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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates yaar. sooo nice the way they meet and meet again. that is destiny bringing them togather face to face again and again.
can u pls add me to pm list and pls pm me when u update next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates...nice story yaar...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww lovely OS... sujal n maan deadly combo... loved it!!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehe..moi finally commenting!
kamini tu dhaaso dhaasu update deke tarasta chod jaati hi!!
lovedddit...and they better meet warna teri dedication gayee samajh le...*evil lwaugh* hahahahhahah
zips...utarne ke bajia to pehna rahi hai..chichi deepu...meri evil sister hoke aisa expect nahi kiya terese...
tujhe shareefo ke category me daalna padhega!!🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hehe..moi finally commenting!

kamini tu dhaaso dhaasu update deke tarasta chod jaati hi!!
lovedddit...and they better meet warna teri dedication gayee samajh le...*evil lwaugh* hahahahhahah
zips...utarne ke bajia to pehna rahi hai..chichi deepu...meri evil sister hoke aisa expect nahi kiya terese...
tujhe shareefo ke category me daalna padhega!!🤣🤣🤣🤣

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shareefon ke category main ...
nahiii aisa zulm mat karo mere upar
aashu meri jaan... zip utar doongi isbaar chod de.. public mein tha na😃😃😃😃
mujhe dedication chahiye...😭😭
aur tere ko main bhi doongi.. lekin tu samjha kar.. main teri jaise nahi likh sakthi na.. tu bahut kamal likthi hai😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 3:

Maan kept looking at that way through which geet ran away... Maan: kya mystery hai is ladki ka...


he looked at hands... which trembeled touching her skin... who is she... who is that mystery girl...suddenly Maan comes out of his senses... 'Mystery girl... maan u are going out of ur mind.. control... you even dont know who she is..."


Suddenly the phone rings... and he checks and sees sujal calling. Maan: yes bro.. any issues with the deal...

Sujal: deal ko maro goli.. meri biwi ghar pahunchi????

Maan: nahi... ab bhi disc main hai hai.. kashish ne kaha tha usko 9 pm pick up karna... main jaldi pahunch gaye the.. i am going to find her...

Sujal: what the hell.. dont u know she is pregnant... i am here getting tensed aur woh machal rahi hai... usko dhoondo...woh meri phone nahi uta rahe hai..

Maan: chill man.. let me find her...

Maan searches for her and sees her dancing...with some friends... and just goes near her and pats oh her shoulders...

kashish turns and says.. Maan...aur sab ladkiyan... Maan ki taraf hi dekh rahe the... Maan was feeling uncomfortable...

Maan drags kashsih to a corner.. and gives her a phone...

Sujal: kashish.. main nahi hoon tho tum apni sehat ka khayal nahi rakhogi..

Kashish: keeps quiet and pouts at Maan.. ( Maan smiles)

Sujal: tum sun rahi ho na..

Kashish still quiet...

Sujal: jaan... jaan... meri jaanu...please ghar jaa aur meri bp mata bada...

Kashish: ummmah and cuts the phone and says... My darling pati... Maan smiles...and laughs

Maan: memsahab chale???

Kashish: yes... ek minute tum us din geet se nahi mile na.. i will introduce you..

Maan: no need will meet her later kashsih.. tum chalo warna tumhara pati humare deal ko goli maar dega...

Kashish: ek minute na...aur goes in search of her ... Maan sits in a lounge and waits for her...

Kashish being kashish... kept talking and talking to anyone and everyone she meets...

comes back after half an hour.. Maan: kahan thi.. aur geet kahan hai...

Kashish: woh ghar chali gayi

Maan: wat aur tum adhe ghante kya kar rahi thi... She looks down and pouts.. ab chalo isse pehle tumare pati ka phone aaye...

Kashish was trying different radio channels in the car... and suddenly she hears the song...

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai
Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai
Yeh rang saare hai bas tumhaare
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya - 2


nice song na... tumhe kya hua???? phir se khoyi huyye ho

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai
Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai
Yeh rang saare hai bas tumhaare
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

Maan: hmmm... aaj main phir mili use...

Eh hey hey, aah haa haa - 2
Tum aaye ho to dekh lo
Naya naya sa lage yeh jahaan, ho
Haan haan haan haan haan, oh ho

Kashish: kya?? kahan... kab.. tumne bat ki usse naam kya hai...

Haseen haseen hai yeh zameen
Dhula dhula sa hai yeh aasmaan
Tum ho to hai yeh samaa
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

Kashish: bolo na..

Maan: tum kuch bolne do na... disc mein mili... she was looking hot yaar...

kashish: giggles... maan tumhe sach main woh pasand hai na...

Dhadak raha hai dil mera
Jhuki jhuki hai palkein yahan, ho
Haan haan haan haan haan, oh ho...

Kashish turns off the radio...and says... humhe kuch sochna padega usse dhoondne keliye...

Maan: nahi just leave it.. i am not interested...

Kashish.. nahi u are very much interested... i know you... sujal ko aane do.. main kehthe hoon unhe aur hum teenon milkar dhoondenge meri babhi ko...


Maan: tum kuch nahi karoge... ok... warna mein teri kartootein sujal ko bol doongi...

Kashish: meri kya kartootein... maine kya kiya hai...

Maan: acha... itni laparwahi karthe ho...

Kashish: woh to tum dono ki attention pane keliye karthe ho na...

Maan; acha acha.. ab khana khaya na tumne...

Kashish: haan...aur tumne...

Maan: woh tumhare pati se mila...pet bhar ke...nahi re.. khaya maine..

Kashish: pouts.. and leaves for her home... and Maan to his...


Maan 's mind was on her whole night... and her trembling skin... that feeling...that spark...


the two days after that...


Maan was in a restaurent.. waiting for a client for a lunch meeting...gets a call that the meeting was cancelled...and he gets up to go hears... an unusual order...


voice1: do aalu ke paratte, 1 fried rice, 1 butter chicken...


voice 2: lekin ma'am... yeh yahan pe nahi miltha...


voice1: kya... kyun nahi miltha... aap logon ko sharam nahi aati...


Voice3: kyunki yeh italian restaurent hai..


Geet turns and looks at him... that handsome eyes... 'aap'


Geet: aap humesha mere peeche kyun pade huye ho...


Maan: hello... no ways...


Geet gets up and suddenly maan asks.. khana khaogi mere saath...


geet looks at him and sits down..


her heart was beating erratically thinking why she sat down...Geet.. yeh aadmi shaadi shuda hai...


maan looks at her... she tries to get up and go and maan asks... where are u going...


she says... mujhe jaana hai...


Maan: ok lekin tumne khana khaya nahi hai na...anyways even i havent eaten...italian khaogi...i love italian food.. try karna ek baar...


Geet: woh nahi..


Maan: main koi anjaana tho nahi ho na...


Geet: woh... try karungi... lekin .. aapke family kya sochenge...


Maan: meri family ko mere khane se kya problem ho sakthi hai.. tum sochte bahut ho...chalo...


Geet: acha to aap hi order kar do...


Maan to the bearer: I will have a pasta and the lady will have a Chicken Marsala


Geet: woh kya hota hai???


Maan: try karke dekho na...


Geet: aapke family kaise hai?


maan thinks yeh maere family pe intna stress kyun deti hai ...'acha hai' aur tumhara?


Geet: mere family main koi bhi nahi hai... i am an Orphan...


Maan: i am sorry.. i didnt know...


Geet: nahi.. aisa kuch nahi hai...it was long time back...aur aapka family...


Maan: my family is super fine... we are gonna be more in number...smiles and turns to her...to karti kya ho tum?


Geet: main ek company main assist HR hoon...


bearer brings the food


Geet: khane se pehle main ek baat kehne chahti hoon...


Thanks us din keliye.. aur us din keliye bhi...


Maan smiles...


Geet ties to look at the food... and turns towards maan... smiles and haves it...


She looks at the man sitting in front of him having his time eating this food...


She looks at her dish and aweuuu and thinks... na salt , na pepper, na koi masala.. yeh main kaise khaungi...


aur isko kya bolu???


Maan looks at her and she turns her head down playing with the food...


Maan looks at her and asks tumhe kuch aur chahiye...


Geet: nahi kujhe jaldi jaana hai...


Maan: ok.. one sec... bearer cheque please...


Maan pays and geet tries to give her share.. and he doesnt accept...


geet: nahi please app rakho... waise hum aaj ke baad kahan milne walen hai...


Maan thinks hum kumesha milthe rahthe ho...


geet: i have to avoid him...


Maan offers her lift... but she refuses and takes a taxi...

Maan keeps looking at her and then suddenly thinks.. i didnt even ask her name...

That night...

a lauge sound knocking his room... and he opens and sees kashsih running into his room...

kya hua...

kashsih.. bacho mujhe tumare dost se...

Maan ab kya kiya usne...

Kashish... mere pe zulm pe zulm...

Sujal comes in kashsih... kasish... bahar aao... main bahut gusse main hoon...

Maan: what happened bro...

Sujal: kahan hai woh nautanki ...u know.. her gyn called and said she is very weak and doesnt take enough vitamins and taking lot of stress...
What will i do with this woman...

Maan: she must have been a bit busy with work...

Sujal: go to hell with her work... she doesnt ahve to go anymore...

Kashsih: comes out : nahi main jaaungi...

Sujal: tum apni khayal nahi rakhti ho na...

Maan .. oh god.. i am leaving... and he goes up...

Kashish comes behind sujal, touches his shoulder and says... i am sorry.. aage se aisa nahi hoga.. sachi...

Sujal.. 2 din main nahi hoon tho yeh kya haal kar diya tumne... tumhe pata hai na... i just have you and maan... tum meri zindagi main kya mayne rakthe ho... yeh tumhe nahi pata...

Kashish: sorry Sujal... woh tum itne din mujhse door rahe i was angry at u... but i couldnt show it na... because u and maan have suffered a lot for this company...thats why...

Sujal turns and hugs her and pulls her tight to his body and kisses her on her lips...

Maan from his room... sujal is rt.. darling...

Kashsih: maan.. tumhe mere side lena hai tha na... cheater...

Maan laughs... tum dono ek hi side main aa gaye ho na... tho main teekh hoon ab!! Kashish blushes...

Sujal: maan hum chalthe hai...

Maan smiles and goes down to close the door.. suddenly the phone rings...

maan goes and sees kashish's phone..."yeh kashish bhi na..."

takes the phone and...

kashish main Geet...

Maan was shocked to hear the so familiar voice...

Geet?

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Please like and comment on my post!!!!love deepu!!
Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent dear...wow! love it!!!! so much suspense...can't wait till they actually find out who they are...😊
Edited by Anita1118 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
continue soon dear waiting eagerly
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Posted: 14 years ago

Deepu!

tu toh tarsa tarsa ke maar degi yaar!😭
P.S.-Loved Sujal-Kashish!
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Poor maan he doesn't even know wat she thinks of him
So maan has heard geets voice through kashish phone
Cont soon Xx...

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