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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

lovely update Muskan
dodo and genie are so cute
cont soon

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

~maitri~
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He had to carry her now, as she threw her hands at him & made cute faces looking really tired. She sat on his back clutching her feet around his torus, while her arms around his neck. She exactly knew how to cheer him up. Get him out of his low mood. By the time they came back home he had forgotten all about Soniya.

As the walked in ballu waited for them at the door step.
Yeh kya kar rakha hain tumne ballu ko he yelled at geet
she looked at ballu & then at Maan.. kyun kya huwa?
Dodo yeh boy hain why have u made pony tail for him.
She giggled pulling his pony tail..I love him like that. Kitna cute lag raha hain na
Maan pulled of the bands & brushed his hair down. She got angry & pinned Maan down.

dodo chodo mujhe

mera ballu ka hairstyle kharab kiya.. u

She didn't leave him until she made pony on his short hair & made him wear bindi's he fought & struggled to let go. There was no use. She had plonked herself over him & tied his hair up. He didn't want to push her off him again, he was already quiet guilty with her swollen elbow. She took lots of pics & laughed. Even ballu couldn't control.. he rolled over laughing.

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Geet laughed looking at the pics from the album. those were the only things she had to cherrish, treasure. Her thought were distracted when she heard her phone ring. She lifted it wondering some emergency from home, since no one calls her that late. It was already 2am.
Dodo..
she smiled
u didn't sleep
u didn't let me
he sighed
she bit her lips thinking wat she just said
u don't have to bite ur lips for that now
she closed her eyes in embarrassment
stop turning red & pink now, he laughed u making me feel something
she kept quiet holding the receiver away from her..she could hear him say all that, it tickled her
He cut the call & called her again
she blinked & looked at the phone, wondering how was it ringing when she was on a call.
She saw it was him again, she promptly answered cut gaya tha?
Nahi main ne cut kiya tha
kyun
u where holding the phone away from ur ears, I had to call again to speak to u
she blushed
dodo
umm
I miss u yaar
I miss u too genie
phir mujhe jane kyun diya
aur main kya karthi
jo humesha karthi thi
she kept quiet
Ek bar tho kaha hota
har baath kahi nahi jaathi genie
tum jaanthi hona mujhe
khud se jada
phir bhi
shayad issi liyen
issi liya chod diya mujhe!! ek bar bhi nahi socha tumhare bina mera kya hoga
main tumhe chod ke nahi gayen thi
he cuts the call feeling miserable. After all it was all his mistake. A big mistake. He wondered how he wish he could bring back the days of laughter. How to abandon whatsoever he quest after, which gave him nothing but pain. How to make gone this total eclipse. How he wished to blow the darkness with the rays from her lips.

His only wish was to come back !!! so that they could meander, so she could be the mistress, his heart's commander like always. How could she abandon her fleet to sink, why didn't she come to rescue him, save him without a wink. When she always knew how incomplete he was without her until now. His life was so meaningless without her only now did he realize that. How true she always was!!! those unsaid words off hers, that smile ..that blush..the nave dodo of his. He had been through hell in last 8yrs. Every passing minute was only filled with pain & hate-redness, sadly in his life..who had never learned to hate. Its only today he realized wat she meant to him. It was like a flip of coin with her presence. The pain in his heart vanished. Like always she never questioned him.. but was there.. to sooth him.. in her own maitri way.. helping him fall in love with self yet again. He was looking at self in mirror yet again.. after so many years.. he called himself Maan Singh Khurana..yet again!!! she filled him with senses he had long lost, probably thought would never feel again. But he was feeling it all over again.. alive!!!

he couldn't sleep the whole night that day.. actually he had been having sleepless nights for past 8 odd years but today it was different. During sleepless nights, he never felt lonely, he just felt his mere existence was a burden on earth. He had pretend that the past isnt real, still so much sadness in his hopeless life, never knew things would change so fast...today she was not here and he felt alone. He wished she came back home. He wanted to talk to her, be with her, cry to her.. tell her.. plead her forgiveness.. thanks her for the life she given him. Such beautiful part of his life he never knew would exist for he had forgotten life even existed.

Precap
they meet yet again
-PREV PART 20-

thanks a lot for The warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Ruchi

@ruchs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

me first... unbelievable...😲😲😲

awesome update... eagerly waitin to know wat went wrong betwen them...😭😭

luv u muski😊

Edited by ruchs - 14 years ago

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

beautiful .. dying to know what went wrong, that he forgot Dodo and that part of his life , altogether..

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Saru

@smallville

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Awesome update!!!
I wonder why maan had to leave dodo?!?!

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Badria

@sharbatvemto

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

you are welcome dear muskan

and we looove you tooo

i think we are blessed with your

super romantic nice stories

we love it, and please don't ever

stop writing for us

your the best 🤗

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Princess DD

@Amoureux

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

😊 now you are making us feel something. Muskan Pleae update soon. curiosity to know what went wrong between them is killing me. BTW thanks for the lovely update