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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Fabulous Sara😊...loved building up of emotions in Santu as well as DM...fire is equal on both sides😉😳 post next soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanksss alll
wish that be in bandini 2 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Lovely part dear😳, DM having feelings😍, do continu dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
superb Sara... Written much better than the CV of Bandini 1 ... as if watching them in front of my eyes... plzzz continue... Post the next part ASAP.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

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Love ….wish…..and u

Santo sit at corner of her room doing something as champo notice when she enter with some hiding food for her malkin

Champo: malkin …..malkin I bring some food for u

Santo turn in worried looking at champo as trying to hide something …….she still sit in her place as Champo walk toward her…….. At that moment santo scream

S:nooo……. I mean i will have food u go okk…………with smile on her face

Champo surprised and stop walking in the same moment …….she wander what there then said to herself she is the malkin ………why I be curious

Chmp: as u want malkin ………..

There some sad expression on champo face as she walking out santo felt hurt and said

S: champo wait …………champo stop turn looking at santo

S: I not mean shout on u ……I just busy a little ……..santo put wide smile on her face hide what she try to hide from some time and walk to champo hugging her

Champo smile wide smile as tears in her eyes from happiness that her malkin love her care for her and say

Ch: it is okk malkin ………I will let u to do u job

And champo left with happiness as well as santo who hate to hurt anyone ………

Again she turns facing her work ………..hours went and santo still busy in what she is doing

In that time in other place …….inside house

Baa was sitting in her room moving her rosary as she is in soo deep thinking

Dm have right to live his life dm just take so much responsibility so much lonely too subdrah left with her sin ……dm need happiness

Baa breath in heavily because of the tears in her eyes ………every time she tried to ignore to forget everything just attack her again but subdrah past and …………

Baa walk toward the window her eyes again reach to where is santo hide in where santo live

Saying to herself……and santo is the present

She is his partner now …….ha she is…but where is she no one see her today at all strange maybe she went to the village to see her nanji

Baa again back to her rosary

Time pass to

Finally it is 5 pm ……

And santo heard what she was waiting for

She heard dm steps every step make her heart beat in so crazy, she run to the door opened a little …..And she see him his high his hand folded hand ohhh …..There is her sari edge still folded his hand like her hand holding his in care

She smiles …..She cries in same time

As hugging what she was working in the whole day………………..it is for him only him but he will take it ????

Santo eyes follow him when suddenly his walk stopped and he turns slowly slowly

He just looks at her as she too

Their eyes meet and silent be scary ………..she was waiting for that

Waiting for him but ………….she never prepared for that never …………

In background there song comes

Naa sunayi do, naa nazar aao
Itne kareeb aao, itne kareeb aao
don't be seen by me and I shouldn't even hear you come so close to me

Naa sunayi do, naa nazar aao
Itne kareeb aao, itne kareeb aao
don't be seen by me and I shouldn't even hear you come so close to me

HERE DM START TO WALK TOWARD HER AS SHE CLOSED DOOR IN TENSION TO OPEND AGAIN BUT IN SOO LIGHTLY OPEN HER EYES BEEN SEEN ….SHE SEE HIM INFRONT OF THE DOOR


Pal bhar mein dooriyo'n ko
Mumkin nahin mitana
its not possible to erase distances in a moment but we have to try even if it's difficult

DM HER PUSH THE DOOR AND ENTER ALONG SANTO HIDE WHAT SHE HOLD BEHIND SOME CLOUTH


Saanson ki tarah aao
Sanson ki tarah jao
come like my breath go like my breath

Itne kareeb aao, itne kareeb aao
come so close to me

HERE DM RAISING HIS HAND CLOSING DOOR BEHIND HIM AS AGAIN HIS HAND GO TO HER CHEECK MOVE THERE LIGHTLY THE HURT HAND

SHE JUST LOST IN His TOUCH…… HER EYES SINK IN HIS DEEPLY


Chalne mein kya mazaa hai, patthar chubhe jo neechay
what's the fun in walking if stones prick u


Keh do toh bichha doon dil ko kadam ke neechay
if u like I will spread my heart below your feet


Ghar chal sako, toh aao
if u can come home plz cum

HERE DM COME CLOSER AS HE FEEL HER WANT HIM WANT HIM TO BE MORE CLOSER WANT HIM TO …………HOLD HER


Naa sunayi do, naa nazar aao
don't be heard don't be seen


Itne kareeb aao, itne kareeb aao
come so close come so close

AND HERE ……………..

TBC

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
awesome part sara👏...i'm wondering what will happen next
so continue soon 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: mimi10

awesome part sara👏...i'm wondering what will happen next

so continue soon 😉

awww mimi
ha all will be well next
i am happy for bandini news 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: hbuy

its mindblowiinggg...


plz cont asap...

awww thanks alot
nothing like sanraj romance
i will continue just need time 🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Very nice ff,Sara!👏

Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awww sara now baa will play here again cupid in sanraj relation awww now waiting to see the next... 😳 😳

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