Precious Love MG FF Part 11 PG 58 20/06/2011 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bansipatel



"nautanki gang"🤣
lolz...tumhari ff's padh padh kar mein bhi nautanki ho gayi...😆
yaar shika plz aaj ek lamba sa update dedo OS k liye...plz yaar
me waitin 4 it eagerly...😳


update toh long hi hoga as i dont wanna drag it more. Par when will i update, this depends upon the great electricity department 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

i love being the youngest . . . bohot faide hote hain😆 challo now as we are little babies gimme a hug baby one



me2 me2...me also is a teenager...😉...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved bth the updates
Geet is jus fab
Love her
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--


update toh long hi hoga as i dont wanna drag it more. Par when will i update, this depends upon the great electricity department 😆



chalo to phir intezaar hi karenge...😒
aur kar bhi kya kar sakte hai...😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiii... aur kitni der lagegi...???
waitin dear...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey bansi welcome to the darling gang . . ..

Challo hop in the hug . . .
Anyway maximum one hour more . . . one song seq is left rest of it is done . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

Hey bansi welcome to the darling gang . . ..

Challo hop in the hug . . .
Anyway maximum one hour more . . . one song seq is left rest of it is done . . .



haha maine jump kar liya tumhare hug me...😆
me is besharam i kw i kw...
lekin kya kare sab ff writers ki waja se aisi ho gayi hoon😆😉
lolz take ur time me will wait...eagerly 4 da update...😛
aur thank u 4 lettin me hop in ur gang...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 11

~PAST~

As soon as Maan heard this, his fingers balled into a fist as anger griped him.

"How could you not tell us?" Meera yelled at the top of her voice.

"There was nothing to tell" Geet replied with a straight face.

'Ok. Geet was after all a fourteen year old' Maan heaved a dejected sigh looking at how casually Geet was taking all this.

"Someone was stalking you and you took it so lightly" Annie screamed as she sprang on her feet and walked over to

Geet just as Geet stood up with a rueful smile playing at her lips and replied back "That comes from you Annie"

"Sorry" Annie exclaimed as she tried to figure out the meaning behind Geet's statement.

Crossing her hands over her chest Geet replied "He did not exactly stalk me but if I am not wrong he has been stalking you for the past one month"

Meera's gaped at her friends as Maan seethed with anger at that moron who dared stalk HIS sister and above all he felt utterly disappointed at his sister who did not trust him enough to share her problems with and more so he felt frustrated with self, how could he have been oblivious to all this. He, who should have broken the bones of that scoundrel who dared stalk his sister, did not even have the slightest clue about just what his baby sister was facing all the while. A month went by with his sister, who he vowed to protect from any harm, in trouble and he knew nothing about it. He failed as an elder brother, he failed his sister and he failed himself. But with the thwarting realisation that he lagged behind in fulfilling his duty as an elder brother, he had also somewhere felt relieved that his sister had a good friend' a real good friend.

"You knew" Annie exclaimed.

"Like I just told Meera . . . I have got eyes" Geet smiled wryly.

"But then you complained that--

"Had I told the principal that he was stalking a friend of mine he would have wanted to hear it from you and as far as I know you, you would have denied flat on the face." Geet said rather calmly as the next second Annie hugged her "Thanks"

Pulling out of the hug Geet whispered softly "You should be strong enough to take a stand for yourself"

"Geet don't you feel apprehensive of taking pangaas from each and every person" Meera asked still amused at the entire situation.

"What's wrong is wrong . . . no question of trepidation" Geet stated as a matter-of-factly.

Shifting her gaze from Meera to Annie Geet rasped "You should have told your brother about it though"

"Geet har cheej itni simple nahi hoti . . . tere liye kehna easy hai as you don't have a sibling. You cannot go and tell your bro . . .Bhai someone is stalking me and that someone is also your jaani dushman"

"You could have told your grandmother" Geet argued.

"Had you been in my place would you have told your mom?" Annie countered.

"No" came a sharp reply from a seemingly calm Geet.

"There you go" Annie said as she clicked her fingers.

Moving towards the window Geet stood their silently for a few seconds before she replied "I wouldn't have told her as I know I am capable of handling it on my own, why bother her and besides once everything would have been sorted I would have told her." Geet had always been her father's pride, his baby doll but a strong one. She could never see herself as a mute spectator to injustice or wrong doings, because she wasn't brought up that way. She was more than capable of handling her life all by herself and if need be she could take care of her loved ones as well.

"You're impossible" Annie frowned.

"As you like it" Geet winked at Annie, looking over her shoulders.

*******

"Mom the weather is stormy and it's not safe to drive back so we'll be staying back at Annie's farmhouse. I'll be home in the morning." Geet said holding the phone close to her ear. "Mom, I cannot hear you" she squealed. "Mom, you there . . . Mumma . . . Are you there . . . I will be coming home in the morning, Mom." Then the line went dead.

*******

Cool wind wafted through the open windows, throwing a few loose strands of hair onto her face, making her frown as she pushed the hair behind her ear. She looked so innocent. She did not look like a kind of girl who could get anyone rusticated. She looked so nave and gullible but she was quite the opposite. With an enigmatic air about her, no one could make out what was happening inside that seemingly clam exterior which she had adopted as a shield or rather as a cover to conceal her real self.

Walking over to her, he stood next to her, with his hands carelessly placed at the windowpane he stared out at the pouring rain.

"You know eavesdropping is not particularly good manners" She said as he shifted his gaze to look at her embarrassed that his act had been caught.

"Uh . . . Now that I have been caught" he smiled as he looked at her "Thanks for helping out my sister"

"She is my friend. I did her no favour. So thanking me is out of question" Geet replied curtly.

"Thanks anyway"

"You don't give up, now do you"

She looked at the window pane as she played with the water droplets resting at its rim. A small smile touched her lips as she felt tiny droplets fall onto her face through the window. There was a time when she'd play in the rain and get all muddy. Her father was not really fond of rain but as she loved it, ignoring everything else he'd simply enjoy with his baby doll. For him, her happiness came above all.

Although Maan hated rain and anything muddy and dirty and wet for the matter, but seeing that smile on her face he knew she liked rain and that was reason enough for him to stop hating rain. Involuntarily his hand reached out of the window and the next moment he splashed a hand full of water right on her face.

She gasped. Her mouth opened in a wide 'O' and before he knew it she'd already returned the favours.

"Just wait" with that said he walked over to the kitchen as they stood there puzzled at his reaction. She expected him to splash some more water onto her, but he simply walked off.

Then she saw him walk back to her with his hands behind his back. Now, something was fishy.

He emptied bottle full of chilled water all over her. She gaped at him before he handed the emptied bottle to her and left from there, smirking to himself.

It was then she went to the kitchen and filled the bottle before running after him. She chased him round the room as he ducked his away from her every time she got close. Lifting the cushion from the couch, she hurled it towards him just as he dodged his head and moved towards the window. Jumping out of the window, he winked at her as he said "I am already drenched, now you cannot possibly have anything to do"

"You bet" saying so, she took off her shoes as she kept the bottle on the ground and hopped out of the window and into the rain.

*******

They were running round the garden, barefoot with messy hair and muddy clothes. Who was chasing whom was something even they did not know. They were behaving like kids but what is life without some fun element in it.

He held her wrist as he pulled her backwards as she crashed into his chest. The impact with which she collided into him was way too sudden for him to handle as he stumbled and fell onto the wet grass with her atop him. She moved to the side, as she closed her eyes relishing the feel of rain falling onto her face. He looked at her from the corner of his eyes as he smiled. Well, turned out rain wasn't as bad as he considered it to be.

She was chuckling softly as she rested on the ground with him by her side.

"Lovely weather" he shrieked as he sat upright.

"Indeed" she said "I love rain. You know me and dad would never sit indoors in such weather. We'd have a full time fun. He did not really like the rain" suddenly the smile vanished off of her face as she sat upright and added "He did not like water. He just endured the wet stuff cause of me. He'd do anything for me" Thinking about the still fresh memories, brought tears in her eyes. Despite of the fact that she never cried in front of other, for once she did fight back her tears. With him there was this 'thing' in the air which made her momentarily let go of the inhibitions she had set on herself.

Every time the rain comes down
Close my eyes and listen

Unwillingly or willingly, she did not but the words simply escaped her throat as she got on her feet.


I can hear the lonesome sound
of the sky as it cries

Opening her arms she twirled around as she sang, remembering the days when her father would shriek in the rain just so he could see that pout of his baby doll's face.



Listen to the rain
Here it comes again
Hear it in the rain

He watched her twirl from a distance and although her tears were invisible to the naked eye as they fell onto the ground mixed with the rain water, he could still see them. He knew exactly what was the reason the tears escaped her eyes. She missed her father. In all the time he's known her, which was merely two days, he knew whatever the reason was behind her pain, it had everything to do with her father.


Feel the touch of tears that fall
They won't fall forever

In the way the day will flow
All things come, all things go

The rain washed away her tears as he hugged herself standing still. She missed hearing her father say 'Baby doll'. She missed him pampering her. She missed him singing rather shrieking her to sleep. She missed the piggy back rides she forced her father to give her. She missed going out on long drives with him. She missed planning against her mother with him. She missed cribbing about his dressing sense. She missed sulking, when he refused to give her what she wanted which was quite rare. She missed silently peeping inside his room to see him romancing with her mother. She missed everything about him. But she would never miss fulfilling every single dream of his.

Listen to the rain... the rain
Here it comes again... again
Hear it in the rain... the rain

He walked over to her as he held her hands and pulled them away from her chest as he smiled at her. He wiped away the tears that rested by the side of her swollen red eyes and held her hand in assurance.



Late at night I drift away
I can hear you calling
And my name is in the rain
Leaves on trees whispering
Deep blue seas, mysteries

Smiling through the tears she pulled her hand back as she held her locket and ambled through the garden with him walking by her side silently hearing her sing. She knew her father was out there somewhere, and missing her too.



Even when this moment ends
Can't let go this feeling
Everything will come again

Her father was her mentor and the best quality about him was his patience. He had the ability to never lose his cool, even in the worse of situations, something she could never do till three months back. If he had the capability to handle everything calmly, she'd rather create a fuss about it. But with him, now no longer by her side, she'd learnt to be a bit more patient as that was the call of the time. She needed control over her emotions if she wanted to make his dream come true and so she was in control, always on her guards but with this guy, somewhere down the line she'd lay her armour down.

In the sound falling down
of the sky as it cries
Hear my name in the rain

She concluded the song with a wry smile just as he squeezed her hand and pulled her into him. Wrapping one hand behind her back, he guided hers over his shoulder as he asked "May I have a dance"

"Without Song" she raised her brows as she smiled knowingly. His grip round her waist tightened as he said "Well what's better than the sound of nature and to add lyrics to the natural music of the rain, I know a girl who fills in perfectly and cheery on top she is a natural too"

"Like that . . . Uh huh"

He swayed pulling her along as he said "Yep, like that it is. Well the music is there we need lyrics and then we'll have a song"

Then she smiled as she held his neck firmly and sweet melody filled the air but only after her mentally noting . . .

First Rain Dance

Age-14

Year-2006

Place- A farmhouse

Partner - Maan

~*~*~*~

Precap: "Keep your hands to yourself... if you want them intact" She warned as she held his hand mid air--

~*~*~*~

Finally I updated this after a LONG time . . . Better late than never . . . Now me off to write BSLS . . .
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Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was Beautiful!!!

loved it ...have beautifully portrayed Geet's pain of missing her father.

wonderful!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update... like how strong , resolute yet even tempered and simple she is.. their friendship is so .. so .. honest, and refreshing..
interesting precap.
do post the next part soon.

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