Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 20

it was beautiful kinzu😍

nice OS...

loved it a lot mahek..these simple but heartwarming gestures mean a lot in our day to day life,which we often tend to forget of dedicating to our loved ones...amazing..truly...!!😊

Hey Di, who said it was exaggerated? It was beautiful - such simple gestures actually make life beautiful ... Love doesn't mean over-the-top drama - it is about expressing it in the most simplest manner but in a manner that touches the heart and the soul of the person ... I really loved it and bad Mayank, office on Sunday - very bad😉😆 But I really liked Nupur's cleaning mission which reminds me that I need to do that soon after my exams - anyways but the best part was the end - he loves her with her dirt and sweat and also with her freshness and beauty - he loves her and not her presentation that was the best line ...

Dear Kinza,

I finally found some time to fulfill my wish list of posts on IF. So I am here to catch up on your OS. Upon a tangent, I liked your 'tell a story' entry,The dialogues flowed wonderfully and wittily, through the excerpt too, rather than around it. Things were surely changing, and most alarmingly, without my consent.⭐️ Sharp characterizations, though not entirely Mayank and Nupur of MJHT but still MayUr, as you so effortlessly mix and muddle into one and the same.

Classroom Romance

That 'kitne dafa' opening was marvellous. 😃 mayank involuntary looked around coming to the conclusion that she was right. She has always been the cause behind his motivation to check himself, that maybe everything is not as he thinks it is.

I loved, JUST LOVED, that unexpected twist. I mean, it is not so unexpected, for we all know that sweet side exists BUT we can never tell which way the wind will turn his heart next. Then again, when that wind is the a mellifluous, melody enriched breeze brought from the sway of his beloved's hair or the still aftermath of the tufan of her ujali baat, then how could we ever doubt!

It is little details within your already bountiful piece that give it that rare depth, for example
...who was looking at shukla sir,... and he was again looking at the white board, Inspired and wonderfully woven in. It made me almost wonder, was Nupur dreaming? An hallucination? Just exceptional details of action.

The most cutest moment..."I don't believe this!, atleast write in go!"😆😆😆😳

Then just when I think you have brought us to the peak, the tip of merriment, "these are my notes so they will stay with me", Kinza, just remarkably done!

My only criticism is the end. I understand that not everything needs to have insightful meaning, but it seemed either not enough, a little more profoundness OR too much, stopping at 'left the class' and so being a little more precise. I am not sure, HOWEVER I am not in your league by any means so please just ignore my worthless wandering or wondering, even.

Truly Kinza, you have been blessed with the ability to write fine, sharp dialogues that you manoeuvre as you wish or need towards humour, drama or insight. I am very much impressed, not that was your goal, just one consequence amongst many, the best I would guess being the joy you bring to so many reader's hearts here. God bless you. Love Sabah

Fantasia! 🤗

One word - Subtle. 👏

And Moi loved it. More please? 😃 Write more soon!!

Cheers!

- You-Know-Who! 😆

Oh that was really so Sweet and cute Os dear

Superb sweety...Just out of the world...
My eyes became teary to see their bond...Mayank's hug overwhelmed my heart...They r the best...

simple but sweet...thats what i love about mayur...its never been about fancy things or extraordinary events for them...yet their story was very special...nice update lekin kitna chota tha!...i guess you like short and sweet haha...naina