**U Me Aur Hum** SaJan OS Pt#2 P#4 [13/06]

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Hello everyone.. 🤗

Thanks a lot for your awesome response in my previous OS "
Pregnant Gunji Ke Nakhre". I was so pleased reading such cute comments. 😳

So here you go! I am back with a new SaJan OS! This idea struck my mind last night when I prepared for sleeping. Well, seriously, do everyone get their writing ideas at night while they sleep? 😆

Anyways, here I start... 😃



Lying on her bed straightly, she stared at the walls sadly. "Now these four walls are my world. Only these four walls!", she said to herself and sighed. She got up from bed and went in front of the mirror. She stared at herself through the mirror with a depressed expression and said, "I wish if that night wouldn't have come in my life. That bad night! Situations would have been a lot different if that night wouldn't have come in my life and destroy my life completely." Tears started rolling down from her beautiful eyes wetting her soft and beautiful cheeks. She sat on a chair in front of the mirror. Closing her eyes, she went to a dream land of her precious memories she shared with the man she loved the most in the whole world.

*Flashback*


Gunjan was sitting on the dinning table and looking at the clock continuously.

"I am so hungry! How much time will it take, Samrat?", Gunjan said making a cute frown expression.

"Only 2 minutes, Chashmish!", Samrat, who wore a chef appron, said while making parathaas.

Gunjan shook her head and sighed.

"Uff this Samrat naa! I wonder what made him think that he'll make the breakfast today." She said.

Samrat, who was standing at a corner with the trey of breakfast in his hands, said sadly, "Chashmish! I made this breakfast only for you with a lot of love and affection and you are talking like this?!"

Gunjan turned her face to Samrat and said sadly, "Aww I am sorry! Please forgive me."

Samrat instantly smiled and said, "It's okay!"

Gunjan smiled. Samrat came to the dinning table, put the trey on the table and sat on the chair in front of Gunjan.

"Chashmish! Please taste the food once. I'm feeling so nervous!", Samrat said cutely.

Gunjan smiled and said, "Wait a minute."

Gunjan teared a small piece of paratha, dipped it into the daal and ate it.

"Wow! Samrat! It's awesome." Gunjan said praising Samrat.

"Really?", Samrat asked again to be sure with a broad smile.

"Yeap! It's really yummy.", Gunjan said with broad smile.

Samrat blushed hearing the praises of his cooking from Gunjan. Suddenly, while eating, Gunjan bit her lower lip very badly with her teeth by mistakenly.

"Aaaoooucchh!", Gunjan said.

Samrat asked worriedly, "What happened Chashmish? Are you alright?"

"I bit my lip by mistakenly. Uff it's paining!", Gunjan said being in pain.

Samrat came close to Gunjan to check what happened.

"Arey it's bleeding!", Samrat said worriedly.

"It's hurting, Samrat!", Gunjan said.

Samrat looked into Gunjan's eyes. Without uttering a single world, he softly touched her lips with his and sucked the blood where it was bleeding. He moved back after a while and saw Gunjan blushing continuously. He smiled seeing her red cheeks. He again placed his lips on hers and kissed her gently. Gunjan's blushing knew no bounds. She blushingly smiled and stood up. ☺️☺️

"I'm coming within a while.", Gunjan said in a lower voice.

She turned around. Just then, Samrat stood up and grabbed her wrist. Her heartbeats went to a fast mode. Samrat came close to her and nuzzled into her soft silky hairs. Gunjan closed her eyes feeling the hot breath of Samrat near her shoulder. What an electrifying moment it was! Gunjan's heart started beating faster than before. Samrat started kissing passionately on her neck and shoulders. Gunjan shyly smiled when she felt the passionate touch of her hubby on hers. ☺️☺️

"Samrat, please leave me naa!", she said slowly.

"I am not feeling like to leave you Chashmish! I am just feeling to hold this moment right here and never let it go away."
, Samrat said lovingly.

The landline rang all of a sudden. Both opened her eyes instantly and moved away from each other in nervousness. Samrat gave an irritating look and said, "Kabab mein haddi kahika!" 🤣😆

Gunjan laughed. She went near the landline and became busy talking with one of her student on the phone. After talking, she came back and said, "Sorry but I have to go to the college now! It's been so late."

Samrat sighed and said sadly, "Bye!"

Gunjan smiled and said, "Don't be so sad, my dear hubby! Give me your precious smile please."

Samrat gave a fake smile. Gunjan understood that.

"I don't want the fake one. I want to see the real smile on your face, sweetheart.", Gunjan said to Samrat cutely.

Saying the word "sweetheart" for him from Gunjan was like a dream for Samrat. And it came true! This time, he smiled broadly and said, "Okay bye! Take care."

Gunjan smiled, gave an one-sided hug to Samrat and left.

*Present*

"I don't deserve you anymore Samrat. I just don't!", Gunjan said sitting in front of the mirror and crying silently.

"You filled my lonely world with a lot of love, affection and happiness, Samrat. I didn't think even in my dreams that I would get such a loving soulmate like you. You made me feel complete! You taught me smiling from heart. But now things have changed! I don't want to be a burden on you anymore. I know that now whenever you see me, you feel miserable. That's why, I have thrown myself out of your life, Samrat. I have come very far! Just because, I don't want to be the reason of your sadness. I am sorry for the sorrows you had for me, Samrat! I am really sorry!", She said and started crying loudly covering her face with her palms. 😭


***

I'll try to update Part 2 ASAP. But not sure! Sorry for that! 😕
Waiting for your appreciaition/criticize. 😊
Please press the LIKE tab too! Thanks. 😳

P.S.- Please post a comment rather than just pressing LIKE! And please please pleaseee post a long detailed comment! 😳 😆

PART 2 - https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1705031&PID=43546441�

My other works -
Dil Ka Rishta [SV FF] (completed)
Its all Destiny [TaAnu and MaYur FF]
Priceless Memories [SV FF]
You Are Mine [AR FF]
Pregnant Gunji Ke Nakhre [SaJan OS]
The Cavernous Perceptions.. A SaJan Saga!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES. :))
*edited*
Hey Bidz!!🤗🤗
I was sooo eager to read your another OS on SaJan!! And thank God I did not had to wait longer!😳
Well, coming to your OS,❤️
It was very nicely written jaana!⭐️⭐️👏👏⭐️
The starting and the ending of this part is quite mysterious... But kinda sad too...
But SaJan romance was just... well my emoticons will express my feelings about their romance-☺️😍☺️☺️☺️😍😍😍☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️
But again back to present..
I'm really eager to know that what happened on that night which makes gunjan think that she doesnt deserves samrat???😲
Plz Plz update the next part soon!!! *desperately waiting*😈
Love,
Ria.😳
P.S- This was a very short part. So, I want the next part to be a longer one.😈😈
Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Unres it soon! I am sooo impatient! 😆
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Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal



Unres it soon! I am sooo impatient! 😆

Edited!!😳😳
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Originally posted by: ria_lovesajan

RES. :))

*edited*
Hey Bidz!!🤗🤗
I was sooo eager to read your another OS on SaJan!! And thank God I did not had to wait longer!😳
Well, coming to your OS,❤️
It was very nicely written jaana!⭐️
The starting and the ending of this part is quite mysterious... But kinda sad too...
But SaJan romance was just... well my emoticons will express my feelings about their romance-❤️
But again back to present..
I'm really eager to know that what happened on that night which makes gunjan think that she doesnt deserves samrat???😲
Plz Plz update the next part soon!!! *desperately waiting*😈
Love,
Ria.😳
P.S- This was a very short part. So, I want the next part to be a longer one.😈😈



Hey don't give the devil look on me.. I am scared.. 😆
Well, I'll try to update soon.. But I am not sure cause my finals are coming up from next week.. 😲
Thanks for the awesome comment, Ria.. 😳
And the mystery of " that night " will be opened in the next update! 😉
Love.. Bidz 🤗

P.S.- I wanted the reason of Gunjan's sorrow for "That Night" to be mysterious, that's why I finished the first part over here! 😆
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiii
awesome os
loved it
loved sajan
sooo cute
plz do writer more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yay! Another OS!!
I loved the flashback! But why is Gunjan not with Samrat? What happened? I guess I'll just have to wait to find out! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awesome OS totally out of this world but wat have Gunjan done...hope every tinh will become fine between the two...
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Res =))

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Hey Bidz!!🤗
Another SaJan OS?😲 You sent me on "Cloud 9!"😍
I am so damn happy!!😃 I feel like dancing!!

It's party time...!!🥳
After reading your PM, I was literally JUMPING in my bed!!🤣

Okay, so it was a smashing, sumptuous, superb, fantastic, gorgeous, mind-blowing👏, terrific, awesome, cute, romantic and MAGICAL OS!👏

I loved the flashback moments!!☺️ Hayyee!!😳 And he made breakfast!😉
Wish I could eat it!!..!!😳😆☺️

Saying the word "sweetheart" for him from Gunjan was like a dream for Samrat. And it came true! This time, he smiled broadly and said, "Okay bye! Take care."
I loved this part to the core!!😳 And also where Sam kissed Gunjan☺️...

Samrat looked into Gunjan's eyes. Without uttering a single world, he softly touched her lips with his and sucked the blood where it was bleeding. He moved back after a while and saw Gunjan blushing continuously. He smiled seeing her red cheeks. He again placed his lips on hers and kissed her gently. Gunjan's blushing knew no bounds. She blushingly smiled and stood up. ☺️☺️

Naughty boy!😉

"I am not feeling like to leave you Chashmish! I am just feeling to hold this moment right here and never let it go away.", Samrat said lovingly.

And this line made me ROFL...!!🤣🤣🤣

The landline rang all of a sudden. Both opened her eyes instantly and moved away from each other in nervousness. Samrat gave an irritating look and said, "Kabab mein haddi kahika!" 🤣😆

But, the thing I did not understand is Gunjan's current scenario!!😕
What has happened to her?😕

"You filled my lonely world with a lot of love, affection and happiness, Samrat. I didn't think even in my dreams that I would get such a loving soulmate like you. You made me feel complete! You taught me smiling from heart. But now things have changed! I don't want to be a burden on you anymore. I know that now whenever you see me, you feel miserable. That's why, I have thrown myself out of your life, Samrat. I have come very far! Just because, I don't want to be the reason of your sadness. I am sorry for the sorrows you had for me, Samrat! I am really sorry!", She said and started crying loudly covering her face with her palms. 😭

Why is she staying away from Sam????


Please Continue Soon👍🏼 for your lovely "DS"😆 or she will die in curiosity...😳
So, Continue with this beautiful SaJan work soon☺️...
Do PM me or else...!!😡

Love❤️ and hugs🤗,

Nivriti aka DS...!!

P.S:: Next time I want a longer update or else!!😈


Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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I'm surely gonna pop out of your computer and kill you if you don't unres it soon! 😡 😆
Getting impatient! Unres it soon! 😉

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