should have been the one to apply balm to her wounds... he didn't trust her... he failed her! Slowly as one by one the puzzle started fitting in... the gravity of his own actions and words came back to haunt him... and in that very instant he hated himself...

He remembered Vicky telling him about her parents' accident.

He remembered Pinky telling him about how Geet was being forced to marry and than the fact that she had ran away.

He remembered Adi telling him that Geet was sexually assaulted.

And that was the last straw... true that his had actions hurt him... he was agonized... he was miserable but then he was burning... burning in his guilt and the guilt was being fueled by enormous frenzy... his fingers balled into tight fists and his nails pierced the flesh in his palm... his eyes red as his body trembled. There were people who had brought her pain and tears... There was someone who had dared to lay his dirty hands on Geet... there was someone who had dared to hurt her... torture her... and those filthy creatures were still crawling on the surface of the earth! Without a doubt they were doomed! He won't let them go scot-free... irrespective of what Geet wanted now... whether she wished him to avenge those scoundrels or not... he was going to do just that!

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Geet was discharged from the hospital but she clung to Pammi the whole night. "I found you" the words reverberated in her mind. He had managed to find her. She was scared of falling into the trap again. He was still looking for her. And she could not afford another encounter. What if she was not so fortunate the next time as she was today. No! No! No! She would rather kill herself than be trapped again... She shuddered at the thought of what could have happened.

On the other hand, the hollow look in Maan's eyes haunted her as she wondered what he might have heard or would be thinking at this point of time. She had a fair idea what he would have interpreted of her anguished cries and the knowledge was making her anxious. What was he thinking? What would he think of her now? Why did he leave like that? Did he still think that she betrayed him? The thoughts were plaguing her... were feeding on her ability to think rationally.

But then there was one thing she knew... she needed to act fast now. She could not risk any more delays.

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Anu couldn't put her mind off Naintara's conversation on phone. Whom was Naintara speaking to about Geet? Who was in Mumbai? And what was it that Naintara was hiding from everyone? She tried to shrug off the conversation she had heard... she thought about various permutations but none could lead to the conclusion about why would Geet become the matter of Naintara's concern. And just then a thought clicked and she gasped, Did Naintara Bhabhi knew what was going on with Geet? Did she know what had happened? Anu shook her head and chided herself inwardly for even letting herself think so, for Naintara was afterall her Bhabhi... but then tried as much she could not shut up the nagging feeling that kept ringing the warning bells inside her head.

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Geet was in deep thoughts the whole day. She would have to carefully plan her moves now as things were only becoming difficult for her. Her cell phone rang but she didn't bother to receive the calls. She knew who it was. Maan had been trying to call her since morning but she avoided the calls as she avoided him.

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Maan knew she had been discharged, he had kept himself updated about her. Where last night he wanted to sort his thoughts, since morning he had been desperate to talk to her. He wanted to apologize to her. He wanted to know who he was and he wanted to know a whole lot of things. He wanted to listen to her voice once. But she didn't take his calls and with each call missed, he was loosing his control. Finally he called on Pinky's phone and requested her to handover the phone to Geet once. Pinky hesitated in the beginning but then agreed and then after waiting for long insufferable moments, he heard her say, "I don't want to talk to anyone Bhabhi". Pinky apologized and the line went dead. Guilt and fury feasted on him... and his rooms turned to shambles within no time.

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Next morning, Geet returned to the hotel. She was cautious of people on the road and carefully scanned the roads, half expecting Arjun to manifest himself out of no where. Pinky and Adi did their best to distract her and for them she plastered a smile on her face. But she was a wreck inside. She was scared and wished to hide herself somewhere where Arjun would never be able to reach her. But she could not do that. She knew if anyone got a cue of him being around in the city looking for her, Pammi would ensure that she stayed behind the doors. But then she had an agenda to fulfill and so she even after a whole lot of persuasion from her family, Geet didn't tell them whom she had met in the mall. She had refused to talk about it at all.

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Maan was waiting for her to come to the hotel. He wanted to see her... talk to her... and he paced around in the lobby as his gaze kept drifting towards the entrance and he waited for her to come. The moment he saw her, he rushed towards her but stopped in stride as his eyes met hers and she shook her head slightly and then shifted her gaze to the ground. Adi and Pinky greeted him while Pinky kept carefully reading his expressions and then Geet's. Geet's eyes were fixated on the ground. How he wished to crush her in his arms whereas she refused spare him a single look. He gulped the lump in his throat and looked on as they scattered to their work stations. A moment later he followed her. "We need to talk Geet" he said earnestly as he entered her cabin behind her. She immediately whipped around to face him and winced as he saw pain etched over his handsome face. Inhaling sharply she shook her head at him, "There's nothing to talk" she said in a strained voice. "Don't say that" he urged. She closed her eyes and turned around, "Please don't make it more difficult than it already is" she pleaded. "Geet, please..." he tried to plead but she turned instantly and lifted her hand stopping him from saying anything more. "Yaad hai Maan... maine aapse kaha tha... no great love stories ever had a happy ending... we can fight circumstances but we can't fight destiny. (gulping) I want you to be happy Maan..." she choked. He turned her towards himself holding her upper arm, "And you are all I have ever wished for Geet... Ek baar... sirf ek baar bharosa karo mujh par" he urged her sincerely. She looked at his hand and then she raised her gaze to look into his eyes as she muttered, "I wish I could" As soon as the words left her mouth, Maan's hold slipped from her arm as he helplessly looked at her. Shutting her eyes for a moment, she went over to her desk, picked up the file and left the cabin as he kept looking at her retreating back.

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It was supposed to be a small family affair. Servants at Khurana Mansion were busy arranging all the things required for the puja while Nandita supervised and got everything in order. Savitri Devi had organized this puja for Anu's happiness. The princess of the Khurana mansion was going to get engaged and was preparing to enter a new phase of her life. What better way then to start it with the Almighty's blessings.

Arjun and his family had arrived and Arjun's mom was helping Nandita adorning the place of worship with flowers. Everyone present were happy about the alliance and were waiting for the panditji to come in and start the offerings. And just then Yash entered. It was a pleasant surprise for Anu however; Yash felt embarrassed for barging in without any prior information and tried to excuse himself. But Savitri Devi was having none of it. She insisted that he should stay. "Aise puja chod ke nahi jaate bete... and don't forget this is for your friend's happiness... Won't you like to pray for her?" she asked genuinely and Yash had no option but to stay behind. Anu smiled at him triumphantly while Yash shook his head at her childishness.

"I told you... you would have to stay" she beamed. Yash chuckled, "Yes your highness! Meri itni himmat ki main Anu ki baat ko mana karun?" he teased her. Anu stuck out her tongue at him as she led him into the hallway. "Where is your Mr. Right by the way?" he asked looking around for Arjun. "Pata nahi... (frowning) abhi abhi toh yahin the... (turning to Nandita) Mumma aapne Arjun ko dekha? Yash wants to meet him" she asked. "I just saw him going over to the study beta" Arjun's mom told her. Slightly nodding and thanking her, Anu lead Yash towards the study. "Hmm... so madame all set for the engagement?" he asked. "I can't tell you. I'm so excited" she said enthusiastically. Yash smiled at her as they turned from the corridor to approach the study. "Arjun is a very lucky chap" Yash said somberly causing Anu to turn her head to face him. She looked at him questioning, he smiled genuinely at her as he said, "Not everyone is bestowed with a precious gem like you" and then he started laughing and started walking ahead of her. And then she heard him say, "zyada seriously mat lo... main toh bas ainve hi tumhari tareef kar raha tha" Anu's jaws dropped and she took some quick steps to get even with him, "you moron!" she muttered. He laughed, "Whats my fault if you are an idiot!" and he leapt forward away from her reach. "What! Main idiot hoon... main..." She grimaced as she looked around for something to hit him and just then they heard him roar, "I want her God damnit! I want her!"
Laughter died as they looked at the study, confused. Anu frowned, "Arjun" she whispered to herself.
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Over to you... Love you all...
Sonia😳
Edited by euphoric - 14 years ago
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R moi loves you for listening to me and aashu's demands... haaye kissy...😍
P.S: I haven't read the update just the FB..😆
Edited by -jia- - 14 years ago
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Finally...kaha ghoom rahi thi tum dono kaminio...??😡😡😡
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awesome part sonia...
now i am feeling pity for maan..
he really needs to know the whole truth..
hope anu doesnt neglect the piece of info she has got...
today i missed vicky...
but my heart went out for geet...
how much more will she do alone...

the cliffhanger...
i hope anu hears more...and does not make her presence felt...

me too much into thinking mode after reading the update..
plz continue soon
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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wow very short update😭😭😭😭😭
aur maan ne geet se achi tarah se baat bhi nahi ki...
awesome update yaar...
adi wants to kill that fiancee of geet😆😆😆😆😆
poor maan.. trying to get one word from geet's mouth...
yeh tune kahan pe aake rokh liya... soni... yeh kaiye ka insaaf hai😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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kya hua aashu kisko hate kar rahi ho soni ko???
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Jhooth bolna paap hai... 😆
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loved the update.. I hope Anu will come to see Arjun's dark face soon.

Please continue sooon

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