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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Verry inteligent written so far,really like this ff!

thank you Myra.nelly... my pleasure and thanks for liking it ... and welcome to my dreamworld...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my my!!! What a lot to catch up after my weeks holiday!!!
All the updates were simply AWESOME!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thx a lot devika it was an
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radev_forever

Oh my my!!! What a lot to catch up after my weeks holiday!!!

All the updates were simply AWESOME!!!

thanks and yes little bit left to catch up for you guys... thank you so much for liking it.. and responding..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sushmavina

Thx a lot devika it was an
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thank you sushmavina.. its my pleasure and I am glad you liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you so much kscjk, wissen, ruchibabbly, mich, Nabesa, imissouri, khus1973, rmonte72, sweetrose92, prakri, sweetfamily, sugarandspice, vinianil, laxmis, DAIRY25, suwin, v3gradev09, chalhov, radhika5, radha_bilahari, anu17, for liking part 118. I am so thankful to each one of you for responding and reaching back to me. It is so valuable to me.. and i left the replies to your post too. so thanks and next part coming up soon.. Devika.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 119

Suchi and Surrender came up within fraction of seconds along with Dev, so did Lechu.

Radhika was sitting with tear trail on her cheeks and was holding onto her leg.

Suchi sat next to her : what happened beta?

Dev sat next to her , holding on to her back, Radhika in crying tone: mom, my leg, it is so painful, I can't take it anymore.

Suchi checked on her leg and felt the tight rolled up muscle bundle.

Suchi to Dev: this is muscle cramps beta, and it will be really painful.

Suchi asked her to straighten her leg, but she cried again as she felt that tight bundle moving up again.

Suchi asked Dev to help with other leg too.

Suchi slowly helped her to straighten her leg, and slightly stretched on her heels, and then gently flex her toes backward to her chin. Radhika cried out again with pain, that Dev released her leg and looked at Mom in concern.

Suchi: Dev do it, it may hurt , but the pain will gradually go away, do it, otherwise it will be really hard for her to walk even.

Listening to his mom, Dev followed his mother's instruction and positioned her feet the way mom held.

Suchi looking at Lechu: get some warm water beta

Lechu looked at Surrender and he also accompanied his daughter to get the water.

Suchi looking at Radhika: I know beta, it will be really painful , but next time if it comes just do this ok, stretch out your leg, , heel first and then get the toes towards your chin, that is the only way you can get some relief.

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Dev with fearful face: but why this happened mom?

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Suchi: maybe because of hectic day today. Mostly was on her feet and her leg might have felt too tired.

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Dev in an anger tone, looking at Radhika: I told you many times to take care, we all were there na, then what was the necessary to run around, you should know all these and should have taken care.

Tears just rolled down like river from her eyes.

Suchi: Dev, what is this?

Dev: no mom, see, because of that only, now she has to suffer the pain , right?.

Suchi: but still, beta, she is taking care of herself very well, just today because of all this

Dev: whatever, from today onwards, no office visit, nothing, you are going to be at home and takecare of your self , that's it. Now Lechu is also there at home, there is time for her college to reopen and you won't be alone.

Suchi: Dev. What is this,anyway she is leaving this Wednesday to chandenpur, right?

Dev suddenly lowering his voice: ha, but then

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Suchi: what then, see these certain things are inevitable and shouting is not going to help it, she is already in pain and on the top you are blaming her too, and I just said it can be one reason, for all these things it always doesn't have any specific reason ,ok, certain things are beyond the line of our explanation, and just holding onto it with one thing is not helpful to soleve it. Do you know how many have all these issues, I am glad she had very minimal discomforts and she is adjusting very well too, and then

Dev: sorry mom, then looked at Radhika with a sorry face: but I just can't see her crying out in pain, I asked her many times and she said "she is fine"... she could have told me na, then I also know her discomfort, so when I saw her crying loud, I really got afraid mom, I just, I just was not knowing what to do, I am glad you were here, or else, what do I do mom?I don't know.

Suchi: Dev, it is not necessary that she has to say everything or all her discomfort all the time. She is an adult and she knows how and when to tell. She also knows how to tolerate certain discomfort, for each and every minute things she doesn't need to vent out. Do you tell everything to her or to others all the time, you tackle certain small things by yourself , right? then

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Dev lowering his voice: ji mom, I know, but she.

Suchi : its ok beta, I am not blaming you either. Just trying to make you understand, as in this time period certain things can happen unexpectedly and that is not radhika's fault , nor somebody elses. You should learn to face and tackle it as it comes to you, may be you or she has to go through that pain, but it should not be blaming on each other. And if that is eihter one of your mistake , then surely try to make the other person understand or realize it, and try to overcome it.

Dev: jo mom

Surrender came in with warm water.

Suchi dipping the towel in it, and squeezing the hot water out, slowly applied it on her calf

Suchi: how are you feeling now?

Radhika: better mom

Suchi: um, next time if it comes just follow what I said Ok, and try to stretch your leag in between if possible, to get that musle lose.

Radhika: ji mom

Dev: mom, I will do it now, you can take rest.

Suchi: no beta , I am ok

Dev: no mom, now I know it, and apply this warm towel over it, right?, I can do it, mom, I know you all are tired.

Suchi: are you trying to shoo me away now with smile on her face

Dev with a thankful face: no mom, why you are saying so, look at Rahdika's face, she looks much better, If I need any help, I will come and call you

Suchi: are you sure

Dev: ha mom

Suchi: ok beta

Surrender coming near : Beta, you take care ok

Radhika just nodded her head in agrement

Suchi: lechu come

Lechu: no mom, I can sit with bhabhi for sometime, if Bro need something,... you go, I am here with them.

Suchi looked at her puzzled: what?

Lechu very seriously: don't worry mom, I am here with Bro, you go and take rest.

Suchi: ji

Suchi looked at Surrender and remembered his words and then walked out from their room.

Lechu: Bro, let me grab another towel, you do on that leg,, I can try on this

Radhika: it's ok Lechu, I will be fine

But hen suddenly she looked at Dev's face

Dev understanding it, said: um, so you are buttering your sis-in-law and making your hubby to do the job, right? that also by making me to hold your leg.

Lechu: ha, that's how the sis-in-laws are

Dev in a normal tone: so who taught you that? Sammy

Lechu: nobody has to teach me all these, ok, I know, ... she was my deedi before becoming your wife. Remember you were ready to bite her when you saw her first time, it was only me who was caring about her that time

Dev saw the corner smile on Radhika's lips, and he felt happy too

Dev: um, that's because , your bhabhi was behaving like that only.

Lechu: Bro, tell me when you really started loving bhabhi?

Dev: what!

Lechu: tell me na,

Dev looked at Radhika and whose attention was totally diverted into Lehcu's talk

Dev: just few months back

Lechu surprisingly: just few months back!!!, Bro, don't try to tease me, I am serious ok

Dev: no, I am telling the truth, ask your bhabhi only

Lechu: is it so Bhabhi?

Radhika just nodded her head in agrement

Dev: see I told you

Lechu: you two are teasing me,

Dev: no lechu, really

Lechu: but then I have seen you coming and talking to bhabhi many times prior to your marriage and all.

Dev: that was just friendship talk only, do you know even your bhabhi stopped talking to me prior to marriage.

Lechu: I can't believe this!!

Dev: sachi, ask your bhabhi, she started talking to me after marriage only.

Lechu: How did I miss seeing all that!! how can someone really do that?/ um...

Dev: not everyone, but your bhabhi can do that, do you know how many times I tried to reach her, but she never even picked that phone

Lechu surprisingly: no email either!

Dev in a childish way: nope, your bhabhi was so arrogant.

Lechu: no Bro, I know it is you, not my bhabhi

Dev: see nobody believes me, but Lechu I am telling you the truth , believe me.

Lechu looked at Radhika and found her controlling her smile.

Lechu bringing a childish face: don't try to fool me Bro

Dev with a smile; if you want to believe then believe me, that's all, but I am telling you the truth.

Lechu sat silently

Dev: Lechu, looks like you are also tired, you go to bed, bhabhi will be fine now

Lechu: no Bro, I can sit

Dev: no dear, go take rest, I will call you if I need anything

Lechu: are you sure?

Dev with a smile; um

Lechu: is that ok bhabhi

Radhika: ha Lechu, I am feeling much better now.

Lechu taking the towel and bowl away: ok then,you take rest, and call me if you need anything ok, and If I hear you then I you can expect my help .. or goodnight..

Dev: ok my sister

Lechu : don't tease me Bro.

Dev just smiled with her.

Lechu walked out with closing the door behind.

Dev looked at Radhika: are you ok?

Rahdika with a smile: um

Dev coming near and taking her face in his hand: I am sorry Radhika, I really didn't mean to hurt you

Radhika with the same smile: I know that

Dev: sach

Radhika : um

Dev kissing her cheek and her eyes: I can't see the pain Radhika, and I don't know what else to do

Radhika: you are doing everything possible for me, and I am lucky for that.

Dev: but still I shouted, that also in front of mom

Radhika: it doesn't matter, more than your shouting I could feel your concern for me, your love for me, so your words didn't hurt me at all.

Dev: but I saw you crying

Radhika: that is because of this pain, and I could see, along with me you were also suffering with the same intensity.

Dev: I love you Radhika

Radhika: I know

Dev releasing her face and looking at her: you suppose to say: you love me too

Radhika just smiled

Dev: what? Say it na, atleast for my comfort

Radhika with a smile pulled on his shoulder, and bringing his face closer , she placed a soft kiss over his cheek, saying : I love you

Dev: no, that is not enough

Radhika: what?

Dev: I want more

Radhika: what more

Dev: more than what you gave me.

Radhika looked at him and he just brought his finger from cheek to his lips.

Radhika looked down shyly

Dev: what?

Radhika covering her face, turned to her left side

Dev: that is not fair

Radhika: that is fair for now

Dev adjusting himself by her side: Radhika, is the pain gone

Radhika; it is still there, but its ok

Dev: don't listen to mom ok, if you have any discomfort , let me know, I want o know it early.

Radhika smiled

Dev: I am serious Radhika, please let me know, ok

Radhika: um

Dev: do you want me to apply that warmth more on your leg

Radhika; no I am fine, just hold me in your arms, and I will be fine

Dev with a smile wrapped his arms around her

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Next part coming up soon.. maybe a smaller one.. but catch you soon...

Hope you will like this part..

Devika.

Part 120 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/42658970
Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you friends imissouri, sugarandspice, for liking part 119.😃 next part coming soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 120

The next day Radhika rested mostly in her room as her leg was hurting too bad with taking those steps. She managed to move around inside the room better. It was around evening time, and Dev found Suchi sitting on the garden bench and was reading something. He walked near to her...

Dev: mom

Suchi putting the book down: ha beta, Is Radhika feeling better?

Dev: ha mom

Suchi: good, so what is it?

Dev: are you busy?

Suchi: no beta, I was just reading this book , quiet interesting , its ok, ...you need something?

Dev coming near and sitting near her: not really

From his heavy facial expression Suchi understood there is something bothering him, so she kept the book away on the table , and adjusting herself, she asked: what is it Dev?

Dev resting his head over her shoulder: mom

Suchi: um, bolona

Dev: does Radhika really needs to go to chandenpur?

Suchi controlling her smile: why?

Dev moving his face and facing her: no mom, just asking

Suchi: tell me Dev, what is it?

Dev again resting his head back on her shoulder: no mom, after seeing all these, and if such situations comes, and if nobody hear her , and...

Suchi: holding his chin with her hand: so you are worried.

Dev: ha mom, I know she may feel hungry in the middle of the night, I saw her in pain and because you were here, she came to know what to do.; Otherwise!

Suhci: otherwise also there is nothing

Dev: please mom

Suchi: ha beta, think , she will get more attention and care there, you know dadi and Rohini are there, they knows all these, and might be knowing how to tackle such situations

Dev: but mom what if they don't know.

Suchi: Dev, ... what are you saying,???ha, I know you won't be there, but beta, she needs to go, they are expecting her, it is their right, and that is every girl's parents expectation and happiness, and they know she needs to go back soon, but still that few many days, they really cherish and they feel proud too.

Dev: but mom

Suchi: no Dev, Radhika's inner mind also may be wishing for it, and when dadi is there, we don't have to worry about anything, I am sure,... maybe she learn so many things from Dadi which I won't be able to learn from these books or these many years of experience. So you don't need to worry about anything, and belive me, she will be fine and safe there.

Dev: um

Suchi: what um

Dev: nothing

Suchi: the real reason behind this questioning is you are going to miss her, right?

Dev just wrapped his arms around his mom's shoulder and held her tight.

Suchi with smile: for certain things , you won't change Dev.

Dev didn't say anything, but just loved being in his mom's comfort.

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The night before her trip, Radhika was resting in bed, Dev laying next to her. Radhika was pulling on his arm to hold her more tight., adjusting himself to wrap her in his arms, he asked :

Dev: what you will do once you get in chandenpur?

Radhika in anormal tone with closed eyes : you stay with me..

Dev: then who will go to work? dad will cut my name from his employee list, then how will I feed my little princess?

Radhika controlling her smile : then what will we do?

Dev: you are going to be with dadi , right?

Radhika: most probably

Dev: dadi knows better than anyone, so I am sure you will be safe

Radhika: but we will miss you.

Dev lifting his face up and placing his cheek over her side profile: I will miss you both badly, very badly, but I will try to be there on every weekend, and then towards the delivery date, I will be there, I will try to finish my work by then and dad knows na, so I am sure, he won't assign anything important at that time, let see. Now I can't wait to get you both back to our home.

Radhika: then don't send me

Dev: you know what? I wish that too, but other way, it is good Radhika, you will have somebody around you all the time, dadi is there, maaji is there, and you will get all the attention.

Radhika: Lechu is here na

Dev: for how many more weeks, her college will reopen soon

Radhika: but atleast I will be able to see you.

Dev: Radhika, please, I know you will miss me and more than you I am going to miss you two, but how can I tell this to babuji, he is the one arranging everything ,right?. Even I tried to talk to mom , and mom made me understand it, babuji's wish, your dadi's wish, they all are waiting for you, eagerly, ...it is their right,... and mom told me, you also may be wishing for it, to be near everyone

Radhika I don't know, but I will miss you, and I need you.

Dev: I need you too Radhika, he placed a kiss over her cheek, don't worry about me, I will be busy with things here, but I will be calling you everyday, keep the cellphone with you, call me at any time, no matter what time of day or night it is, and I will be there whenever I ge that time , ok

Radhika: um

Dev placed another kiss over her cheek..: love you

Radhika tunred her face to look at him

Dev: Say na

Radhika with a smile: love you too

Dev: ha, ye hui na bath, sometimes I need to remind you Radhika

Radhika with a smile: I like it when you ask for it.
Dev: Is that so, can i ask for more than?
Radhika: you don't need to ask, whatever it is is, it is all yours only.
Dev: ye hui na bath, tho modona
Radhika: kyum?
Dev: you only said, its all mine, then...
Radhika smiled and looked at him : you know how to take it from me, right?
Dev: that's my hak...
Their little talk continued as the moon smiled wide above the darkness...
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The next day Mohan , Rohini, and Sushma came to take Radhika along with them.

Surrender looking at Sushama: so you changed the side now

Suchma: she is my daughter, then it is my right too, to come and take her safetly to our place.

Surender folded her hands in front of his sis : oh ma, I agreed

Suchma: um, you better, even babuji was ready to come, but then so much going on there, and Mohan bhayya was coming too, now Birju is not there either, so babuji stayed back. You don't know anything bhayya, you need to come and see how much chandenpur is missing Radhika . no one is there like her to bring the smile on everyone's face. We all are missing her, so we are going to celebrate it.

Surrender: but don't forget to send her back

Sushma in a normal tone: that we may forget

Surreder: oh, so now it is like that. But then that is our right to come and bring her back.

Suchma: for that there is time ok, first let us take her with us now, and for the rest, you have time to plan about it.

Mohan: after a long time, I was able to hear the arguments between he brother and sister, feel so good.

Surrender: she never changes

Sushama: you too

Suchi: Radhika is getting ready.

LEchu: but I am all ready .

Sushma: oh very good, lechu, but then what about Sammy, you will miss him na

Lechu: no worries buava, he is coming with dad and mom this weekend

Sushma: what!

Suchi: no , actually Dev only invited them to Chandenpur, to show them the place and everything and he agreed. So , expect more work, anyway we will be there too.

Sushma: Babuji will be very happy to hear it, and it is double happiness for us.

Suchi: ha, let them also see the place and interact with everyone, that's how the relationship grows.


Sushma: I know suchi, and I am happy for it.

In Radhika's room

Dev: Radhika, be careful, I already told the driver to drive slow, but you should be careful too, ok.

Radhika: um

Dev: then if any muscle cramps or anything happens, you know how to handle it , right

Radhika braiding her hair: um

Dev: then eat well, and also whenever my little princess is awake and miss me, call me right away, I will talk to her ok

Radhika: um

Dev: then, go out for a walk everyday, remember what Dr. said, that walking is the best exercise.

Radhika: um adjusting her hair from the front

Dev: then

Radhika turning and facing him: Ok baba, now you don't have to add more then into it ok, I will take care, and I will call you if I need anything at any minute, and

Dev suddenly: If you feel anything unusal too

Radhika holding onto his shoulder: um, ok, and you will be there on Friday or by Saturday , right?

Dev with a smile, holding her closer: Friday night, may be late night, I don't care, I will be there

Radhika: but I don't want you to drive that late night

Dev: I will be careful Radhika, don't worry about it

Radhika: no, I won't be able to rest well then.

Dev: ok baba, I won't,..now happy

Radhika wrapping her arms around him: um, but not happy

Dev: holding her close: don't worry, I will be there safe, and don't forget to keep that ladder ok

Radhika pushing herself back, with a smile: but Birju bhayya is not there

Dev: no problem, ask babuji to keep it in place

Radhika: aap bhi na

Dev with a smile: no, I will be there thru the front door only. Ok

Radhika: um

Dev: but keep your room tidy ok

Radhika giving a small hit on his chest: aap bhi na

Dev: let me talk to my little princess now

Radhika smiled as he wrapped his arms around her abdomen

Dev: hai my angel, don't worry, you are going to be near your nana, nani and all, Papa will be there on this weekend ok, and don't give any trouble to mamma till then, mamma is very poor, I can see how much she is struggling , she is going to miss papa, along with all her minor issues.. so be a nice girl and behave well till papa get there ok.

He placed few kisses for his little one and then coming up to face her

Dev: Radhika, she is all fine, and she is not going to give you any trouble till I get there ok, or else let me know right away, I will talk to her.

Radhika contrlloing her smile: um

Dev: and now I need my hak

Radhika: what hak

Dev: to survive for this two days

Radhika looked at him in question

Dev: no excuse this time, I need it

Saying that he cupped her face and Radhika just looked at his nearing face..

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Thank you so much friends.. I will surely PM you guys with next update. But for now, this is it and I will surely get back to you as my time permits.

Reminder: It was a long journey for me, don't know how you felt , few travelled with me all thru this, with all the ups and downs and I am so much thankful to them, actually no words can explain the love that I got after writing this FF, so much that i can't even dream, so much that my heart just swell out, thanks to my Di, who forced me to write this.. , that I am even thankful to AVINA for giving me the wings to dream...

But I am not done yet.. one more big drama is coming ,, but that is to step down at the final destination, and have no clue how long that will take, but as you know i have few more things to connect and I love drama. especially if it can bring the family more together, more closer... so yes, I will be back , connecting all that dots that I left behind, because I wrote them with a purpose, and I need them to end this too.. so.

Till I catch you again, take care and God bless..

love always

Devika😃

Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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thanks Devaki for the update.
really liking the story. pplz continue soon

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