'safar --the journey of life' --(AR - short ff))

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey friends,as i am on a trip , a different concept came in my mind..hope u will like it...

(plz. ignore my spelling or grammatical mistake)



" safar --the journey of life"--- (a very short ff only in 3 parts)






" hey friend,if u don't mind ,kya lower berth mujhe de sakte ho?"

arman lifted his eyes and saw a guy was requesting him with a cute smile...
"hey,actually meri patni mere sath hai aur mera upper berth hai,so if u help me..."he cut his words in the middle and looked at arman with a hope.

arman understood that it was a newly married couple.he smiled.." sure friend...kahan tak jana hai?"

sumit shaked hand with arman.." mumbai...actually humari 2 days pahle hi saadi hui,mai mumbai mein rahta hun aur meri dulhan nagpur ki hai ,to mujhe aana pada meri dulhan ko lene...by the way,my name is sumit...sumit roy, aur ye meri wife,meri dulhan ..."riddhima..."riddhima sumit roy."

arman smiled.." and I am arman mallick from mumbai..the senior doctor of "dayal memorial hospital."

sumit : " nice to meet you dr.sahab...".and he laughed .

arman joined with him...he saw that the bride was also smiling...arman was overwhelmed to see her enchanted beauty! suddenly words came out of his lips..." sumit sahab,you are very lucky to get such a beautiful wife. "

sumit pulled riddhima close to him..' I know dr.arman...I know...actually mai to is jem ko khone hi wala tha.thanks to my bhabi ki unhone mujhe jabardasti is saadi ke liye raaji kiya."

arman questioned curiously .." kya matlab?"

sumit : "actually riddhima meri bhabi ki younger sister hai. bhaiya ki jab sadi hui to mai abroad tha, kuch hi days pahle louta aur bhabi ne riddhima se meri saadi ki baat kahi. riddhima ke mom dad ki bachpan mein hi death ho gayi thi. usey meri bhabi yani iski di ne hi sambhala aur jab bhabi saadi hokar humare ghar aayi to ye hostel chali gayi. maine socha shayad bhabi apni sis ko mere galey dalna chahti hai,to maine inkar kar diya. but jab bhabi ke request par isse mila to mai to ispar feeda hi ho gaya." saying this he pulled riddhima more close.


arman saw that riddhima's cheeks became totally red.she lowered her gaze and said softly.."bas bhi kijiye."

arman and sumit both laughed to see riddhima's weird condition. arman asked.." if u don't mind..suhagraat mana li kya?'

sumit sighed.." kahan ji,abhi to 2 days pahle saadi hui,feer dher saare relatives aur bekar ke riti- riwaj(rituals) aur aaj train mein..

arman questioned.." saath mein koi nahi kiya?"

sumit : " nahi yaar,saare relatives sath hi hain..meri mom-dad,bhaiya,bhabi, unki nahi si beti, mere uncle-aunt,unke bachche aur bhi dher saare relatives. dusre compartment mein hain..B1 and B2 mein,maine jaan bujhkar humari reservation alag compartment mein ki,unke beech to meri dulhan itna sharmati hai ki kya kahun!!" he kissed riddhima's hand lovingly.

Arman was enjoying sumit's words and riddhima's shyness.he said..." mai kuch hi der mein upar berth mein chala jaunga...aap apni dulhan ke sath khub baaten karna.."

sumit again said sighly.." bas baaten hi hogi!!...

riddhima was blushing hard on sumit's words...she was feeling uneasy...arman realised these and changed the topic..." to aap business man ho,aur aapki mrs.?"

sumit said proudly.." she has completed MBBS and after a few days,she is joining in "dayal memorial hospital " as an intern...and suddenly something struck in his mind.." hey,you are in dayal hospital na?"

arman : " yes..

sumit caught his hand with a great relief..." now our problem is solved..plz. dr.arman...meri biwi ka jara dhyan rakhna. she is very soft and she doesn't know anything about mumbai...plz. take care her.."

arman smiled..." sure dear...darne ki koi jarurat nahi,mujhe wahan sab jante hain. riddhima ji,aap bas itna kahna aap meri friend ho...okay?"

riddhima nodded her head and said ..."thanks..

arman again admired her beauty in his heart...he mumbled.." jyada der tak dekha to dill kho baithunga. kya itni khubsurat ladki bhi hoti hai? jannat ki hoor bhi sharma jaaye iski khubsurati ke saamne."


T.T came 'sumit showed his ticket'arman came towards TT and talked with him in a low voice. Then arman came to sumit and patted his back.." now your problem is solved man! Humare pass ka uppper berth vacant hai,maine dekha wahan koi nahi aayega,so maine wo berth manage kar li. Means aapke upper berth dono khali. Enjoy friend your night'

(THEY ARE IN SECOND A.C. 'MEANS ONLY 4 BERTHS AND SIDE BERTHS TOO BUT THERE IS A CURTAIN IN THE MIDDLE,WHICH MAINTAINS PRIVACY)

Riddhima lowered her head with a great shy and sumit yelled with joy'."thanks friend!'you are great'."


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Arman noticed that every half an hour sumit's bhabi or bhaiya or parents were calling him to come their compartment . It made sumit a bit annoyed and riddhima was enjoying it.

After a while ,sumit's bhabi came with a big packet in his hand and said'"sumit,tu to abhi se apni biwi ka gulam ban gaya hai. mom kab se tumhe bula rahi hai,kuch baaten karni hai."

Riddhima asked surprisingly.." di,aapne phone kiya to wo gaye they na?"

Bhabi made a soft smack on sumit's shoulder and said'" tujhe pata hai ridhz, tujhe dikhane ke liye wo yahan se gaya aur beech raste se hi lout aaya.


Sumit pouted'" bhabi,aap logon ko problem kya hai? kabhi mom,kabhi papa,kabhi bhai kabhi aap,kabhi mamaji or mamiji phone kar mujhe bula rahe hain. Thori der riddhima ke paas baithne bhi nahi dete."


Bhabi rounded her eyes'" aapko to riddhima pasand hi nahi thi na?"'

Sumit made an innocent face'"ab galey bandh di hai to company deni hi paregi na,burna kal aap hi dantegi ki aapki ladli bahan ka khyal nahi rakha'


Bhabi caught sumit's ears.."achcha! to mere liye! Dill mein to ladoo foot rahen hain'.

Sumit caught bhabi's hand and kissed it lovingly'"thanks bhabi for making my life so beautiful,sabke saamne to bol nahi paya tha

Bhabi caressed his hair'" thanks to mujhe kahna chahiye sumit,meri bahan ko apnane ke liye. Mai to hardam darti thi,pata nahi meri shona bahna ka husband kaisa hoga,pata nahi isey khush rakhega bhi nahi. Mai janti hun tum usey bahut khush rakhoge ,rakhoge na sumit?'

Sumit gave his bhabi a one side hug'"sure bhabi,aur nahi rakhna to meri pitai karna.'

Arman was enjoying bhabi-dewar's talk.suddenly sumit said to his bhabi'"bhabi ,ye mera new friend "arman mallik"..ye bhi "dayal memorial hospital " mein hain,as a senior doctor. Unhone riddhima ka khyal rakhne ko promise kiya hai."

Bhabi (happily) : "thanks dr.arman'".and turned to riddhima.."ridhz,khana kha le,maine is packet mein sab kuch la diye hain. Aalooo ke parathey,gazar ka halwa,matar-paneer,dal-makhni and raita. Aur haan ,apne senior dr. sahab ko bhi khilana.aur sumit,khana khakar ek baar humare couch mein aana,mummy ji ko kuch batein karni hai. abhi mai jati hun."

Sumit saluted his bhabi'" okay boss'jaisa aapka hukm.."

Arman and bhabi laughed at his antics and riddhima smiled sweetly.sumit took out plate and riddhima arranged the foods on it and sumit gave it to arman.

Arman ; " arey yaar! Aap log khao na'..

Sumit :" kya aapko ye sab pasand nahi?"

Arman : " nahi,aisa nahi..I like aaloo ke parathey and gazar ka halwa madly.but maine khana order kar diya hai,aata hi hoga."

Sumit : "ok,aane do..hum teeno milkar wo bhi kha jayenge ,abhi aap humara sath do.nahi to humey bahut dukh hoga,hai na riddhima?"

Riddhima : " ji'plz lijiye na..

Arman could not put down her request and took the plate.the foods are delicious!!'

Arman : "dishes to bahut jyada tasty hain.maine itna tasty khana kabhi nahi khyaya."

Sumit said proudly.."meri bhabi aur riddhima ne banaye hain."

Arman said.." you are very lucky sumit'aap ki biwi jitni khubsurat hai,utni kaabil bhi."

Sumit kissed riddhima's hand'"I know dr.arman'I am the luckiest man in this world."


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hey friends,my sweet sweet angels...how it is? if you liked ,plz.give your lovely ,inspiring comments and press the like tab too...


love u all
love u always
punam
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey amamika..
awesome start...but AR nt together..nt fair..
all da best 4 ur ff.
do continue soon.. n thnx a lot 4 da PM!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really amazing concept di...

loved it...

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hw AR will be together...

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ARE ARE YEH KYA STORY HUI????
AR separate nooo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its so gud to see u aftr a long tym!
Ridz is already married with sumit!
I want to read it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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conggrats for new ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWw soo cute i luv kashz lool ridzi sayz liye jeye soo cutee cant waite for the next part xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiii
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wow...
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nice dear...

loved this new concept dieing to know how story move

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