EPISODE @ 1(college story) :New HERO :With Mona

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys , as we all know that Nishant is leaving the show..so I want the next track to be quite interesting and entertaining with lots of love and fun.and emotions. So I just decided to paste you some story which i recently read and liked it...Hope you guys will like it and will definetly provide your comments...

Here we go..


Before My track to start,i want the present track with the following end. i want Anukalp to have his last breath( No Offence and pls dont mind all Anukalp fans) and also everyone of gandhi family realizes their mistakes and Ambaaji makes mona to believe she is there for her for everything...and convinces MONA TO START STUDYING.

"Mona character will have a lot of change in her attitude and behaviour after leap"
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NEW TRACK: NEW STO RY: EPISODE 1
@College :
Hero is narrating the story:
We are planning to go for a movie on Saturday. How many of you would be interested?" one Thursday end of the day, our class rep asked this. All of us raised our hands except MONA. He said, "Okay, interested people, please bring 120 bucks tomorrow so we can book the tickets as fast as we can" All of us tapped our desks with joy. It had been two months since we joined college and we knew each other in the class by their names and our friendship' gang started to build up. There was lot of fun during class and off class hours. All of us started to go out for movies, restaurants, birthday parties etc, except MONA...

Mona used to be alone and aloof always. She used to sit in the last bench and never spoke with anyone. All the other students were scared to talk to her as she was grumpy and a cranky person. She had displayed her anger many a times with other students. She was good looking but I think she would look beautiful if she smiled because no one had ever seen her smiling. Her pet name was "Miss. Long Face". None of us in the class liked her but she used to do her assignments and record works promptly and had a good name among the lecturers. She was good at studies too and class topper while I used to rank from 4 to 7.

Friends: Suggest a name for I in above story..

************************End of todays episode*******************************
Hope you all guys likes it and will suggest with your ideas...Alos let me know if you dont like..will try..
NOTE: This is not my story i just read it some where and liked it..so posting here...
Those who read this story, dont forgot to rate the chaska meter and visit SARA's profile ...and comment there...
Alo press like button if you like it..i t will gives me boost and horlicks to post next episodes...
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sri11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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will come with next episode tomorrow.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi sri...thanks you so much..I always likes college stories...am happy thaty mona is going to college..pls continue...
I want hero name to be RAHUL.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh sri you started the story..will follow for sure...so u killed anukalp...haha
new story is fantastic...mona has attitude problem..wow...so you changed her completely...so waiting for second episode...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpi9

Hi sri...thanks you so much..I always likes college stories...am happy thaty mona is going to college..pls continue...

I want hero name to be RAHUL.

Thanks for liking it..
Rahul --lets us if i get any entries...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saraharshad

oh sri you started the story..will follow for sure...so u killed anukalp...haha

new story is fantastic...mona has attitude problem..wow...so you changed her completely...so waiting for second episode...

u know Actually in my story that heroin character is like that only..so i changed mona's here...thanks for liking it..suggest some name for hero..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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where is the second episode...interesting line...keep posting...
Want hero name to be prem..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadhanalov

where is the second episode...interesting line...keep posting...

Want hero name to be prem..

Prem...my favourite name...let's see if we get any other options
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sri, i really like your new track! i also can't wait to see in what direction you are going to take it. Definitely will be anticipating the next episode in your track.

I do have one question tho, why is Mona so grupy? I can understand sad and depressed but grumpy?

All in all i think it was an excellent story 👏

Personally, i would like the hero to be named Anaadi 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice track Sri11. I did read it before, but forgot to respond. It is a nice start.

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