OS.~Musical love story~updt completed

Hello friends,😊
First time i have tried something new kuch hatt ke...😉
if their is any mistake plzz forgive me..😕
MUSICAL LOVE STORY
Part 1

"wow!!!!AST's live concert" screamed manjiri.😆

She is in a cafe with her hubby kanoo😳 and best friend Arpita.she is talking abt live concert of singing superstar,singing sensation Avdhesh singh thakur.😳

Arpita :I don't like music rather I don't like AST.😕

Manjiri :kya yaar phle toh tumhe music bada pasand tha..kya gaata

Hai yaar AST,ek dum mast'''

Kanno :musze bhi jyada handsome lagta hai tumhe who????

Manjiri :ha lagta hai'. Toh??? (she is teasing her hubby)

Kanno :common arpita don't say this na,chalo na yaar'.

Arpita : no yaar plzz don't force me''

Manjiri :no if no but saath chalna hai jhat patt''samji ke nahi'.

Arpita agreed because she didn't want to break kanoo and manjiri's sweat heart..

Kanno : concert is tommorow at sharp 9:00 pm.tyaar rehna hum tumhe kal yahi se kidnap karenge'hehehe'

Arpita : mai tyaaar rahongi okk byee c ya'..

Next day:::::

Arpita is getting ready for concert but she didn't want to go to AST's concert

Arpita to herself : kya yaar, mere ko nahi jaana hai'per uss manjiri ko kon samjayega'..mai uska chehre kabi nahi dekhna chahti the'..

While saying she stopped and lost in his thoughts'..there are some tears shedding through her blackish eyes'.

****beep****

she got one msg from majiri'

"arpita tyaar hui ya nahi ke mai aao..tumhe toh pata hi hai ki agar mai waha aa gayi toh''.." .arpita laughed and reply that she is ready'

why arpita don't like music???😕

What was her past which bring tears in her eyes????😕

press likewa if u r like my first attempt😛

will update soon...😛

nice start...

hmm interesting here also past is there

good start sharan

Sharan, your OS sounds very compelling. I'm excited for it. Can Avi also play the guitar? I would love to see him in a band with his gang.

sharu eik dum awesome start hai...👏👏waiting to read further 😃

Originally posted by: chatterbox

hmm interesting here also past is there

good start sharan

yup their is mystery in avery chemistry😛
thanxx di for liking this

Originally posted by: KYPH-AK

sharu eik dum awesome start hai...👏👏waiting to read further 😃

awww😛 so sweet of u sehr