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Posted: 14 years ago
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You guys name this ff after reading

Will be completed
just comment for fast updates
i will not beg for comments if you like just comment and support me
this is a small tribute to KMHians


Part-1

Arohi
packed her bags and looked around the room, trying to make sure she hadn't forgotten anything. It was the last day of her vacation, and it was time to start the drive home. This trip to the mountains had been just what she needed. It was her chance to forget the disaster that had been her engagement party. The society papers had a field day when her fiancee had shown up at the party drunk with another woman, proclaiming to everyone that he had been forced to find another woman to fulfill his needs because she was a cold fish who refused to sleep with him before they were married. Arohi thought she would die from embarrassment.

Everyone who knew the 24 year old knew she wasn't the typical party girl, she enjoyed going out like the rest of her friends and dating, but her parents had instilled in her a strict moral code. She had stay out of the gossip columns because they could find nothing to report on her. The worst they had found was that she was at the same club one night when a friend of hers had gotten into a fight, getting herself thrown out. If she started a relationship with a man, she made it clear she wasn't going to sleep with them until she was married. It led to her not having many long term relationships, but she stuck to her morals.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start. I luv d concept.
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hey pallu glad to c u backk...
congrats fr d new story
n yeah abt ds ..hmm well i like her,arohi !!
am curious to knw further..
so continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it sounds gud...
pls continue...thnks 4 sharing...
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nice start...do continue...add me 2 ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for liking and commenting
i will definitely complete this ff
presently i have problem with PMs so please excuse for meantime

about this ff this is a little bold and open as it is set in modern times
if you don't like or want to change pl tell me this ff is for you guys so i will keep(write) it as you wish

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...that was a good start!! Cont soon n plz do add me to your pm list :)
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Part-2

Arohi had thought Ram was different. All through their namesake year relationship, he had reassured her of his respect for her beliefs. It turned out he was just saying that so he could marry into her family's money. It had come out after the party that he was practically broke, and his parents had cut him off, so he needed to keep her happy and get into some money. All this had been spread out for the world to see in every gossip column in the country. After two weeks of everyone trying to hide everything from her, and some crazy stalker letters offering to teach her how to not be an ice queen, as the press called her, she decided enough was enough and headed for a small but nice mountain retreat.

The advertisements promised a quiet, out of the way vacation, and this was not the kind of place anyone in her group would go, so she knew it was perfect. It was the off season, so there had been very few guests at the small resort, and either the staff really didn't read the papers, or they were just discreet enough not to mention it. No one had bothered her for the entire two weeks she was here. Arohi made a note to be sure to add the place to her regular vacation destinations. One she would visit alone.

Everything was packed, so she grabbed her bags and set off for the front desk. Sitting at the desk was Ragini. She was such a sweet woman, in her early forties with long straight dark brown hair that she kept pulled into a ponytail. She had been there everyday for the last two weeks. She was the manager and had her own apartment at the resort. "Hello, sweetie, is it time to go already?" Ragini asked as she saw Arohi's bags.

Edited by pallavi_bs - 14 years ago
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why are the updates very short??...anyways...do continue :)
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Cont. from part-2

"Yes, but I will be back. I love this place. Maybe I will come back during the spring to see the flowers, and maybe the summer when it is just too hot in the city. Of course, if I come back then, I will have to visit for winter, too, just to see the snow and ice." Arohi told her laughing.

"You are always welcome, give me a call a week in advance and I will set you up with the perfect area to see the best scenes for each season. Here, I also have this. It is a coupon for 10% off your next stay. You have been an absolute delight. I will miss you for breakfast every morning." handed her the receipt and the coupon.

Arohi had started her second day by sitting down with in the mornings over a cup of coffee and a muffin. It had become a part of the day she looked forward to. had learned about s two sons and her marriage that had failed when her husband had cheated. had told about her disastrous party, and Ragini had been sympathetic, but instead of treating her like she was going to break, she had joked about how they should get revenge on the men that had betrayed them. was really going to miss having her there to talk to. "I am going to miss you, too. You have my number on file if you want to call sometime, like if you need bail money in case you run into your ex again." Arohi laughed.

"I may take you up on that. You have mine also. I can get you out of jail and give you a job to show you are a productive member of the community and didn't mean for him to fall under the wheels of your car as you drove down the sidewalk." Ragini joked back.

"Oh, that would be a good one, I have to add that to my list." Arohi said. Suddenly on impulse she reached over and hugged the woman who had become more of a friend to her in two weeks that most of the people she had been around most of her life. With a last wave goodbye, she walked out to her car. Putting her suitcase into the small area behind the seat, she gunned the engine of the small two-seater and headed off down the road.

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