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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update deepu. I love how maan is intrigued by geet. aww sujal is worried about kashish. Loool I can imagine all girls reaction when they see maan, loool no wonder he felt uncomfortable.

Loool love how sujal's blood pressure is high as he is worried about his wife. Oh no maan and geet did not get to meet again.

Love the friendship relation maan has with kashish. So he is thinking about geet but just does not know her name.

Wow maan asks geet to sit with him for dinner. I love the way maan is trying to make geet have dinner with him.

I love how maan is a gentleman and pays for the dinner. Lool lekin geet does not like such phikka khana.

Me looking forward to the next update

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Posted: 14 years ago
finally baby i read it!
maaneet ko kam screen space kyu???
loved it,,,
gaana bhi love it...PBDHH hai na??
ye maan bhi na...notice nahi kiya ke bechaari bhooki hai??
line maarne me busy tha..
deepu...opening the zip rememmber..warna tereko innocent party me...
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luvely os,all3 parts r awsome,cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
deeps...too good yaar...sorry i couldn't reply earlier...update soon ok...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 4:

Maan: Geet?


Geet: ji Kashish hai kya??


Maan: kashish...


Geet: ji... hello kashish ma'am hai kya??? mujhe unse baat karni hai...


Maan: aapka voice jaana pehchana hai...


Geet: woh...( suddenly even she feels she has heard this voice some where...) shruggs off thinking she is stupid.. thinking about that gus all the

time...hello Sujal jiju... I am Geet... hum mile the na... us din... kashish ne milaya tha... aapse... woh nahi hai... kuch urgent baat karni thi ussse... aap

kaise ho... sab khushal mangal... kab aaye aap wapas trip se... kashish ne bola tha...aap ho na.. hello hello... kuch baat tho karo...


Maan: was shocked at her chatar patar... suddenly...I am not sujal... I am Maan...

Geet: shocked... Maan... the same man she was supposed to meet that day for blind date...
suddenly she was lot for words...

it was pin drop silence and maan was waiting for her chatar patar to continue.. while she was shocked...

suddenly kashish comes and takes the phone... kaun hai maan... hello hello... Geet... acha bolo...

Maan was dumbstruck.. who was she why was she familiar... ...

Maan closes his eyes and sees his mystery girl... pats his head hard.. 'Ouch, Maan beta sudhar jaa..."

1 month passes by Maan has not seen her and was very sad... kashish senses this ...

One day... sujal and maan was at office discussing something very important actually arguing on it... kashish barges in...with food for three of

them... she was on leave that day due to her checkup...

Kashish: stop... khana khaye... 2 baj gaye hai...

Maan and Sujal: tum.. tum yahan kya kar rahe ho... u were supposed to call me at 2 pm to remind me for check up rt..

Kashish goes and give a sweet peck on his cheek and says.. 2 baj gaye... aur main yahan hoon... ghar baite baite bore ho rahi thi... geet thi inte waqt

ghar pe...

Maan suddenly looks at kashish hearing that name.. which has haunted . him for some time...

aur ab woh bhi apne ghar gayi...

She was serving food for all three of them...and...Maan thinks... he has to buy some gifts for his sister... looks at her all happy chirping her way and

smiling at both of them...

they have food..and sujal leaves with her for checkup...

Maan finishes her work...and gets out... and walks into a toy store... sees some beautful baby toys... buys a lot of them... and suddenly hears lot of

laughter... and turns to that saide and sees her... wow...

she was laughing and playing with some kids... she has become a kid with them...he goes there but doesnt see her.. wacks his head and gets out from

there...

Geet was panting... very badly... 'OMG... every where i see that man... she is married geet sudhar jaa... kyun humesha uske saamne jaake khadi ho

jaathi hoon... tu bhi na.. jhalli hai... tu kya sochthi hai uske baare main agar use pata chala tho????'

She goes from there...she decides to walk and it starts raining... she was always happy seeing rain... she dances in the rain...

Maan was thinking of her all the time... while he was driving... and it is raining heavily...

Maan suddenly stops the car... seeing her dance... thinks its just his illusion... he looks again..and she is dancing... very happily...

Maan slowly gets out of the car... starts to move towards her...he thinks.. why am I so attracted to her...

he moves towards her and suddenly she closes her eyes and after some time.. she opens her eyes and sees the same man... who's face and voice was

captured to her mind in such a way that she keeps thinking about him...

Maan looks at her and her teary eyes... maan slowly keep his hand on her shoulders...and in a sec she hugs him very tightly...

Maan feels a kind of contendment... a feeling of togetherness,., and a feeling of filling that void which was in his life...

Geet hugs him tightly...and tells him... I am so alone.. so lonely... and hugs him tightly...

Maan suddenly hugs her and she brings her face up...

very close... very close... his breath was fanning her... his eyes were looking at her .. that eyes which never helped her to sleep...those eyes which

always haunt her...

Maan brings his lips towards her... goes nearer and neares and kisses her...she kisses him... with her eyes closed... Maan's hands tighten around her

and roams around her back..

Suddenly geet gains her senses... and rem he is a married man.. and gets out from his grip with a push... maan looked at her awestruck...

Geet looks at him...aapne aisa kyun kiya... aapkjo sharam nahi aate dhoka dete huye... and she slaps him...

Maan keeps looking at her... angrily...running away from him.. dhoka.. kise dhoka de rahe the main...

Maan was so angry he left from there...

after that day...maan didnt meet geet for few days...

Maan was sitting in sujal's house and discussing a movie which they had planned to watch and maan was trying to get away from the movie plan...
and sujal was saying no no no...

Kashish brings tea and pakoda for all of them and sits with them on their gupshup...

She looks at maan and sujal and says... ok i have decided something... I am the only female in this family and i have decided i need a friend, a bhabhi..

Sujal: what!! a partner... I am not enough for you...

Kashish wacks him and says... i thought about this thing for so long...

Sujal: wat honey?

Kashish: maan tumhe woh date pe jaana hoga.. geet ke saath... i will arrange it again...

Maan: chodo tum dono.. mujhe kahi nahi jaana kisi ke saath bhi nahi...

Kashish.. lekin tumne decide kiya tha us ladki ko nahi dhoondenge.. phir????

Maan: leave it and he leaves from there...

how can he tell them that she slapped him for kissing her... how can he tell them that he is so angry with her nad but still when he closes his eyes he

sees only those beautiful hazel eyes...

how can he tell them.. that he wants her and just her... but doesnt know her name or no.. nor place... and havent seen her for last 1 week...

In the meanwhile Geet was so angry with herself and him for the kissing part... she didnt know whom to blame...she keeps dreaming about him and that hearth shattering kiss.. keeps touching her lips to feel him... knowing that she shouldnt think about him...

she is very frustrated with him and she avoids him whenever she sees him...

one day geet was at a beach watching sunrise... and maan was jogging towards the beach... suddenly sees her looking at the sunrise...

he unknowingly goes towards her and keeps looking at her. Maan keeps looking at her those beautiful eyes...

Suddenly she turns and sees him..

Geet keeps looking at him... and gets up to leave... suddenly maan catches her wrist...

Maan: please dont go...

Geet: nahi mujhe jaana hai...

Maan: i need to talk to you. Geet doesnt look at him...

Maan: i am sorry... main nahi jaantha us din mujhe kya hua that... i felt needed to kiss you... i wanted to kiss you...i was so attracted to you... i coulcnt control myself... i am a lonely man...

Geet looks at him awestruck.. 'lonely... aapke gharwale kahan hai..'

Maan: mere gharwale? hmmm.. and he keeps quiet for some time...

Geet looks at him thinking kitne khudgarz aadmi hai.. family hoke aise bole rahe hai.. aur main yahan...

she gets uo to leave and starts moving...maan notices and looks at her figure retreating away...

she stops and turns and says i am sorry for slapping you... us din jo bhi hua tha.. hum dono ki marzi se hua tha... lekin nahi hona chahiye tha...

and she walks away...

maan understands one thing... he has fallen in love with this girl.. this one girl whom he still doesnt know...

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deepti
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.. yaar ab unki blind date karwa bhi doh.. i mean ab funally let them have their blind date.. fab though.. they both already like eachother.. lmao.. and geet thinks hes married... lmao... anyways continue sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow,awsome update,kiss bhi karadia aur thappad bhi khila dia,kab ye ek dusre ka naam janege.cont soon
Edited by mandymore - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anita1118

excellent dear...wow! love it!!!! so much suspense...can't wait till they actually find out who they are...😊

thanks ani!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you😃

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