Hum Tum Aur Pyaar - AbhiNikk KaJen

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1. Character sketch and Prologue = Pg 1
2. First Day + First Meetings = Pg 1
3. Party? + Date = Pg 2
4. Jealousy + Panga = Pg 3

This is about 2 brothers who try and live
life to the max. But their life has turned
into a roller-coaster after they meet these
2 special women. They will have to face the
ups and downs as one. They will have to be
prepared for what has to come. Will they be
able to come together as one or will they go
their separate ways? What will destiny have
in store for them?
Abhimanyu Malik is the older twin brother of Armaan. And also
has a younger brother, Rahul . Abhi and Armaan have been stay
-ing in a hostel in london since the age of 9 and no-one knows why.
He is in University now and is 23. He is mischievous and lovable
along with his brother Armaan.

Armaan is the younger twin brother of Abhimanyu who listens to
whatever he is told by his older brother. Although Armaan is the
prankster of all time he has a soft side for girls. All the girls swoon
him but there are many rare girls who don't.

Nikita Malhotra, having left her scholarship midway at another
university, Nikki joins Northumbriya Uni. She is very jolly, quirky
and likes to live life as it comes.

Riddhima Gupta is a very Shy and Quiet person. She tries to
stay away from trouble as much as she can until she meets
Armaan.
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Want to read more
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Looks interesting. Update soon and can you add me to your pm list
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Heyy guys i will probably update once a week
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i like prolougue.pls update soon.
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sounds good... would love to read more... update soon and do add me to your pm list...
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2. First day + First meeting

"Armaan, Armaan uth jao tume kya pehli hi din late jaana hai. Kudh late hoge aur mujhe bhi late karwaoge."

Abhi had been trying for the past 10mins to wake up Armaan. But all Armaan was doing was hiding his face under the bed sheets to avoid the direct contact with the sun as abhi had opened the curtains to wake him up but to no vial. Abhi had been pissed off to the max by Armaan today. But Armaan knew that abhi could not stay mad at Armaan for long. Abhi had walked out the room 5mins ago which made Armaan confused as abhi would always leave after waking him up. Abhi had walked back into the room and gave Armaan one last warning otherwise he would bear the consequences. But as Armaan was the stubborn one he did not budge. Abhi had pulled off the blanket from Armaan and spilled the entire bucketful of cold water onto him.

"AaaHhh" Armaan shrieked. "Bhai apne aisa kyun kiya"

I told u that you would bear the consequences id u didn't listen, ab buckto" Abhi retorted.

Abhi was 10mins older but both were as childish as each other. But abhi was used to taking care of Armaan as he was older even though it was only 10mins. After a while abhi was waiting in the car. The car was a MBW M3 with the rooftop opened. Abhi had been honking the horn so Armaan would hurry up. Armaan had rushed out the house while putting on his jeans jacket. Both of them had set off for the first day at Uni. As they reached Armaan has left the car ASAP as he had seen some hot girls looking at him. He would never miss a chance at girls. He went up to them and said.

"Heyy beautiful, Armaan's the name, unusual name, like me" But all the girls weren't actually interested in him but instead it was abhi who they were interested in him.

"Who's that you've come with" Said one of the girls wearing a mini skirt.

" Oh him he's my twin brother, but why look over there when u have what u want in front of you." Armaan said.

"Do you think u can set him up with me on a date tonight" She said.

Armaan face had frozen at that comment. While abhi was standing outside the car smirking behind Armaan. Abhi had walked towards Armaan ad noticed the girls loathing over him and walked away, after giving the smilesJ. It was 12:00 and they had had a free period so they headed towards the basket ball courts. Abhi and Armaan had played one on one. Most of the time abhi had won but occasionally Armaan wins. Many other had joined in seeing the game growing more and more exciting by the minute. As they had been playing for at least half an hour and decided to take a rest. Just then abhi had realised he had forgotten his fone in his car. He quickly grabbed his water bottle and rushed off. That moment he had bumped into Nikita Malhotra which made both of them stumble and lose balance on their feet.

"You stupid Idiot" She shouted.

"Wow, I'm sorry, it's just your beautiful, I think I'm in love, mujhe music sunay deraha hain". He commented on seeing how gorgeous she was.

"My IPOD" She yelled angrily. "Get off me, whats happened to this its not stopping. It's playing the same track again and again"

"Whats your name" He asked her

But she was too busy concentrating on her IPOD when she screamed "Thank God" because her IPOD wasn't completely bust.

"Thank God, your name is Thank God" He said confusingly.

She knew he wasn't gonna stop bugging her until she said her name so frustrated with him she exclaimed "Nikita Malhotra thats my name, R U Happy now".

He then said he will lovingly call her "Nikki".

She then ran off saying she's getting late.

"Late for what" He replied

"Music Class"

He was completely smitten by her and had forgotten the job he was going for. Just the Armaan arrived and asked "did u get your fone" That was when he realised what he was forgetting to do so then he hurried off to get his fone.

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"Hurry up, Speed up" Shouted Anjali who was Nikki's best friend, classmate and housemate.

"Chal toh rahein ho urdh toh nai sakti" Nikki retorted back.

"Damn my IPOD" She frustradly screamed.

"Yes your damn IPOD, every time I chuck it in the bin you bring it back. Why, that is so uncool" She replied.

Nikki was already frustrated with abhi who busted her IPOD and now she has to listen to anjali's stupid comments. Nikki had snapped back at her by saying

"Why should I chuck it in the bin. I only bought it 6mnths ago"

"But why are you fighting with it". Anjali questioned Nikki

Nikki replied by saying that a bozo had bumped into her and wrecked it. Anjali was also similar to Armaan who was always interested in boys so she was dying to know whether he was hot or not.

"Was it an Good-Looking Bozo or Ugly bozo" Anjali asked

"Nice bozo but he broke my IPOD" She replied

But one way or the other even she found him cute but if only he didn't break her IPOD. Anjali was getting crankier by the minute as she had to get ready for a date and only had 1 Hour. Anjali had forgotten to tell Niki that they only have 1 hour to get ready and when Niki heard this she started running like mad and was shouting her head off at Anjali and was saying "Oh god, why didn't you give her a little common sense. Why are you such a bimbo."

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As Armaan was heading towards the library to gather information to present at an interview at an hour's time. As he was rushing past the corridors is when he noticed a girl wearing a hot pink churidar salwaar kameez. But he had to prepare for an interview for a job, as he has lost many opportunities by being lazy or pretending to be ill. But today he could not get away with an excuse and today he didn't want to give an excuse as abhi was gonna throw a party today if he passed the interview. After he had finished his research he left the library and was walking past the assembly rooms when he noticed the same girls staring outside the window in one of the rooms. He had his eyes fixed on her and her only. She had realised that he was looking at her through the door and started to feel uncomfortable which is why, she gathered her books and glasses and managed to walk past him. As his eyes were still fixed on her, although she wasn't looking at him directly her mind was focused in him as well which is why she slipped and was about to fall when Armaan holds on to her and saves her from falling. They both stare directly into each other's eyes. The eyes contact was broken when one of her friends (Nikki) called her by her nick name "Ridzi". Both of them bent down to pick up her things which had dropped when they bumped into each other's head ,after she picked up her things, she started to run away when she looked back as she heard him say

"Naam toh batati jao"

She did look back but did not speak at all, not even a thankyou. As he stood there dreamingly remembering her and kept playing the scene that just happened again and again in his head and commented saying

"Ridzi, that's a nice nick name"

But he came to his senses when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder and calling HIS name.

"Armaan. Armaan kaha koh gayein. Chalo humein ghar bhi toh jaana hain tumhare interview keliye."

As Armaan heard abhi speak, he became more stressful as the hour was approaching rapidly.

Will he get the job, or will he disappoint abhi once again?

Edited by Luv-abhiNikk - 14 years ago
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Awesome part...love the first meet of both... can't wait to read more... update soon and thanks for the pm...
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i didnt know u update
loved it
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