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..Armaania..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

res!! <3

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awww!! this was just .. aww. i don't even know what to say! i loved this so muchh. <3 one of the best KaPi OS i have ever read, next to that Masooma's one! <333 gosh, i love you both..so frikkin talented!

i loved their first convo! SRK. lmao. ''no, i'm much better than SRK!'' 🤣 haha, i love kabiruu!! omg, he was her boss? :O LOL, poor pia! psh, you should have shown us how they became friends, mahuuu. i want moreee.

i love the last BUT NOW..i seriously do! it's beautiful..no, it's BEYOND beautiful!! <333 aww, kabir. my little sacrficing vulnerable kabirr !! he didn't want to be an imposition on pia when he mattered the most to her! 😳 i loved their last convo again.. the katrina one!! :D sarcastic..fantastic.. lmao. kapi!! <3 i loved this, mahi. :D

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

*Reserved*

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Aww!! Omg!! Mahi!! This was so beautiful!! I love the way you described what these two meant to each other. Like I said, call their bond whatever you like, but it's special in it's own way. And Kabir is not a bad friend at all. The very fact that he let Pia go makes him a good friend!

And I love the ending the most!! Pia is fantastic! 🤣 Omg! Where do you get all this from, Mahi? 🤣 🤣

Lovely OS, Sis! I wish more people had read it on the forum! Love ya, babes! 🤗

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Sanjna

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Posted: 14 years ago

mahi frst of all one suggestion plz post it in PKYEK forum as OS upto 15 pages are allowed there as most of people dont knw about dis OS who are kapi fans

@red: u wroye tthese lines very beautifully, word selection was too good👏👏👏

and the line world without her is nothing is just perfect to display deep love
And dere grst meeting SRK and kabeer showing self obessession was too good😳
And in next meeting kabeer and piya were boss, i really love office romance😉and the way u r representing is too good
Then u explained ur bond so beautifully with the word frendship that i have no words for that 👏
and den pia's love confession just wowww
seriously just wowww
And the ending was the best part of dis OS
i just loved d way u ended
katrina kaif and salman khan🤣
atlast piya behaving like kabeer was too good

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sourmisery

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Posted: 14 years ago

Mahi...!!!

First let me talk about the PM. I was so shocked to see your PM with a very good title 😉. I miss being called that! My Gabbar!! 😭😭😭 But oh well, your OS! How could I not read it!? Sorry that I can't write HUGE comments like you but I'll try my best!

I really didn't know you could write so well! Why don't you write more yaar! This was too short. I saw too many gaping holes in this, like many things weren't explained (constructive criticism hon 😆) Just that part I didn't like other than that everything was fab!

Loved KaPi's first meeting! When he called her "Mrs." I thought he meant "Mrs. Kabir Singh Rathore"! I was like, "OMG! THAT'S SO KABIRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" But that didn't happen. What happened was better! Oye Piya! Kabir kya SRK se kam hai? 😉 But poor Piya! He turned out to be her BOSS! Oh boy! Thats harsh. She must be going, "What the hell did I end up into!?" hahahaha!

I loved your whole description on friendship...it was so touching...😳 From the start Kabir was all out for Piya, and somewhere Piya too for him. Its just stupid missed opportunities that keep cropping up between them 😭 But destiny is always set na! Piya's destiny is Kabir. No matter what! He's the perfect match for her, no matter what anyone says! Because she came back to him. After realizing she didn't waste a moment and came back for him, to be with him, to feel complete.

The end was such a sweet one! "No Kabir, I am being fantastic!" Awww! Reminds me of their "Kya tumhare father" conversations they had. The KaPi we all fell for hard enough to hit out hearts with everlasting effects...for this I am super thankful to you! You reminded me just how beautiful KaPi is...!

I love you!!

P.S - I love Akku too! 😳