ff:a real love story message pg 139

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey everyone i've also started a ff

plz let me know what you think :)

chapter one



Arohi's mom : arohi beta tajaar ho gai. aaj tumhe larke wale deekne arehe hai


gauri (arohi's sis ): o ho mama aap to jaanti hai ke hum larkiya kitni deer lagati hai tayaar hone main.

or aaj to arohi ko larkewale deek ne arehe hai to wo time to lagai gi hi.


Arohi's mom :acha thik hai lekin larke wale kabi bhi ate hoon ge to arohi se ke dena ke time par tayaar ho jai.


Gauri : thik hai main ke du gi



and then the doorbell rang



arohi's mom : larkewalo ne to 5 baje aana tha. Lekin abhi to sirf 4 baje hai

arohi's dad : ab wo log a gai hai to hum unhe wapis to nehi beej sakte na.


Gauri ran to arohi's room


gauri : arohi tayaar ho gai ho ? Larkewale a gai hain tumhe deek ne

arohi darwaza kholo !!!!


arohi opened the door


arohi : kya hai aap muje apne kamre main araam se rehne nehi de sakti kya


gauri (with angry face ): tum abhi tak tayaar nehi hui ? Larke wale to a bhi gai hai !


arohi : to main kya karu. Aap unse kahe ke wo chale yai jahan se.

Muje shadi nehi kar ni


Gauri: lekin kyu.


Arohi : Agar aap ko meeri shadi kawane ka itana hi shok hai to aap pehle gud kyu nehi shaadi kar thi.

Aap ki ummar ho rahi hai aap to mujse 5 years bari hai na main to abhi sirf 18 years ki hu . Or wese abhi to meri padhai bhi puri nehi hui.

main kya karu gi itani choti ummar main shadi kar ke.








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Posted: 14 years ago
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index

chapter 1 pg 1
chapter 2 pg 3
chapter 3 pg 5
chapter 4 pg 9
chapter 4 scene 2 pg 11
chapter 5 pg 12
chapter 6 pg 14
chapter 6 scene 2 pg 16
chapter 7 scene 1 pg 19
chapter 7 scene 2 pg 26
chapter 8 pg 27
chapter 9 pg 31
chapter 10 pg 33
chapter 11 pg 45
chapter 11 scene 2 pg 48
chapter 11 scene 3 pg 55
chapter 12 pg 59
chapter 12 scene 2 pg 61
chapter 12 scene 3 pg 68
chapter 13 pg 73
chapter 14 pg 78
chapter 14 scene 2 pg 86
chapter 15 pg 88
chapter 15 scene 2 pg 96
chapter 15 scene 3 pg 100
chapter 16 pg 113
Edited by ...Sheher... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo on your ff!!!
welcome to the league...lol
you never told us anything abt this??
it'll be great to read!!
please update asap!! dont delay like me😆
do add me to your pm list!!
me first to read!!
yea...why is she getting married??
Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks varsh i will add you in my pm list

and i'm not gonna tell you wy she's getting married you have to wait for that 😉
Edited by ...Sheher... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nicee!!!!!!!!
add me 2 ur pm list!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start...continue soon N add me in ur pm list...
...Sheher... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz add me in your buddylist

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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo fr ur ff...
its very nice sheher..do continue n add me to ur pm list..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's awesome
do continue and pm me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz people hite the like button if you liked the update :)

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