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awesome ...

loved both parts 25 n 26 ...

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muskaan that was awesumm
aww now geet and maan in HP
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ME WAITING DEAR 🥱 🥱

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me waiting...waiting...🤗
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Finallyyy ur updatinggg

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ME WAITING *YAWN* * YAWN* *YAWN*

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~maitri~
27

Brij - aacha sun darji ko heart attack ho gaya hain, dodo ko yanha leka aaja, pata nahi itna kyun ro rahi hain. I am feeling worried for her
Maan - ji veer ji

after cutting the call he immediately hugged her sab teehk ho jayega. They quickly drove back home. She was quiet all the while. She was tensed about darji now but some where she had the grief of past too. But as of now it was darji. The moment they reached the flat Maan booked their air tickets to Amritsar while she packed her bag lost & sobbing. Geet called Pinky to take care of ballu.

Maan came in telling the flight was in an hr, when he noticed she was lost.. she had kept the stuffs on the bed to pack. She pulled the suitcase & instead of packing them she was putting them back in the wardrobe.
Dodo yah kya kar rahi ho
she continued to put them back.
Maan shook her dodo!!! she broke out of her thoughts & cried hugging him
he lovingly patted her back.. darji will be fine dodo he tried to reassure her
she nodded wiping her tears.

They reached Amritsar in couple of hrs. brij had arranged for a car to receive them. Through out the journey Geet kept looking out of the window. They stopped mid way to have something in the dhaba.
Geet - nahi seedha ghar chalten hain
Maan was getting restless seeing her like this.
He tried to distract her. Mujhe bhook lagi hain
she softly replied tum dhabha ke khana nahi khaten
aabhi khata hoon
she was in no mode to fight. She quietly sat next to him. He looked at the menu couple of times. He had no clue like always. Geet couldn't help smile seeing him struggle, this how he exactly did when they had been to a dhaba in bangalore tumkur high way. First sitting in the bed itself was difficult for him, then the spicy food she had ordered, uff!!! he ate nothing but jilebi's. She smiled a bit & said jilebi order karlo. He pretended not to notice her smile & ordered paratta & chicken curry & lassi.
Tum kha nahi pavogen, she said it in concern
I can he fought back
she gave up & looked away

when the food came Maan didn't even bother to ask her, he just served himself & started eating. She was shocked but she didn't react. He took one bite, then stopped mid way, he noticed her watching him from corner of his eyes. He smiled & extended his hand to feed her. She wanted to refuse, before even she could refuse
ok.. main he kaa letha hoon & ate it
she made a baby angry face & turned away crossing her hand on her chest.
He laughed & took his plate, walked around the table & sat next to her facing her now, she was angry..she turned away yet again. He smiled & turned to the other side too..
genie
very innocently ..umm
genie tum mujhe pareshan kar rahen ho
aacha??
genie plz na mera man nahi hain
mera tho hain
kaha na man nahi hain
she turned & hit the plate spilling the hot chicken curry on him, he jumped up shaking his hand she immediately poured the jug of water & started blowing..tears began to form in her beautiful eyes. He cupped her face aab tho mujhe jala bhi diya!!! aab tho kaa lo
tumhe mazak sooj raha hain..dehko kitna burn ho gaya
she was blowing very softly the red area.
He fed her a bite..
she wiped her tears humesha aapni baat manate rahten ho
he smirked.
She ate the parattas & fed him. He was finding it really spicy but he didn't complain, she made him drink lassi. He smiled & drank it looking at her eyes. She leaned frwd to wipe his lips, then hesitated a bit. He inched frwd closer giving her more access. Looking at his earnest eyes she couldn't help but to complete the task she headed to. She slowly covered the distance. Avoiding to look at his lips, it was so tempting, his full lips firmed longing for her touch. Heat seeped in through her thumb down her, his lips shivered under her touch, totally laying at her mercy. His eyes kept her captive self lost in those almond eyes. She paused at the left end of the petals & gaped at him. Her gentleness caused his heart to trip & something akin to shudder shot through him. Her touch was so tender almost..loving. He took a steady breath. He could almost feel his inside crumbling.

With a deep breath she forced herself to pull her hands away from those tantalizing lips. She gulped her saliva as she looked away. Wiping her hand in the napkin, she struggled to keep her inner balance & bury her emotions. It was odd silence between them yet again. He straightened his spine
challen
she nodded softly

they reached HP by evening. They directly went to the hospital first to visit darji. Geet broke down hugging papaji. She composed herself before walking into the ICU.
Brij hugged Maan - yaar tu kidhar gayab ho gaya tha!!! sach much genie ban gaya tha kya?
They laughed at the name Geet gave him. Maan was reminded of the first encounter with Brij. He was so skeptical & unsure.

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Brij scanned the whole of their house couple of times. OMG that one week when Brij stayed with them was so hard for Maan. First Brij didn't approve of his sister staying with paraya mard stuff!!! it was greek & latin for Maan. Every move of Maan was under scrutiny, never had his parents questioned him but here veerji was Oh GOD. Wat he wore, wat he ate..where he sat wat programs he watched, even his laptop was scanned. Oops actually Maan had erase all the po** stuffs. Then Brij mistook him to be as dodo as her !!! then that night when they all were coming back from dinner & some guys were passing very mean comments.
Maan instantly ignored then & made Geet look something into the phone. Then he made her wear his jacket.
Geet snapped at Maan mujhe thand nahi lag rahi.
Maan rolled his eyes, then caressed his temple thought for a while then dodo tu ne ice cream khaya tha na issse liyen. She narrowed her brows & wore the jacket getting confused. Brij just watched the whole scene. Had it been his style the all guys might be on the floor picking the remains of their teeth, but yah that would have created lot of scene & may be police involvement. This was city not his HP.

Brij actually patted maans back & gave him a warm hug latter at night. While Geet was grumbling through out the walk for making her wear the jacket & spoiling the look of her dress.. uff also .. agar tum se jacket uttaya nahi jata tho, laten kyun ho? Lazy bum.. can't even carry ur jacket. dehko na veerji yeh humesha aisen kartha hain..lazy bum
Maan - I am not lazy bum
lazy bum lazy bum..lazy bum lazy bum
she ran behind chasing him.

-BLOG maitri part 27-


Precap
Maan heart broken

-PREV PART 26-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow me first cant beleive it
reading such a beautiful
update before going to college
really made my day
update was mind blowing
wonderful
Edited by Firegurl - 14 years ago
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YAY SECOND 😆 FINALLYY! It was sooo sweet 😃😳😆 Awww sooo sweet . . . But they are so very platonic 😆 As in . . . The story's pace is slower in the sense that I don't know what to expect.

The friendship-turned love has be tuned in 😉

AISH loved it MUSKI DI! MUWAHHH 😉

Love

Liz
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago

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