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Posted: 14 years ago

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Geet stretched to serve & her waist band was visible. He looked curiously, he almost missed the short.. but smashed it for a point & just walked straight into her..running his finger under them.. yeh tho toot gaya tha na!! she jerked back with his touch & then with his question.
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She had goose bumps all over her, his fingers caressing her waist she tucked her tummy & then his tongue followed. His teeth bit them & ripped them away, she hissed in pain & a pleasure that was new to her. She turned away, he pulled her carnally holding her hair, she looked at him over her shoulder feeling shy & pain with the strain. His teeth bit her ear & removed her ears, she closed her eyes & surrendered in his embrace. Her heart paced wildly, she thought she may just not be able to take it any more. ur beautiful he said moving towards her lips and touching her cheeks now with the tip of his tongue. For a moment she didn't move. There was something about that moment she wanted to go towards him. She had never felt anything like this before but from few hrs she have been getting this weird feeling about him and she knew this was special. She knew that they have some kind of bond and she knew that it was emotional & it was so hard to control him & self.

When he came in front of her, she just closed her eyes, with his every touch freaked her out. She could sometime hear his heart thudding down on her where his chest rested on her, which makes her fearfully want him more and more. she turned around again to resisting, denying the very nave feel. She was so scared.

dodo he pulled her putting his hand on her stomach. His lips softly caressing the red mark the ripped caused & licking the blood layer that surfaced. His lips were warms she wanted to move him but she couldn't she felt like something was stopping her from doing that. He turns her around and kisses her other end. she still didn't move a weird power have taken over her and all she could think of was him and his warmth. The whole feel was driving her insanity, she almost cried.. I will get u a new one.. don't cry na.. his lips crashed on her lips she could see he was feeling the same way the way his tongue was moving, the way his eyes were looking at her. she started kissing him back. He moves his lips towards her neck and start kissing her there, like he was tasting her, moving back to her lips. He bites her lower lip softly and blood comes out and he licks it lightly & passionately takes them in. He kept on sucking , she was feeling pleasure rather than pain. She was enjoying it which was freaking her out but she couldn't think right that time. She closed her eyes in repugnance, amused, pleased, unsure, shy..weak..timid

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he ran his finger yet again under the band now pulling it with his forefinger towards.. she held her breath, tucking her tummy yet again, cold shiver ran through her, she opened her eyes startling yet again, looking at him in shock, surprise. Dodo.. he realized wat he was asking & doing he inched back releasing the entangled finger. He ran his fingers through the sweaty hair & looked away, how was he even to know she wore a waist band. He had never seen his dodo in suits, nothing else it never revealed her waist, no ..he was dam sure !!! no she didn't even wear a saree or skirt, even her night suit was salwar, which always concealed her completely. Why did he feel he broke it, why did he feel guilty, why he felt she cried because of that. He restlessly turned to ask her, who was looking red in more of astonishment. Her cheeks burned more in disbelieve. He couldn't dare to ask her looking at her state. Still wanted to .. but then the opponent team just came to shake hands. Maan smiled & shook his hand, Geet was still not able to move a inch. She stood where she was glued. Maan tried to mock, I think she can't believe we won!!! they smiled & left. She was still looking shocked.

Dodo he shook her reluctantly. A tear formed at the corner of her left eyes. Dodo he called her again painfully. She couldn't move to face him, she dipped her head & blinked couple of times to hiding the tear. He felt odd, he began to feel responsible for those tears, his heart tore into pieces. He took the jacket & held it to cover her. She chuckled in his embrace. He slowly dared to rest his finger on her chin, kya huwa dodo?
Main.. woh..tum ko.. ?? she couldn't form her sentence.
He lifted her chin little higher, her
she would have just broken down but her phone rang .. she immediately let go, struggling to pull out the phone from her jacket pocket. He pulled it out for her, seeing her shudder.

She answered the phone shaking
brig - darji ko heart attack huwa hain
Geet cried ..she cried ..it was more of a mixed emotional turmoil. She was at the verge of breaking & this just tripped her.
Maan took the phone & checked the number, it was from home.
He spoke to Brij. The moment he said hello
Brij - oye Maan!!! tu kab aayaa??
Maan - aaj hi veer ji
Brij - kanha chala gaya tha aapni dodo ko chod ke??
Maan - ji woh!!! Maan looked at his dodo with guilt filled eyes.
Brij - aacha sun darji ko heart attack ho gaya hain, dodo ko yanha leka aaja, pata nahi itna kyun ro rahi hain. I am feeling worried for her
Maan - ji veer ji

-BLOG maitri part 26-

Precap
Maan & Geet in HP
-PREV PART 25 NEXT PART 27-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww
a nic eone
so atleast geet 's family knws abt mann...
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Posted: 14 years ago
waw awsome update last part is good update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part...thnk god geet's family has no problem with maan being friend with geet...continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
waist band wala part confeses me a bit!...why geet was crying???...and why maan was so confused???...didn't he remember???...
glad to see that maan and geet's family are on friendly terms!...
continue sooN!
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Posted: 14 years ago
to ye bat hain...apna munda shayed nasheme tha aur ek weak moment main unke beach physical relation ho gaya aur agle din mundene sab vul gaye but ye jab ladki ko pata chala to wo tute dil lekar chale gaye...oho brij neto kaha maan ne apni dodo ko chodkar gaya...to fir kya hua tha??????????????but ye but to paakki hain physical relation hua tha aur maan ne vul gaya lekin waist tutneki bat yaad hain...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant part . . Woaa.. Nice to know that Geet's family is so nice to Maan!!
Loved it! Continue soon . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan did that in past n he dosent remember it
Ryt
Yeah tabhi in tits n buts he remembers the waist band
Nice romantic senti update
Looks lik Geet's family also knws Maan very well
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank-you-desi-glitters-32

for d update

it ws awesome-desi-glitters-1you-rock-desi-glitters-15👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice 'Muskan!!

Love how her famiky knows bout Maan!!!

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