MG FF: Shaadi.com updated part 12 page 39 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Lovely update::
Awww love how maan was worried for geet
Wonder hu Sonali is
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
congrats on 'your wish come trues'
hope u will always be this happy! leading into more nd more surprise i see...have got my own conclusions drawn..give me ur ear so that i can whisper 😆...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
@zooni dear i asked the back drop coz if in India means is it in north like delhi r down south tamil nadu as u mentioned Marina beach...tats y i asked the back drop...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Superbly written sweetheart🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
great update plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
I am very happy too zoon that you've got registered in your favourite course.
Congrats to you dear.
...since Geet panicked, i was afraid something unexpected would have happened to Muskan.
...as zaara told she knew the real names of the characters i guess some real incidents are also included in your story. It makes the story more interesting.
😆 Hey i am already in your pm list buddhu. Otherwise how would have i known that my dearest zoon has started writing a wonderful FF? ... Sorry i couldnt comment for the first two parts coz my inbox was full at that time and i didnt get your pms.
...now coming to your fresh update, ha i liked every bit of it. Loved Maan for taking care of Geet. Hey Maan is J of Armaan. Good signs for starting a love story. 😉 Want to know who Sonali is.
I know you can understand Tamil.
So only one word for you in Tamil.
'Kalakkura zooni.'
😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Here is to all those who comment me:
REPLY FOR PAGE 12:
jazz07_dh: thx dear!! hope ur support continues!! will be updating soon after my night class!!
nosi: thx nosi!! hapi to see ur comment!!! will update my ff after my class today!
Chelsha: thx alot chella!! i reali missed talking to you!! haha some part of it but i changed a bit and used it for maaneet! well dear i will be uopdating more later so do leave ur comment!! i noe you will always give ur support to me so i added u in my pm list!!😉 its ok dear!! feel so hapi to read ur comment!! hmmm i'll reveal who is sonali is in my next update!! haha thx i did understand that word!!! pls cotinue show ur support feel motivated by it!!
rs12345: thx for ur comment!! pls do continue showing ur support!!
surbhijn106: hey hi juz came back frm my class!! glad to noe you liked my ff!! added u in my pm list!! will update my next part soon!! pls do leave ur comment or feedback abt it!!! thx do continue to show ur support!!!
rsroopali: hey hi nice knowing you!! i have added u in my pm list!! hope u like my next update!!! pls do continue show ur support!!
OK GUYS NEXT TIME I REPLY TO THOSE WHO GIVE ME LONG COMMENTS AND TO NEW READERS!!!! AND FOR THOSE ANGELS WHO COMMENTS THANKS IN ADVANCE!! LOVE U GUYS FOR UR SUPPORT!!
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Love
zooni😉
Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Awsm update soon n do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
wowww zoonie
u hv created nice mystery
waiting for d next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
hey here is the next update! pls hit the like button and comment!
Pls feel free to feedback to me if you have any suggestions!!!
Shaadi.com part five:
They both walked out of the children section went armaan came..

Dr Armaan: leaving ready?

Geet: no going to meet sonali!

Dr Armaan: oh you better be careful she is very angry with you!!

Geet: oops! Well will take this bear for her then..(taking one bear)

Dr Armaan: oh ya later I need to talk to you about her.. come back here later!

Geet: anything serious? (smile simply wiped off hearing it)

Dr armaan: you go meet her first!! Will tell you later..(went in the room)

Maan: hey what happen?

Geet: hmm not sure.. let's go!

Geet and Maan walked towards the garden.. when geet pointed at a small girl with shoulder length hair playing with the butterflies!

Geet (covered her eyes): guess who am I?

Sonali( feeling geet's hand): MUMMY!! (turned and hugged with tears of missing her)

Maan was shocked to hear the small girl calling her mum but kept quiet..

Sonali: you don't love me right? ( breaking the hug)

Geet: oh how can I don't love my darling??

Sonali: then why you never come and see me?

Geet: sorry! (hugged her and kiss her on her cheeks knowing she will melt in it)

Sonali: hmmm you always do this! And who is he? (pointing at maan)

Geet: oh I forgot! He's my friend, maan..

Sonali: sirf dost hai or '

Geet: sonali say hi to uncle!

Sonali: hi maan uncle!

Maan: hi sonali!

Sonali: so where's my gift?

Geet: oh mummy forgot to bring one!

Sonali: mama you can't lie so why are you trying?

Geet: ok here you go! baby have you eaten?

Sonali: SONALI doesn't like eating food here!

Geet: hmm but you can ask armaan uncle to buy for you your favourite, right?

Sonali: but I miss mummy's food!!

Geet: hmm ok I will bring it at night ok..ur usual fav right??

Sonali: ya thx mama! (hugging her bear and kissed mama running off to play) I meet you later bye!!

Geet: bye!!

After sonali left, both walked back to the children section..

Maan: hmm don't mind me asking this? Is she your child?

Geet: yup! Why?

Maan: i didnt noe you were married??

Geet: no i'm not married!!

Maan: then she??

Geet: she was adopted by us!

Maan: adopted? Us? if you don't wish to share with me its fine!

Geet: (closed her eyes feeling the pain of missing him.. after a while) can I talk about this another time?

Maan: ya sure!

Both reach the children section, found them all sleeping. They left the room quietly and went to Dr Armaan office.

Dr Armaan (geet knocked the door): come in! (both entered the room) hey sugar! Come sit down!( geet and maan sat down)

Geet( with worried look): armaan is everything alright?

Dr Armaan: I have gone through check up for sonali and realised that she would be too weak to handle the operation even if I have found a donor..

Geet( tears just flow down her cheeks as she heard those words): but she won't be able to survive very long without the operation.. what am I going to do? I can't lose her also'

Maan who was sitting beside geet held her towards his shoulder let her cry out when armaan came turn the chair and sat in front of her.

Dr Armaan: hey sugar don't cry.. (bought geet forward and hugged her)

Geet(in armaan's embrace): if anything happen to her also, I won't be able to live!

Dr Armaan: sugar stop talking like that! I'm here na.. you noe after that incident she has been badly affected too.. now we have to make her happy and forget abt that incident..this might take some time but it could help on her health.. you don't worry..(wiped her tears)now you go home rest and make sure you eat!(looking at maan)hey take care of my sugar..

Maan: you don't worry.. I will!

Dr Armaan(looking back at geet): don't worry! Nothing will happen to her..ok I will be going for my rounds..(Before armaan was about to leave)

Geet: hey how's your basket?

Dr Armaan: oh basket is fine! Just little angry with me!!

Geet: tum phi na.. you better make it up to her and also tell her I said hi!

After armaan left, maan was relieved that armaan was attached and geet was just his friend..

Maan(with a smiling face which could be seen in his eyes): geet let's go!

Geet: hmm ok.. hey what time are they meeting up for the outing?

Maan: aahh not sure! I will call jai and ask him..

Geet: ok! Before that I need to go home prepare sonali's dinner!

Maan: need to buy anything?

Geet: oh ya she loves chicken! I need to by it.. (walking towards maan's car when geet received a call from muskaan)hello di? Where are you? Why your background have so much noise?

Muskaan: oh I'm outside! Geet remember the class outing?

Geet: oh ya I asked maan to call jai about it..why?

Muskaan: oh they cancelled the outing .. it seems they are busy with their stuff..

Geet: oh ok are you going out?

Muskaan: ya with jai.. pls geetbaby don't worry about me will be home by 10pm.. ok?

Geet: ok I will be late home also.. need to go hospital to see sonali..

Muskaan: ok then you take care.. say hi to sonali.. is maan beside you?

Geet: ya he is.. (looking at him)

Muskaan: just pass the phone to him..

Geet: ok(pass the phone to maan saying it is her di)

Maan: hello muskaan?

Muskaan: hey maan can you please be with geet when she go hospital later?

Maan: oh ya sure no probz!!

Muskaan: thanks maan! Well I'm scared she might faint again and make sure she eats hr medicine which I kept it on her room table.. she will confirm forget about it.. can you remind her or maybe just give her the pills?

Maan: hey muskaan don't worry. I will be with her.. ok anything else?

Muskaan: nothing else bye!

Maan: bye!

Geet: what did my di say?

Maan: nothing she just ask me to be with you..(smiling at her thinking just my day! get to be her for the whole day..what more can I ask for.. thank you God!)

Geet: aahh maan won't your family be worried for you not at home since yesterday?

Maan: don't worry about that only my dadi is staying with me.. I have informed her ready..

Geet: thanks! (stopped walking) maan?

Maan: yes? (stopped and turned to face her)

Geet: friends? (putting her hand forward)

Maan: I tot we are??

Geet: officially haven't..

Maan: (smiled while he put his hand forward shaking) OK OFFICIALLY FRIENDS!!!

Geet: ok let's go!

Maan: when did I stop you! (both laughed and sat in the car)

Geet: oh ya the outing was cancelled..

Maan: oh great!

Geet: huh? Great?

Maan: well I had no interest in going out with them.. it's like of weird you know!

Geet: hmm ya me too! So tell me about your dadi?

Maan: about my dadi? Hmm she is sweet, caring and simple woman who shows love to everyone..

Geet: love to meet her!

Maan: sure why not.. wassey I have already told her about you!

Geet: about me?

Maan(shit what did I juz said.. maan your mouth always open at the wrong time): aahhh well I juz told her that I made a new friend!

Geet: but only now we have become friends right?

Maan( MAAN SINGH KHURANA congrats you just dig your grave! ALL THE BEST!): no I mean i told my dadi that I made new friends in my class..

Geet: ok so what your dadi likes?

Maan(uff that was close):oh she loves sweet dessert..

Geet: ok when I meet your dadi I will do a sweet dessert for her!

Maan: sure!(they reached the mall)let's go get the items!

Precap: flashback on muskaan abt the night she went "missing"!

little secret out about geet!

Edited by zooni20 - 14 years ago

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