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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats. W8tn. Diii plz make it quick
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congrates for new thread
n waiting foe update
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Hey Muski how come ur not sleeping at this time of night??😕
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Waiting Waiting
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~maitri~
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He immediately lifts her. She was all with her big tears crying like a baby now.. ghode ne gira diya...
ballu .. yeh ghoda nahi hain.. yeh kachar hain.. booo
...
dodo sorry yaar..
umm.. mujhe tumse baat nahi karni
dodo ..sorry
..he holds his ears

she takes ballu & turns her back still crying
aacha baba horsy ride karle.. he goes on his knees & two hands
mujhe kachar ride nahi karni she snaps back, hits her leg on the floor & walks away.
Dam!!! he gets worried forgetting all about his actual pain.. dodo.. plz yaar.. jaan ke nahi kiya tha
she sits on the couch rubbing her elbow which was red now. He gets a balm & applies. Ballu ko bhi lagi hogi. He looks at ballu & then at her. Her nose was pink, so was her cheeks.. eyes were filled with tears.. not stopping. Sweetoo.. mera cuteoo.. dodo.. sorry.. she looks at him folding her lips outwards..
aacha baba kachar ride nahi karna tho kya karna hain..he can't believe he actually called himself kachar.. great!!! but well now it was his dodo in tears.. thats all mattered.. he couldn't think anything else..not even about the break up he had just few mins ago.
Mujhe trekking jana hain she said out of the blue.
Wow thats cool he jumped in joy.

They immediately packed their back pack & left in his bike at around 9pm at night. It was very beautiful night & as they moved out of the city limits it started to pour. She spread her hand, dipped her head & screamed... loud stretching her legs.. yooouuu...so did he...she immediately hugged him tight..genie phir se ghirna hain kya!!! he laughed & held the handle bars.. after 90-120 mins of bike ride they reached a village from where they were to start their trek. They parked the bike & at around 11.30 pm they started their trek.

Rain has stopped but the night sky was fully covered with clouds, with an menacing grin. As they came out of the village, there was no sign of any living being around them. The road sides had grape vines that looked like ethereal shadows of serpentine creatures. they walked on chatting, actually more of dodo with her jokes. A smooth breeze set in, with their slight wet dress, but now making them feel nice & excited. After the evening rain, residuum moisture in the air, gave it a balmy feel. A literal carelessness, no more aptly a feeling of being free from all concerns, past n future because they are so much there and now, condescend onto the very air. He actually felt so light. Thats wat exactly she wanted, make him feel light.
Nandi hills, motionless deep steep looked swallowed in darkness. The hill top, though lit, smothered by clouds clinging onto it, created an appearance of fire glowing, red, black & dangerously evil. They now walked quietly as it seemed more fun that way. Silent dark night..glowing under the moonlight.. occasionally smiling at each other & then her jokes followed with giggle. They did take rest for a while on white cemented parts on side of the road. Some times not sure which turns to take they stuck to the main road when diversion came.


They reached near the Nandhi temple around 4 am in the night ..or lets say early hrs of the morning!!! they walked around & did see some one near a teashop. He was just setting up the shop then.. they sat their & sipped their tea, all cuddled up closer. Now nandhi hill seemed closer

Towards the end of that village, a patch of dogs started barking at them frenetic, as if haunted by evil spirits. Thats it the best prank Genie could plan on his dodo. Nobody was around, gloomy night, in an unknown place, with episodic gusts of wind ruffling tree leaves, all he could make her imagine was of stories, the spirits and goblins she was afraid of. He started making funny noises, she clung on to him, holding his arms, almost digging her nails in .. shooting quick round of prayers to babaji. Oh he enjoyed it thoroughly.

As they crossed the village & entered the main road which led them into a graveled path with dense shrubs lining on both sides. Then came an open ground followed by a patch of woods. The graveled path was lost in shrubs and stones littered everywhere. Then, suddenly, struck by what they saw. Not a single hiss. She might have definitely skipped a beat now. In front of them, the path vanished into an dark cave. A series of steps led into it. They had no idea where they were headed and what laid ahead. geet feared wat if something or somebody came out of that cave, the thought itself scared the hell out of her. Babaji!!! thats all she could say!! where would they run to. For a moment or two, she might have thought that the idea of a trek was really heedless. But then it was for her genie..she knew how much he loved it!! & nothing else could have distracted him so well!!!then the cave struck her eyes again & she screamed babaji yet again closing her eyes tightly.

They stood their for a while still undecided if to turn back or forward, Maan dragged her & walked ahead. With increasing heartbeats, all suspense and fear hung in air, she went ahead, apprehensively closing her eyes tight clinging on to him, just to discover, it was a concrete passageway that gave an appearance of cave in darkness. He laughed a loud..seeing her face ..
After that, it was steep, continuously, steep up. they climbed on cagily. It was pitch dark, as they were under cover of trees. Now and then, it mizzle a bit and stopped. It was the most beautiful early hours of the day as the clouds float at their level. As they came out of the stretch of woods, they felt a totally different ambiance. Air was still, not a leaf moved. But out of it, it was chilling, winds howled and they felt they may be flown if they didn't cling on. Shivering, with shuttering teeth they moved on.


Soon after a bit of tedious climbing on narrow stairs fragile engraved onto rocky surface, they stopped for a moment and looked back. It was a scene to behold for an aeon. There was an ocean of clouds. Congregation of puffs of blue..gray .black..white clouds rushing like a muddy water in an overflowing river. Layers of clouds, like different streams. It was awesome. they sat there watching this for they felt like eternity.
This is an experience which they always wanted to relive after the first one. He held her hand & pulled her closer. As they sat silently admiring the beautiful view. She could feel the silence in him turning painful.. main ne khaha tha na she is not ur type.. she said as she rested her head on his arms
he nodded silently..then resting his head on hers
kya huwa..she put her arms around his waist tucking him closer.
I did every thing like the way she wanted
umm
she came in the restaurant & was thrilled with the arrangement
I am sure .. u really rock
she cut the cake & we shared the first bite
tumne uske joota khaya...yuck
he rolled his eyes...
then she smiled & looked at me with expectations hinting.. I didn't quiet understand that bit. He hugged her closer
she might be expecting a gift
yah ..she was.. how do u know
u didn't get her one??😲
actually she had very clearly instructed that I shouldn't get one!!!
Oh genie..its not that way..u know these girls right
nahi .. dodo mujhe nahi samjh aati.. she just stood up & got angry.. she says.. main ne mana kiya .. lekin didn't u feel like getting something for me..
I mean wat the hell!!!! she said didn't u want to give a gift
I said I could buy her one now.. I even offered to take her shopping but she refused
.
Oh!!! genie
she just walked out of the door & shouted ..don't call me ever again
now I was confused ..& asked her.. I should not call her or I shouldn't feel like calling her..
Geet closed her eyes & bit her teeth..ooo..woow.. that was super cool rudeness..but she didn't say that!
She hugged him.. I didn't like her any way.
He hugged her & stayed in her arms.. feeling lighter. He pulled out & kissed her forehead. Thanxs dodo.. this was brilliant idea... I really loved it.


Reluctantly, they started our trek again. It was chilly. Wind was howling past us as if it would throw them. It was not raining, but being inside an moving cloud was another experience. Trees swayed tumultuously. They could not believe, few feet down, it was all calm n placid. And here, so many storms taking place at the same time, rather a prehistoric storm. Great moment in lifetime.. well it was life that always..when they were together it would be time to cherish.

They whole place seemed filled with dense air. Clouds around appeared like fogs. It rained only under the trees. It seemed really risky walking along the edge of hill, with wind pushing them dangerously down the edge. They reached the hill top at around 7am.. it was beautifully carpeted with clouds..no sun was visible..since the sun could be seen only around 9am. He had to carry her now, as she threw her hands at him & made cute faces looking really tired. She sat on his back clutching her feet around his torus, while her arms around his neck.


Precap
Maan missing Geet!!

-NEXT PART 19-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
yehhh
After a long time me first
Thanks Muski for an awesome update...dodo is not dodo but a real genious and a true friend ,she knows Maan and his misery and the ways to get him out of it...
She knew it very well the type of girl he was friendly with...she slowly made him to open up his heart so that he could be at ease...
Brilliantly written ...simply mindblowig.
Continue soon.
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if the kachar is so much tempting i dont mind and luv the way geet distracted maan. I cant belive he actually forgot to take gift for his GF

So maan missing geet in present or flashback
Edited by heermeher - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yay!
Edited:
Loved it truly...cute dodo lightened man's mood and the excursion was awesome... Please do updt tm soon
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: heermeher

if the kachar is so much tempting i dont mind and luv the way geet distracted maan. I cant belive he actually forgot to take gift for his GF

So maan missing geet in present or flashback

HE didn't forget.. she had told him not to get one!!
& he took it literally😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread Muskan.. :)

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