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Posted: 14 years ago
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khanak is sleeping
gb came to her room and woke her up
k- you
gb- showing her a clock and asking her what time it us? (she was upset because khanak broke her rule)
gb- you have to ready by 10 and you are still sleeping , I told you that you have to help me in the kitchen, you have to keep room clean but you haven't done anything
you are breaking my rules over and over
where were you last night I cooked food but you did not ate and now breakfast is ready and you are still sleeping , young people people have a problem half of the time they are on the phone and half of the time they are swishing their time in sleeping
they should be responsible
gb talking about khanak's roommate
khanak started crying
gb- why are you crying I am not going to be soft and now go an take shower
( khanak was looking damn cute while crying )

Scene change
gb-adi scene
adi was talking one if the random guy name hasmukhbhai he was fooling with him
gb enter his room and started yelling at him
he was trying to fool her and buttering her
gb- by tomorrow I want my rent otherwise I will kick you out
(she left from his room)
adi to himself- you cannot kick me out gb till you cannot find a new renter and I am not going to go anywhere soon

scene change Shan duck and puppy
puppy was sleeping on the floor
duck and Shan trying to wake him up
duck-want one room for rent
pupp-you will not get it
duck-why
puppy-you will not get it
Shan - atleast ask to gb once
puppy seeing Shan face in a sleeping mode
but all of a sudden he woke up and trying to recognize Shan
puppy I saw you somewhere
Shan trying to hide his face
puppy-you are hiding your face I have definitely seen you somewhere
gb coming to the hall talking on the phone, ignoring Shan but as soon as she show duck she put her phone down and asked about her money
gb- where is my money
duck - I didnt brought you a money but I brought Shan
he wants a room for rent
gb - but he wants a room he is rich
duck- he use to have money but not anymore
Shan- ya I use to have money but I left my dad house to build my career
gb- no one can leave their house and their parents like that
I dont think so that you need a room specially you are handsome looking guy so all Mumbai linemaro to him and no one talks with that respect specially with the young generation
Shan- I cannot have a girl friend because ( he just stops to blabbering something from his mouth )
and then finally he said I don't have place to leave so I can't have a girl friend
gb- no
Shan- please
gb-no means no
Shan -ok fine even I don't want your kholi
duck-whole city calls him loyal
gb-liar
(khana jumps in between the convo)
khanak-you cannot talk rudely to gb whole mohala is scared of gb
Shan- whole city is s s scared of me
khanak-seeing your face looks like you are a scary cat
they both started blaming each other and start blabbering their negativity
gb gets confused that how they know each other and they are like any one can tell from their faces
and they keep going with their arguments
gb came in betwen- this is gb place not a railway station I am giving him a room because if you are staying then no will have guts to do affair
( they give hi5 to each other )
g- I will kick adi out of the house
all of a sudden puppy recognize Shan
puppy -he is a thief who came last night
s- no I am not a theif does I look like a theif
duck- whole day Shan was with me
s- gb I am telling you he is mad
gb- whole day you are sleeping doing nothing go show his room
p to s - I recognize u you are a theif
s- no I am not
s- come on show my room
p- I will see u
Shan coming to his room where adi is talking over the phone with two girls having 2 cell phone
P- he is a new renter
they both introduce to each other
a- who said that you are going to stay here
s- the owner of this place gb
a- this is my room and no one can kick me out
s- I will feel bad for you if you will be beaten up by gb jadoo
a- no one have a guts to touch me so forget about kicking me out
A- let see how gb is going to kick me out but definitely you are going to be out
I am giving you a advice to move down to a different place I will help you finding more cheaper place
s- no I will stay here because there is something over here and he stops for a few sec looked at him in a attitude
s-c u
a to himself - he is stubborn
( Shan left from his room)
scene change shanak scene which we all are waiting for
khanak stepping out from her room went to see Shan don't know which room she went
Shanak hug very tight hug with so many emotions with all relief
s- now we are going to be in same roof
k- not in one room but same roof is fine
s- Ilu in his husky voice
khanak stares at him lovingly
Shan caressing her lovingly
( must watch scene because time it's so emotion s)
all of a sudden puppy saw them but he didn't have a glasses on so it's hard for him to see the faces clearly
shanak shocked
sorry for delay
This is my first attempt so pls pls any mistakes pls forgive me
one thing just want to say
k was looking damn gorgeous in green suit
s was looking damn hot in that attitude and the expressions was spot on
overall good epi
Shan


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Tora thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
Sorry guys I found 4 to 5 spell mistakes so pls forgive me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3
Thanks Tora! 😊
Another good episode, with lots of variation in terms of emotions portrayed and characters involved.
The Shanak scene... *sigh* ...these two just keep getting better! <3
Looking forward to seeing Shaan's reaction to Adi's little crush on Khanak! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tora,

Lovely update!👏

Really a good episode!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much Tora!!!! great job!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks tora for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Awesome Update Tora🤗🤗🤗🤗loveeed loveeed the episode and especially ShaNak Hug😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Supperb Update Tora..shanak scene was supperb and beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks so much Tora for doing the update with a request at the last minute..
Great update and now i go to watch the epi... *siggghh* i know i am going to looove it!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@veena: if ur gonna watch it...i recommend u watch 2 parts and u will love it!

Shanak scene with Gangubai and Shaan's meeting with Adi...

as a bonus watch Shanak's last scene too...loved it!
Edited by rooj-i - 14 years ago

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