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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.........who's this Raghav.........such a small update.......i wanna a long one.......continue soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for ur reply. And sorry for short update. Agla update jald hi karungi

Originally posted by: shilpita87

itne dinno baad wo bhi chotta sa update...not fair...😔

but stll at least u updated...it was wonderful part...nakku was so cute when she said dutta has got new trick to make evry1 worry...hmm...who is this raghav...thanks for pm..waiting for more..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rubal223

thank god, after so many days we got an update from you
<div></div>nice update

sorry dear for late update. Thanks for your comments.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

so finally an update

lovely update dear.


Thanks dear for like my ff and ur comments.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye hoye

what an update

loved it

its getting more and more intersting as FF

and u my friend is getting slow and very slow with updates :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow, u updated after so many days! great chapter, really curious bout this raghav what does he do? update soon na. aur plz pm me too. xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaad aagayi hameri...itne dino baad ey...missd u ukno n yh i dd rmmba bout ur oda ltl ff lol...waiting 4 u 2 update this n dat 1 soon...
*sighs in relief* thnk god dutta ko kuch nahi hua...lekin i rely ddnt like ragav...dadude had jus dd bad dark edge to him...
ohoh luks like he wil do suma bad 2 dutta...but i rely hope dutta is alive...pls jaldi flashbak ko finish karo n dutta ko wapas lao...rely missing him...espesh now dat hes not in d show either...
thnx 4 pm hun...sory 4 l8 rply...been busy...ps cont soon...<3 u x
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART - 16

(Baji or Ravi apne apne kamre me sone chale jaate hai.)

(agle din subah subah sab naste ke table per Ravi ka wait kar rahe hai. Tabhi Ravi phone per kisi se baat karte huye neeche aata hai.)

Ravi – haan maa main bilkul thik hoo. ………. Main abhi meeting ke liye nikal hi rha tha. ……….. agle hafte tal per aap log to isi hafte aane wale the. Kyun Aadi ko kya hua? Wo thik to hai. Jyada chot to nahi lagi. Thik hai.

(Ravi phone rakh deta hai. AS ke paas jaata hai)

AS – kya hua Ravi beta bahut pareshan dikh rahe ho?

Ravi – Aunty wo……… wo Aadi ka accident ho gaya hai.

AS – kya? Wo thik to hai.

Ravi – ji wo jyada nahi chota sa accident hua hai. wo ab thik hai. per isi wazah se maa ka is hafte aane ka prograam cancle ho gaya hai ab wo agle hafte aayegi.

AS – koi baat nahi. Accha tum baitho nasta kar lo. Leela, Kala, Roop aaj hum mandir me hawan me jaa rahe hai. tum theeno bhi humare saath chalo.

Roop – nahi AS meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai main nahi jaa paungi.

AS – thik hai hum Leela, Kala ke saath chale jaayenge.

Kala – haan AS ab humare liye to bus yahee kaam bacha reh gaya hai. hum chalege aapke saath. Per Nakku uska kya karenge.

AS – wo hum Nakku ko bhi apne saath le ja rahe hai.

(Naste ke baad Ravi apne office chala jaata hai. Sudh, Kishor, Baji teeno apne kaam per chale jaate hai. AS, Leela, Kala or Nakku charo mandir chale jaate hai. ghar me Roop akele reh jaati hai.)

(Ravi gari me jaa raha hai per wo Nakusha ke baare me hi soch raha hai.)

Ravi – (apne aap se) Nakusha kitni masoom si lagti hai na. Aakhir is maasoom si ladki ki zindgi me aisa kya hua hai jo wo apni jaan dena chahti hai. aisa kya hua hoga jiski wazah se ye pariwar aaj is haal me hai. pata nhi kyun per mujhe is kahani ka end jaanane me itni dilchaspi kyun hai.)

(Idhar Baji apne kaam per laga hai tabhi use ek phone aata hai. or kuch der baad wo ghar me pereshan saa aata hai)

Baji – Roop Roop kaha hai tu. Roop ………….. he bhagwan use kuch ho to nahi gaya. Phone per bhi kitni dari huyee lag rahi thi. Roop ……… bhagwan kare sab thik ho. Roop kaha hai tu…………

(Baji Roop ko dhodhte huye hall me aata hai. use Roop waha bhi nahi milti. Tabhi uske uper phool girne lagte hai. Baji palat kar dekhta hai to Roop uske uper phool gira rhi hoti hai. isase pehle ki Baji kuch kehta gaana chalne lagta hai.)

Song Name :- Aaja re aa sajna

Film Name:- Return of Jewel Thief

(Roop sidhiyo se utar kar Baji ke paas aati hai or uska haanth pakad kar gaati hai.)

Aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Ho………… aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Mera maan jale mera tan jale

mera maan jale mera tan jale

tu baaho me lele mujhe

Aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Ho………… aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

(Baji Roop ka haath chuda kar door jaane ki kosis karta hai per Roop uska rasta rok leti hai. fir Baji ke seene se lag kar gaati hai.)

maine kisi se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya

kitni ne poocha ikrara nahi kiya

maine kisi se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya

kitni ne poocha ikrara nahi kiya

(Baji Roop ko hata kar door chala jaata hai. Roop uske paas jakar gaati hai)

mere hotho pe haan aai hai

mere hontho pe haan aai hai

aaj pehli dafa jaan le……….

Aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Ho………… aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

(Baji ke piche jaaka Roop use piche se pakad leti hai. Baji ko kuch pal ke liye kuch mehsoos hota hai per phir wo sambhal jaata hai. or Roop ko alag kar ke jaane lagta hai lekin Roop uska haanth pakad leti hai.)

Aankhe chura ke jo guzar jayega tu

Saari umar phir pachtayega tu

Aankhe chura ke jo guzar jayega tu

Saari umar phir pachtayega tu

(Baji haanth chuda kar sofe pe baith jaata hai. Roop uske paas jakar badi masumiyat se kehti hai.)

Le jaayega mujhe or koi

Le jaayega mujhe or koi

Usase pehle mujhe tham le

(Roop Baji ko sofe per dhakka dekar use behkane ki kosis karti hai.)

Aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Ho………… aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Mera maan jale mera tan jale

mera maan jale mera tan jale

tu baaho me lele mujhe

Aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

Ho………… aaja re aa sajna tu chu le mujhe.

(Roop jaise hi Baji ke hontho ki taraf badhti hai Baji use dhakka deta hai.)

Baji – ye kya hai Roop? Kya kar rahi hai tu. Tune to mujhe kha tha ki kuch gunde tere piche pare hai or tu akeli hai isliye main kaam chodkar yah bhaga bhaga aaya.

Roop – jhooth bola tha maine. Tumhe yaha akele bulane ke liye.

Baji – kahe ko? Kahe ko bulana chahti thi mere ko akele ye sab karne ke liye. Ye kya kar rahi thi tu?

Roop – tumhe batane ki kosis kar rahi thi ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoo.

Baji – pyaar. Isko pyaar bolti hai tu. Ye gaana gana. Aise kareeb aana. Ye pyaar nahi hai.

Roop – to tu bta na Baji main or kya kroo jisase tujhe yakeen ho jaye ki main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hoo.

Baji – rehne de Roop ye tere bus ka nahi hai. tu pyaar ko samjhti hi nahi hai. or main tere se pyaar nahi kar sakta. Is ghar ki saari jimeedari hai mere uper. Main ye pyaar vyaar nahi …….. main ye nahi kar sakta. Or tujhse to kabhi nahi.

Roop – haan tu mujhse pyaar kyun karega. Main kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Kala tai ka saath dekar jo gunah kiya uski saza yahi hai ki mujhe tera pyaar kabhi na mile. Leikn ek baat yaad rakhna Baji main tere se bahut pyaar karti hai or humesha karti rahegi. Agar meri shadi kisi or se huyee na to jaan de degi.

Baji – kya bkwas kar rahi hai.

Roop – bakwas nahi kar rahi hai Bji. Tu samjhta kyun nahi main tujhse bahut payya karti hai. main tera saath dena chahti hai is ghar ki zimmedariya sambhalne me. Teri her musibat me tera haanth tham kar chalna chahti hai. Baji tu………. Tujhe to mujhper mere pyaar per yakeen hi nahi hai. (Roop rone lagti hai. Baji se dekha nahi jaata or wo Roop ke kareeb aakar uske chehre ko haanth me tham kar bolta hai)

Baji – yakeen hai Roop mujhe tere pyaar per pura yakeen hai.

(Baji or Roop dono ek doosre ka haanthn pakad kar rone lagte hai. dono rote rote bahut kareeb aa jate hai or Baji Roop ko kiss karta hai. tabhi darwaze per ek ahat hoti hai or dono plat kar udhar dekhte hai. dono ghbra jaate hai.)

Precap – Nakku apne kamre me Dutta ki almari saza rahi hai. Ravi andar aata hai. bed per ek tasweer rahi hai. Ravi use utha kr dekhne jaa raha hota hai ki Nakku uske haath se wo tasweer le leti hai.

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Posted: 14 years ago
no single reply😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 i think this FF is boring.😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey am so sory cudnt reply yet..its not boring at all..bbe i love it...its just that i havt examz so been busy wit that...wil reply properly on it on monday ..pakka

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