Funny OS: Maan's mission to woo Geet

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I felt that the scene where Maan tries to make Geet jealous was left incomplete. So I thought I would write on OS on that way I wanted the scene to go.

Geet has not been talking to Maan properly so Maan decides to invite a hot client of his to lunch. He specially hires 3 chefs to make continental food for the occasion. He talks to Lucky to make sure Geet will be home 😆.

Lachi is the first one to see the girl and reports it to Geet. Geet as usual runs to see what is happening - the difference here is that Lachi, Pammi and Nandini also follow her 😉

Maan is busy wooing his new client with Adi standing guard. This is a plan carefully crafted by Maan and executed by Adi. 😆 😆 😆

Maan has ordered special cutlery for the occasion and there is a table that is beautifully set up for lunch 😃.

Geet comes to the rope sees this and goes ballistic.

Nandini and Pammi also arrive and see the beautiful decorations and start going gaga over the decorations further angering Geet. Geet scolds them and they become quiet.

Then Geet spies the girl and Maan are sitting on the couch. Maan sees Geet and decides to take advantage of the opportunity. 😉 He talks extra nice to the girl and allows her to touch him.

Geet ignores him and pretends to do some work.

The girl starts making comments about what a big businessman like MSK is doing in a small town and looks at the ladies and smirks. She turns to Maan and continues her discussion. 😲

The phone rings and Pammi and Nandini leave to attend the phone call. Pammi calls Lacchi and so Lachhi also goes away.

This makes Geet see red andshe grabs one a plate and breaks it.

The girl gets perturbed and Maan says "Oh don't worry. It is just my pesky neighbors. They keep making noise all day. They have no respect for peace and quiet" (The guy is sure a believer in laying it on thick)

Hearing this Geet says "Oh now I am just a neighbor am I? And a noisy nosy one at that too. I will show you" 😈

Adi meanwhile says "Sir should I serve lunch" 😃

The girl says "I don't like Indian food. All that chilli powder and garam masala. Ewww."

Maan looks at an annoyed Geet and says "Oh don't worry we are serving continental food today. Would you like some wine to go with it?" 😉

The girl says "Oh I love wine. It goes so much better with continental food than water."

Maan is talking to the girl and does not catch Geet's expression but Adi does and is shaking in his shoes by now. He sees that Geet is supermad.

Geet taking to herself "Continental food?? Churail ab dekh main tujhe kya khilathi hoon. Mere pathi ke saath flirt karthi hai. Abhi batathi hoon. Tujhe wine chahiye na ruk pilathi hoon"

Geet goes into the kitchen where the continental food is being made and tells the chefs that she is Mrs. MSK and that she will finish the meal. 😈

They are reluctant to leave and poor Adi shows up. Geet tells Adi to tell the chefs exactly who she is and the disbelieving chefs are forced to stand to the side.

Geet then proceeds to dump a ton of chilli powder and garam masala in each of the dishes. 😈 When the chefs protest she quells them with a gaze. The chefs are now subdued. They all look at Adi to do something and he looks at them helplessly and tells them to keep quiet. 😆 😆 😆

Then Geet takes the bottle of water away from the serving cart and leaves only the bottle of wine. 😆

The chefs are almost in tears now seeing what Geet has done to their meal. They are also worried about what MSK will do to them because of the messed up meal. Bechare miya biwi ke jhagde mein yeh log maare gaye 🤣 🤣 🤣

Geet then tells the chefs to wheel the cart out and serve it. They don't want to but she assures them that she will blackball them to everyone if they do not do her bidding. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Bechare they have choice and so they take the cart out. Maan holds the girl's hand and brings her to the table (Maan ye kuch zyada nahin ho gaya? 🤔)

Geet is watching and still has a mad expression on her face so that MSK does not suspect anything amiss. 😉 😈

Both of them are seated and the chef serves them the starters. The starters are great (Geet is smart she has not touched this 😎) and MSK praises the chefs. MSK and the girl are enjoying the meal with wine. 😉

Geet waits patiently for the main course and of course for the fireworks to begin. 😎

The chefs serve the main course and disappear.

The girl comments "This looks so good and smells so great. I cannot wait to eat this" 🤣 🤣 🤣

Geet thinking to herself "I cannot wait either" 😈

Maan tells her to start and turns to look at Geet and catches Geet smirking. MSK's antennae are up 😉. He sniffs the food and decides he is going to play safe. He tells the girl "You are my guest. You must taste it first." 😆

The girl takes a bite and smiles at Maan. The she goes pale 😲 😲 😲
The she starts coughing. 😆 😆 😆
Maan has no idea what is happening and asks her "are you ok?"

At this point the girl has water coming out of her eyes and grabs the bottle of wine and glugs it in one go 😲 🤣 🤣

Geet watches her as Maan is trying to figure out what happened. 🤣 🤣 🤣

The wine does not help and she starts screaming water water. Lacchi is passing by with a bucket and things this person wants water to wash her hands. She hands her the mug and the girl proceeds to drink it as Lacchi watches stunned. 😲 😲 😲

The girl asks for more and Lacchi is standing with her mouth open. She dips the mug back in the bucket and drinks more water. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Geet at this point is laughing her head off and Adi runs off to the kitchen to get a bottle of water. 😆 😆 😆

At that point Maan realizes that there was something wrong with the food. 🤣 🤣 🤣
😆So he decides to try it himself 😲 😲 😲. He puts one spoon in his mouth and his eyes start watering and he starts coughing. Adi shoves a bottle of water in his face and Maan drinks it all in one gulp. He then feels better.

The girl is mad because Geet is laughing at her and comes close to the rope andsays "I think your stupid neighbors have sabotaged my meal. These stupid illiterate villagers. They do not understand continental food and just because they cannot enjoy it, they will spoil the enjoyment of others also."

Maan is still busy drinking the water and before he can say anything Geet erupts "You want to see what a villager can do? I will show you. She leans over, picks up the plate the girl was eating from and overturns the contents on her head. 😲

Maan rushes over and tries to reason with Geet ,but Geet is beyond mad now. She starts throwing cutlery and crockery at the girl saying "How dare you insult me. You have no idea who I am." 🤣 🤣 🤣

Maan tries to intervene and is rewarded for his efforts by a plate whizzing past him 🤣 🤣 🤣

He turns to see that the chefs have fled and Adi is cowering in the corner. 🤣 🤣 🤣

He grabs the girl and both of them hide under her desk 🤣 🤣 🤣

This makes Geet even more mad and she starts throwing more material at him and his desk 🤣 🤣 🤣

Pammi and Nandini show up and drag an unwilling Geet away who is in tears at this point. 😭

Then suddenly it all stops and Maan hears nothing. He puts his head out and check to see if Geet is around. He does not see her and heaves a sigh of relief. He tells the girl to leave and she leaves without a backward glance.

Now Maan wonders why Geet stopped. He sees that his side of the house is a mess. He calls Adi and orders Adi to get it cleaned up. He is looking around and notices some blood on the floor. He gets concerned and wants to find out what happened. He goes ballistic and tries to call Geet but she is not picking up.

He notices Lucky passing by and motions him to come. Lucky is astonished at the sight of the house and tells Maan to clean it up before Beeji gets there. Maan tells him he is working on it and asks him to find out what happened to Geet since she is not taking his calls. Lucky promises to find out and runs inside.

Lucky calls Maan and tells him that Geet seems fine, except that she is very angry with Maan and not talking to him. Maan is very worried about Geet and insists on seeing her so Lucky brings her out into the garden under some ruse. She looks at Maan, makes a face and gives him attitude. Maan runs back and realizes that he had mistaken red wine for blood. 😆 😆 😆

He heaves a huge sigh of relief and sits down. He sees Geet walking by and calls out to her. she ignores him and when he keeps calling she says "Go back to your girlfriend Mr. Khurana. I am done with you." 😡

His plan to woo his misthi had backfired spectacularly . Infact she had even quit talking to him now. He needed to woo her back. Maan sits down with his head between his hands.


This did not turn out as well as planned. There may be a part 2 depending on whether people think they can stand this nonsense for longer 🤣 🤣 🤣

Feel free to critique this 😆 😆 😆





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maanluvsgeet thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome. luved it. plzzz continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it seriously... it was hilarious🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me too felt that the jealousy track was not executed properly...anyways u wrote it well...am still laughing...continue part 2 and do pm me...its gonna be passionate...i hope...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waooo😃...maaza aa gayai😆 wish show mein bhi kuch aisa hi hota😍...ya u shud definrtly continue👏..pls pm me😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome, beautiful part.
loved it.
pls continue it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its really wonderful ... I enjoyed every bit ... Lucky is very well used and he hasnt done anything wrong / confusions ...

Thanks for that ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear u should switch your place with cv... then we might get something really nice to c...
Posted: 14 years ago
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Jhan, I love your nonsense so please continue with part 2!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ehheheheh OMG very niceee :Ppp
still am ROLF🤣

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