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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
here is my reply to all those who comment!!
(sorry was abt to reply in one whole post but there was some limit for number of words and all i typed for the past 1 hour plus plus was GONE!!!😭 damn limit!!😡 so here i'm rewriting it for those comment page by page)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
here is my reply to all those who comment!!
(sorry was abt to reply in one whole post but there was some limit for number of words and all i typed for the past 1 hour plus plus was GONE!!!😭 damn limit!!😡 so here i'm rewriting it for those comment page by page)
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shah10: thx shah for ur comment!! reali hapi to see u show ur support!! will pm u when i update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye hoye looks like our maan is falling for geet big time and what's this big mystery I can't wait to find out as it's making me curious by geets behaviour especially towards muskaan anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all congo for your FF zoon.

Very nice update. Loved how Maan did not want Geet to be the bride of Karan just for an assumption too.

What had happened to Muskan?

Looking forward for your next update.

Chella.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shamima-

Oye hoye looks like our maan is falling for geet big time and what's this big mystery I can't wait to find out as it's making me curious by geets behaviour especially towards muskaan anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

here is my reply to all those who comment!!
(sorry was abt to reply in one whole post but there was some limit for number of words and all i typed for the past 1 hour plus plus was GONE!!!😭 damn limit!!😡 so here i'm rewriting it for those comment page by page)
REPLY FOR PAGE 9:
-shamima- : haha next part will be long and more abt geet will be revealed!!! 😉 will pm the update soon!!!
Chelsha: thx for your comment chella!! well i have updated part three!! and wat u mean by what happen to muskaan?😕 will pm you the update and add you in my pm list!!
bhanu_rekhag: thx for ur comment!! reali feel hapi you guys are interested in reading it!!will update it soon!!
rs12345: thx dear! feel motivated with ur comments!! will be updating it soon!!
Kinma: thx for the comment!! reali hapi to see that u guys like my ff!!
preethia: glad that you find it interesting!! i've added you in the pm list and updated part 4! hope you like it and do leave ur comment or feedback behind!!
am_sweet_pari: thx for the comment!! see ur guys comment reali made me hapi!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
wow interesting concept...
being rich y does geet wanna do this course...
is maan stalking geet...
seems geet muskan r sisters...
sent u buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
hey hi guys hope you have liked my ff so far!! little upset yst with the number of like and comments compared to the viewers!!😭
well i'm on cloud 9 today as it's the best day of my life!! 😃Firstly i got registered for my dream course which i have been waiting for long! Secondly i heard news that our gurti are performancing for SRK's song!! oh my my this has been my wish ever since i got to noe maaneet!!Finally they are performancing for the my all time fav actor's song!!!
since i'm extremely hapi here the update for my ff!!!i didnt want to update today as i got alots of things to do but since i'm extremely hapi tot of sharing it with u guys so i here i am updating part four.. hope you guys enjoy it!! pls do HIT the like button and comment!! ok sorry over excited due to watever happen today... ok now i will stop my bak bak!! 😆 enjoy the part four!! ( sorry guys pls dont mind the name of the place!! i'm not good at giving good details of places!!! hope u would get the idea of what i was trying to mean over here and in my ff!!)
Shaadi.com part four:

Geet: emergency pls go!!

Maan: geet you ok?

Geet: (wondering where her di is and who she was with) ya I'm fine!

Maan: (saw geet in tears and got worried if anything serious has happen)geet is everything alright?

Geet: no maan my di is missing.. she was last seen with a guy!

Maan: last seen?? How did you know?

Geet: her bodyguard called me saying she's missing!! DAM bodyguard!

Maan: geet stop crying!! We will find her and nothing will happen to her.. did you call her??

Geet: yup but she is not answering the call..

After 15 minutes, they reach marina beach and walked towards prem.

Geet: where the hell is she?

Prem: I'm not sure mdm! All long she was with a guy near my vision and then suddenly'

Geet: oh shut up prem!! If I can't find her your hell time is starting!! Go find her that side.. I will go this side.. call me if you have found her! let's go maan!

After 30 minutes of searching for her.. Geet saw her di standing in a corner with a guy and ran towards her..

Geet: maan I found her.. she over there! DI!!

Muskaan (heard her sis voice and turned around. She was found geet worried and running to her): geetbaby??

Geet(happy to see her di alright.. cried and hugged her..): told you to call me right? you know how worried I was when I couldn't find you..( cried in her hug and suddenly her voice disappeared)

Muskaan( geet was quiet for sometime and when muskaan moved her to the front to see her, she realized she had fainted): geetbaby?

Maan(just in time held her):geet? geet? we need to bring her to hospital!

Muskaan: ok let's go!

Maan: I will carry her.. jai go get the car!!

Jai: sure!!

Finally they reach the hospital. Maan carried her inside when Dr Armaan saw geet being carried by someone and he rushed to her..

Dr Armaan: hey sugar!(looking at her with concern)what happen? How come she is unconscious?

Maan: doc please check her first?

Dr Armaan( shouted for a stretcher and put geet on it): bring her to the emergency ward.. inform Dr Anjali! (on shift for emergency case)Get her to emergency ward..

Ward boy: ok doc!

Maan used geet's phone informed prem and told him to go back home and report to work tomorrow. After sometime Dr Armaan and Dr Anjali came out..

Dr Armaan: you guys are her friends?

Maan: yup! Is she alright?

Dr Armaan: ya she is fine.. I will observe her for the day.. you guys can go back rest and come back tomorrow will inform you if anything..(left after saying it with Dr Anjali)

Maan: muskaan and jai go back home first.. I will stay and keep you informed.. jai drop muskaan home..

Jai: hmmm ok muskaan will drop you home..

Muskaan: pls call me if anything!!

After all gone, maan went inside and sat beside geet held her hand and slept looking at her..Next morning Dr Armaan came in, saw maan holding geet's hand and cough to wake him up.

Maan: oh hi doc.. good morning?

Dr Armaan: hi I'm Dr Armaan.. good morning! Didn't you go back?

Maan: no was just worried about her so I stayed here.. when will she be conscious?

Dr Armaan: hmmm anytime soon.. her pressure is normal so not to worry.. I will go for my rounds and drop by later..

Maan: hmm ok doc..thx!

After the Dr Armaan left, maan continued holding her hands and gently slide her hair behind her ears.. Few minutes later, geet regained conscious..

Maan: you are awake..(with a smile)

Geet: maan? (looking around)where is di? Is she alright? (tried to get up)

Maan: hey relax! I told jai to send her back home and she is fine.. will be coming here later.. you just rest!

Geet: jaI??

Maan: ya he was the one with her yesterday!(geet moved her hand away from him and just then Dr Armaan came in to check her)

Dr Armaan: hey sugar you are up!

Geet: hey hi armaan!!(gave him a warm hug which maan felt little uncomfortable.. both broke their hug) armaan can you get the paperwork for my discharge?

Dr Armaan: discharge? Are you out of your mind?

Geet: I'm fine armaan.. pls I got lots to do..

Dr Armaan: you will never listen.. ok I will go do the paperwork and come..

Geet: thx!! you're the best..

Dr Armaan left geet looked around for her phone when maan asked her what she was looking for..

Maan: what are you looking for?

Geet: my phone!

Maan: oh it's with me!(taking it out from his pocket)sorry I used it to inform prem yesterday..

Geet:PREM? Oh ya I forgot!(just when she was about to call prem.. muskaan, jai and prem entered the room)di!(both hugged each other then later broke apart) why you didn't inform me yesterday where you were going?

Muskaan:sorry!( holding her ears)

Geet: don't do that again! (realised jai and prem was around also)

Jai: you guys know each other?

Maan: ya that's her sis!

Geet: jai what you doing here?

Maan: oh he was there with muskaan yesterday and he was the one who drove you here..

Geet (looked at him not pleased and then turned to prem): WHY ARE YOU STILL HERE?

Prem: woh mdm I '

Geet: go get from my secretary your pay and leave!! DON'T EVER CQME BACK!

Prem: mdm please give me a chance.. I won't do this again.. I reali need this job!

Geet (stared at him angrily): PREM GET OUT!

Dr Armaan (entered the room): hey sugar it's done! (looking at the documents in his hand..then later looked up and realized what happen)oh I'm sorry! Did I interrupt something?

Geet: it's ok armaan.. come in..

Dr Armaan: sugar now which poor soul are you firing?(walked towards geet put his hands over which made maan jealous)

Geet: armaan stop it!(looked at prem) you see me later at my office.. GO NOW! (after prem left, geet looked at armaan)Armaan paperwork' done?

Dr Armaan: yup sugar!

Geet: thanks! Oh ya this is my di, muskaan; jai my classmate and maan my friend.. and this is Dr Armaan my close friend..(smiled at armaan and gave a side hug)

Jai/ muskaan/ maan: HI!

Dr Armaan: hi! Oh maan didn't you go back since you were here the whole night?

Geet: here the whole night? (looked at maan for an answer)

Maan: aahhh ya was worried about you so I..

Geet: hmmm ok.. why don't you guys go back? I will meet you guys in the evening..

Muskaan/ jai/maan: OK!

Muskaan: but geetbaby where are you going?

Geet: I'm going to meet my darlings! (armaan and geet looked and smiled at each other knowing what I meant) so you guys go first!

Maan: geet want me to drop you after that?

Geet: aahh no it's ok.. you should be tired staying here all night'

Maan: no no I will drop you and go back..

Dr Armaan: sugar let him come!

Geet: hmmm ok! Let's go then! Hey armaan got chocolates and sweet for them?

Dr Armaan: oh ya I will go get it while you guys go there first..

Geet: ok thx! Maan let's go!(jai and muskaan went back after hugging her sis..while walking towards the children section)maan?

Maan: ya!

Geet: thx!

Maan: for??

Geet: staying with me all night and helping me find my di!

Maan: oh it's ok!

At the children section when all the kids saw geet di, they ran to her giving her a big hug.

Geet: hi sweethearts! How are you guys? (hugging them back with tears of missing them)

Kids: we missed you a lot!

Aditiya(one of the kids): How come you never come and see us.. forget us ready?

Geet: forget you all? Impossible! Sorry held up with work.. sorry? (held her ears)

Sonia(one of the kids): ok but promise you won't do this again?

Geet: promise?

Kids: pakka??

Geet: pakka promise! (hugged them back and looked around for sonali)hey where is sonali?

Raj: she is very angry with you!

Geet: why? Where is she?

Raj: at her usual place! And geet di who is this? (pointing at maan)

Geet: oh he is my..

Raj: I know I know.. boyfriend right?

Geet and Maan looked at each other lost in their eyes.. then both snapped out after few seconds..

Geet: raj he is my friend! Sirf mera dost! (maan looked at how geet was smiling sweetly explaining to raj and smiled at himself.. he went forward to the kids)

Maan: hello I'm maan your di's friend! You are?

Kids(all hugged): hi maan bhai!

After playing with them for sometime...

Geet: ok kids armaan bhai will bring you chocolates, sweets and lots of toys! You guys play with them while I go see sonali ok?

Kids: OK!!

Geet: maan let's go!

Maan: where?

Geet: to meet my baby! Come let's go!

Precap: who is sonali? How is she related to geet?

Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

SO my little sister ishh shooo happy tdy and updated the nxt part... JAAN THINGS ARE GETTING FUNNY HERE because knw the real story which had real names and its nice to imagine maaneet in it...

so everyone PLS comment and like my sissy ff... or else im ST with eveyone...😆😆
srry sis but btw where are u nw?? im bored... gimme a call... ABHI... varna!!!!!😉😆😆😆
srry im littering the place with my stupidity... okay im off... waiting for reply and CALL!!!!!!😡😆😆
Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here is to all those who comment me:
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zaara25: wow after soo long u commenting on me!! hapi to noe that u take ur time to comment me even though u noe the story!! anyways u love littering around and try to be funny at times!! i noe u and gt used to all ur NAUTAKI stuff!!! 😆will pm u the updates doing my free time!!
PrithviSanyo1: thx for ur comment!! hapi u loved it! find out more in the next update!
preethia: haha!! how's armaan related to geet u have to read more of my updates to noe and what relation sonali has ...😈 u will fine it out in the next update!!!
MaaneetLuverr: thx dear!! u will find out in next update!! goin to a surprise!!
Shalve: hey hi thx for ur comment!! will try and update soon!!
bangalores: thx di! will update when i'm free but dont worry will update soon!! haha wonder what is ur conclusion curious to noe!!! do pm me it reali eager to noe!!! oops i juz read ur pm di you juz made me drop down laughing!!! well u will noe it on my next update!! not going to give you any hints!!😈
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aarthirajendran: thx for the reply!! ok i willl be honest with you i reali dont noe any beach in India so i came out with marina as singapore has marina beach.. if u noe a beach in india that has restaurant do tell me so i can edit that part!! sorry i didnt give much details in the place!! if u noe pls kindly do pm me it will be a great help!!
maaniqra: thx iqra! hapi to noe you liked it!!! will update soon!
smallville: hey hi thx for the comment!! i'm not sure if i have pm you the updates!! if you want to be added in my pm list pls do tell me!!
shah10: thx for the comment!! hapi to noe u loved it!! will update soon!!
shradha14: thx for the comment!! will pm u the updates adn add u in my pm list!! pls do leave ur comment on how is my ff!!!
saher_90: thx seher alot!! you are reali a true friend!! love u alot!!! will continue pm u the updates!!
amalu123: thx for ur comment!! will pm u my updates soon!!
bhanu_rekhag: thx for ur comment!! will update soon!!
OK GUYS NEXT TIME I REPLY TO THOSE WHO GIVE ME LONG COMMENTS AND TO NEW READERS!!!! AND FOR THOSE ANGELS WHO COMMENTS THANKS IN ADVANCE!! LOVE U GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT!!
PLS DO FEEL FREE TO LEAVE BEHIND UR FEEDBACK AND HIT CONTINUE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON!!
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Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
congrats fr joining ur desired course...
howz armaan related to geet...
so this sonali..another sister of geet?

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