Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 22

Kinza 🤗

lovely os!!!

It ws awsm plz write more os

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You know I kind of like the manner they did not detail the specifics of Mayank's past for in truth what pertains to the present is the effect upon both him and his mother's affected hearts. HOWEVER, I liked your characterization of Mayank's father. ⭐️

He always talked about the latest appliances and gadgets and mayank wished he could own them. This is what you are so skillful at creating; sentences that both add depth to a character whilst illuminating their motivations. Just exceptional! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Here the layering of their history as well their relationship. Excellent. 👏

"tumhari awaaz ayi na tu phir dekhna" while mayank nodded again. Really cute moment that you seemingly effortlessly create. It is natural yet profound, elucidating their respective respect for each other. Mayank honouring his father and his father entrusting him with that amanat.

but seeing the smile on a boy , which he thought was equal in his height he smiled back and shook hands with him This first meeting was endearing. That insightful detailing @bold is why you are such a remarkable writer. True, children only see similarities as means to friendship whilst adults use them as means to envy. However more than that is it about the true reality of things. They are both equal which only they seem to see unlike the world mistakenly perceives. Beautifully written. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Again, the manner you so seamlessly segue onto the detailing of contrasts so to elucidate your theme, your moral whilst also developing the characters AND whilst creating a conversation that is engaging is just flawless. Just beautiful. I loved it. wo tumhain raaste main gola aur icecream le k detey hain?'...merey bauji tu bina bole bhi le k detey hain, roz!"

"per gari main aney ka tu bohat maza ata hoga na?", he said again, looking with wide amazed eyes, "haan bohat maza ata hai", As I said before you have this wonderful ability to compose simple moments whose significance resound through history. Here is bonding of two boys. Just beautifully done. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

I can not deny that my heart wished for a union of two worlds BUT I understand why you chose the direction you did, for your story had an important point to make, as expounded by your closing lines.

Our aspirations are conditioned by our environments. We do not know any better until like Mayank, he sees it, or like Samrat he hears it but the truth of those aspirations can only be appreciated in feeling them. As Mayank's father may say 'if it isn't broken then don't try to fix it.' Mayank sought to fix that curiousity of a better life but would not trade it for the price of his present life, whilst Samrat never found anything in need of fixing until Mayank's mended his understanding and illuminated areas that needed more careful attention.

Kinza, just beautifully written as always. A delight to read. Love Sabah.

Hey sweets!! .. so i am back, sorry for troubling you all .. but i am really over whelmed with the love u all have showered . thank you.

"ab kia hua?",

Gunjan asked as she was again seeing her best friend Nupur in a failed attempt to hide her tears,

"kuch nahi, bus ankh main kuch parr gaya", she said quickly, visgourisily rubbing her eyes, "idher dikhao..", she turning her face towards herself but she got up.

"kuch nahi hai gunjan, main chalti hon, late ho rahi hon", she took her bag and rushed towards the gate while gunjan observed her till she was out of sight.

After coming back home and crying endlessly, she was just looking at the roof when her mobile vibrated, as expected it was gunjan .

"gunajn mujhe tang nahi karo , meri tabiyat thek nahi hai, I am trying to sleep, please!", she said this and disconnected the phone without even listening to her.

The whole week passed like this, where gunjan was constantly observing how she was desperately trying to act normal and how miserable she was failing.

This all was cutting gunjan within, she couldn't see her best friend in this miserable state, and it wasn't the first time it was all happening. All of this had started to happen quite frequent.

"Nupur tum bata rahi ho ye main aunti ko bata doon k tum chup chup k rooti ho, phir wohi pochen gi tumse", gunjan said one afternoon as both of them were having lunch in their break time.

"gunjan tum mujhe akela nahi chor sakti, why are u sticking to me like I am a child?, please for God Sake I am a grown up!, I know how to handle things"

"and I can very well see how you are handling things", she glared at her and Nupur glared back, "listen gunjan, there are already many problems , kindly don't become a reason for a increase in them"

"I won't , you just share, what happened."

"I don't want to", she replied stubbornly and started sipping her juice.

"what do you mean by you don't want to?, you will HAVE to", gunjan took the juice form her hand and smacked on the table.

"you can't force", Nupur replied taking the juice back and gunjan's blood started boiling with rage, "ofcourse I can force, you still don't know me Nupur Bhushan, I can force, now you are telling or I dial aunty's number?", she took out her cell phone and Nupur took it from her hands,

"kia problem hai gunjan?', mujhe nahi share karna tu nahi karan !, simple!, ku peche parr jatey ho, I don't want to talk!", she growled and taking her back, quickly walked out of the cafeteria and gunajn followed her

"I haven't see anyone more selfish than you!", she spoke behind her and nupur stopped midway in the empty corridor, completely shocked.

"don't act so shocked, you are selfish, you just think about yourself Nupur, JUST ABOUT YOURSELF!!"

"gunjan ..", nupur's voice suddenly went weak hearing that rage in her voice, "listen..

"no! now you listen!",she jerked nupur's hand away, "tum kisi rishtey k liaq nahi ho!", she spoke stiffly and nupur's eyes started to brim with tears, "kyun k tum sirf apne bare main sochti ho",

"aisa mat kaho gunjan .."

"kyun nahi kahon?, main paglon k tarah tum se poch rahi ho k kia baat hai and you don't bother to answer"?,

"I didn't mean to hurt your ego gunjan, main bus..

"see!!, again you take things to the other side!", she smiled with teary eyes and nupur's heart was caught in a fist, "you think I am angry because of my ego?, Nupur I am hurt because you don't see how much I care for you, I get so worried and you just say that you don't want to share"

"gunjan I just need to stay alone .. i..

"why do you need to stay alone?, what kind of a stupidity is this?', she again shouted on her and nupur just closed her eyes to let the tears flow.

"you know how much people long that what if they had a single person to share their problems with, but they have no body, and you have so many people, who love you to death, people who can do anything to solve your problems and the you say that you need to stay alone, then fine you just stay alone!",

She said this and turned towards exit and nupur ran behind her, "gunjan please dan't do like this, I can't lose you, you are my best friend please..

"sorry Nupur, " she jerked her hand away again, "this is no way to carry a relation, you don't consider anyone close, because then you wouldn't have chosen to kept your woes inside", she turned again

"this is black mailing!", Nupur shouted behind her and she again stopped, "no darling, this is the final good bye, I thought about it, Ih ad decided that if today you won't share then I would just break our relation, nupur friends ship is not just going out and having fun, our bunking classes and going to movies, friendship is about sharing problems, and if you can't do that then I am sorry, I don't believe in carrying our false relations".

Gunjan please..",s he desperately held her hand and tears fell from gunajn eyes, "still you are not willing to share nupur, you will never change",

she jerked her hand away and went while Nupur closed her eyes and sat on the stairs.

Gunjan kept on standing there for a long while that maybe Nupur would call her and share but she didn't.

Finally, she went away praying,

"please change her God, she will lose everyone if she'll stay quiet".

res !!yayyy! angel ur back..

well maybe its the situation or maybe its becasue somewhere its been long since we are all going through such problems...

nice OS...kinza...

wow!!! u r back!!!