Jai and bani come closer…farmhouse!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41

God kripa ur the best !!!!!!!!! Ur all so talented !!!!! now i feel i shud do something but i have no inspiration !!!

Zara ur story is really good and touching!!!! i wish it would happen!!!!!!!!!😳

Simzchick urs wos really swet and Mt ur just a legend!!!!! Arsh ur was really gd too!!!

Eran ur is really good too!!!!!!!!!! i want it all to happen

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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
yaar, every1 ...u guys r like....sooooooooo VOW!!!

lol, i was amazed reading it!!!!!

WOW!!!

i wna read more..man u guys should write fanfictions!
i would be reading them 24/7 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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(picking up from a Bani sitting on the floor)
Bani is still sitting on the floor lost in her thoughts, and Mosi comes in and is sad seeing a seprate bed on the floor and goes over to Bani who is totally unaware of her presence and gently rubs her on the hand and asks her "bani, tum yahan aise gumsum si kyon baithe ho, abhi thori der pehle Jai bhi gumsum sa kahin chala gaya hai." Bani hearing Jai's name smiles and asks Mosi aap kub aye, shayad aap kuch keh rahi thi, mosi is reluctant to repeat herself and tells her to come out and have breakfast. Everyone is at the breafast table eating while Bani is lost looking at the empty chair thinking to herself "itni subah Mr. Walia kahan ja sakte hain", Dadi looks at her and says lagta hai ki humari Rani Mukherjii Shah Rukh Khan ki raah dekh rahi hai, everone bursts out laughing, except for Jigs who could care less and gives a mean look to Bani.
Sometime later, Bani is out side in the lawn sitting and sees someone at a distance and has a feeling that it is Jai and she walks up there and sees Jai sitting beneath a tree looking at the sky, Bani is standing besides him, the wind is blowing and Bani's dupatta comes over Jai's face, as he takes the dupatta off of his face he is mesmorized looking at Bani standing next to him. He hands her the dupatta and asks her rather cutely "tum yahan.." to which Bani hesitantly replies "woh maine baithe thi, aur dekha ki yahan koi hai toh mujhe laga ki shayad aap hain.." she looks at Jai who is staring at her and doesn't complete the sentence. Jai still looking at her tells her to sit down, she slowly and hesitantly sits down and peeks at him from the corner of her eyes and Jai and her eyes come in contact, they sit there just looking at each other and are lost in the dept of their eyes. Its been a while they've been sitting out of their senses, and soon enough there is heavy lightening and hearing that Bani gets a hold of Jai and tightly hugs him, Jai not realizing whats happening to him just hugs her back, and rain starts soaking them both who are still under the spell of the hug..
Kripa.
Thanks everyone for liking the scenes and encouraging me!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
kripa that wonderful and the last part was romantice 👏 👏 👏
please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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(Picking up from Bani and Jai under the tree)
Its still raining and they are stil in each others arms, and lightening strikes again, and this time it breaks the spell Bani and Jai were in past few magical moments, they slowly pull away, Bani looks down trying to avoid Jai's eyes and Jai seems to be enjoying the shyness on her face. Bani tries to get up but slips down in Jai's lap. She has hair over her face, seeing which Jai gently pulls them away and looks at her passionately, Bani's is mind is not working, she's never been so close to him before, she tries to hold back her emotions and tries to hide the love flowing in her eyes by closing her eyes. Jai lovingly moves his hands through her face, causing her to open her eyes slowly. Jai is now totally lost in a world not remembering anything but Bani. He slowly gets up with holding Bani in his arms and walks towards the house with it still raining. He walks inside the house, he walks past Jigs who has her jaw down and cant beleive what she's just seen! Mosi and dadi are however very joyful seeing Bani and Jai together. Jai and Bani enter their room and he puts her down on the bed. He goes and gets out a lovely baby pink colored night gown for her, he puts it on the bed besides her and gets his night suit and goes in the bathroom to change. Bani smiles looking at the gown and is not able to understand whats happening. When Jai comes out she has her bed set on the floor and she is laying down with her eyes closed. Jai looks sad seeing her on the floor and is still for a moment and goes towards Bani gazing at her. He softly lifts her and puts her on the bed, but now Bani who was not asleep and just pretending to have dozed off has her arms around Jai's neck and is not letting go of him. Realizing that Jai smilingly lays down with her, and tells her "Bani aab toh mujhe chor do" and they both burst out laughing hysterically.
Kirpa.
Hope that you all will enjoy this one too.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
kripa that was so amazing 😳
you should write a fan fiction 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
iam sure jai will fall in love with bani sooooner or later and that was a great scene 👏 👏

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