Tangled Hearts|P3, Part 3 Complete 07/12&Pg4Note.

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Hi my name is Shanita, for those who don't know me. I've started writing this story which is linked to all 4 characters, Armaan, Riddhima, Shilpa & Siddhant. I felt like posting this here for a change. This is a short short/one shot. Whatever you call it, it only has a few parts :)
(I will post it in my OS gallery later aswell in the FF section.)
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Index:

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 4
Part 4 - Page 4 *coming soon*
Part 5 - *coming soon*
Part 6 - *coming soon*

NOTE: I am not doing PM lists, as i find that takes to much time, just read the title and you will see the number of pages changing, so yeah you will know. Sorry, but i really hope you understand. Also Silent-readers- people who don't comment/like but they do read, i find it really upsetting if you don't atleast press like. I understand if you don't comment but atleast press like so i know people are reading&like the story. Please feel to critisize me, it helps me ALOT! So do say,''Your shit, i hate your FF.'' -- Don't worry i won't mind as long as you tell me WHY, so i can improve! & FINALLY ONE LAST THING: My updates will be short& i don't update regulary cos of my exams, but after the 22nd of june, i will update regulary :) But i don't think it will last that long, it only has a few parts. So uh let's see!
Thank you! That's all. ENJOY <33333

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Tangled hearts/AR/SR/AS/SS OS

Part 1:

This is a simple story of 4 tangled hearts in a web of lies Armaan, Riddhima, Shilpa and Siddhant. One dreadful lie ruined 4 souls, crushed all relationships and all that was left was bitterness between them, and tears which stained their hearts. They fought a battle between friendship and love, truth and lies and all they we're left with was nothing but pain and agony. They watched each other suffer thorough their grief and felt the tears flowing prick their broken heart. What lie tore 4 friends apart? 4 lovers apart? Will they reconcile?

Riddhima's POV:

Tears descended down my face as I clasped the picture to my soulless, weak body. I have no power within me to open my eyes. I looked paler than an ill person. They we're lucky; it was only physical pain that wore them apart. But me? Both pains increased ripping me apart. I couldn't understand how something so drastic could change all relationships. These same relationships took years to form, but only seconds to demolish them. Human power is very strange; it acts as a catalyst - very powerful and active but also acts as an ant - very weak and fragile.

It's been 3 years, we all lived in one house yet, the huge differences which had broken us apart also broke the house apart. It was no longer a home. ''Riddhima.'' Someone called out to me, when I listened carefully I realized it was a familiar female voice. Holding myself together I slowly got out of the awkward position I sat in and grasped the door handle to open it. ''Hi Riddhima, I came to call you for dinner.'' Shilpa spoke awkwardly not looking at me. ''I'm coming in a few minutes.'' I whispered hoping she heard. My voice was quieter than a library. She nodded walking away. I sighed heavily. Shilpa was my younger sister, who used to call me Di and now' well, I guess since time changes, circumstances change, people change and so do relationships. We we're no longer sisters, friends and we worst of all, we weren't even sister-in-law's. Oh, how much I longed to hear 'Di' from her mouth.

I slowly walked downstairs grasping onto the sides balancing myself. I gazed over at the table where Shilpa placed dinner. I knew she had already eaten and left from there. Armaan had probably eaten before here. Sid would be arriving soon and'now we would have to face each other again after that disturbing argument in the morning.

''Shilpa! Where is my file?'' Armaan screamed from his room frightening Shilpa out of her wits. She ran towards their room as I heard Armaan throwing tantrums and scolding her. This was not done. This habit of his (shouting at Shilpa) needing to go away. I got up from the table about to walk to their room when Sid said,''If you enter that room, I will divorce you.'' I turned around preventing my tears from falling. ''But Sid, Shilpa is my sister. I need to help her.'' I winced feeling the pain wrap itself around my body as poison. ''Where was this, when she needed you 3 years back?'' He gritted through his teeth. ''Where was this so-called love and affection then?'' He clenched his fists and walked out of the house. I cried hysterically. My sister was hearing tantrums crying her eyes out, and I could do nothing. Armaan was hiding his pain from the world, yet ruining Shilpa's life. Sid can't stand my presence. And I? What am I? Who am I? I'm a human right? And Humans make mistakes, don't they? They why do i have to face this angushing pain?


Note: My updates will be short! Sorry but i feel the less i write, the better it is! I hope you understand!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very interesting concept.
awesome part.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fri42911

very interesting concept.

awesome part.
please continue soon.



Thank you :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Looks interesting. waiting to read more
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AMAZINGG. GREAT UPDATEE <3
DIFFERENT CONCEPT!
AND YOU KNW WAT MA QUESTION IS GONNA BE BASKEETTT!
IS IT AN AR FF??
LOVEDD THE WAY YUW WROTE EVERYTHING.
WONDA WAT HAPPENED WHICH RUINED 4 LOVERS LIFE!
UPDATE SHOOONN =DD
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing concept, beautiful writing style, lovely start! continue soon.
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Originally posted by: -RabiaKSGKaJen-

AMAZINGG. GREAT UPDATEE <3

DIFFERENT CONCEPT!
AND YOU KNW WAT MA QUESTION IS GONNA BE BASKEETTT!
IS IT AN AR FF??
LOVEDD THE WAY YUW WROTE EVERYTHING.
WONDA WAT HAPPENED WHICH RUINED 4 LOVERS LIFE!
UPDATE SHOOONN =DD


Thank you jaan :)
I know, i just thought of it <3
Is it? well i don't want anyone to know yet, so i'll PM you it. And if you know me well, you'll know my answer. :P
Thank you so much :P
Yes, keep wondering picture abhi bakki hai meri dost!
Yep i'll update soon, next part will be Shilpa's POV.
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Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

amazing concept, beautiful writing style, lovely start! continue soon.


Thank you so much! Yep i will, next part will be shilpa's POV.

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