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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update but very short

i'm very excited it's sure he is teasing naku.

plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar Dutta kahan chale gaya hai...lol.....nice update upload asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update 👏me like it ....hmm...i think dutta is just fooling nakku 😆...OR ???😲

take care🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vs-kmh

thanks for your comments.
or mujhe jaise hi time milta hai main apna FF update kar deti hoo. waie mera ek or FF hai. KMH. use bhi update krna hota hai.

another ff...is dat also on ltl or is it on kmh??
im sur i read an ff cald kmh on ltl...sory gt a fish memory ccnt rmmba weda i read dat ff or not...dont think i cudv mised it tho😆😆
ps. cn u please at least tel us whether the endings gona b hapy or not i.e. D gona cum bak or not...u c b4 i read (ie.book or story) i read the ending 1st so if its hapy il cary on wit it otherwise theres no way am gona read it...unfortunatly cnt do dd same wit ffs lol ikno its stupid thng 2 do but i cnt help it lol n b4 u ask it doesnt ruin da story 4 me at all..it actualy makes it beter😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART - 15

(Saare gharwale Dutta ko lekar pareshan hai. Tabhi saamne se Dutta aata hai. AS, Nakku or baki ghar wale Dutta ko thik thak dekhkar khush hote hai.)

AS – Dutta………… Dutta tu thik to hai hum sab kitne pareshan ho gaye the. Maan me kitne bure bure khyal aa rahe the.

Dutta – AS main bilkul thik hoo. Main to bus………… yahi paas tak gaya tha.

Kala – Dutta Bhau, tujhe pata hai yaha hum sab ki kya halt ho rahi thi. Agar tujhe kahi jaana hi tha to hum sabko bata ke jaata. Kum se kum hum is tarah se pareshan to nahi hote. Tujhe pata hai hum sab ki yaha halat kya thi. Tu itna laparwah kaise ho sakta hai.

Baji – haan bhau tu aisa karega mujhe nahi pata tha. Mere ko to laga tha ki chota sa mazak hoga per tu to………..

Nakku – mazak kaisa mazak?

Dutta – kuch nahi. Aap log mujhe datate hi rahenge ya phir meri baat bhi sunenge. Party me jab aap sab apni apni baato me lage the tabhi mujhe ek phone aaya. Main bahar chala gaya to mujhe waha raghav mila. Ise mujhse kuch zaroori or khaas baat karni thi isliye maine BG ko andar bhej diya. Phir mujhe iske saath jaana para. Maine soch araste me aap sabko phone kar doonga per mera mobile kahi kho gaya tha. Isliye aap logo ko kahabar nahi kar paya. Per main Raghav ke saath hi gaya tha.

Nakku – jhooth bol rahe hai aap. AS ye inka hum sabko pareshan karne ka naya tarika hai. Achanak ye Raghav kaha se aa gaya aaj tak to is naam ko aapki zuban se nahi suna. Ye achanak kaha se aa gaya.

Dutta – kya matlab naam nahi suna. Ye humara bahut purana pehchan wala hai tu nahi jaanti use Baji tu kuch bol na………

Baji – are haa re Nakku tu nahi jaanti Raghav bahut purana dost hai Bhau ka.

Nakku – accha tu bol raha hai to thik hai ab aap wahi khade rahenge ki andar bhi aayenge.

Dutta – are itni der se to khud hi aap sab mujhe darwaze per hi khade karke sawal jawab kar rahe the or ab ye bhi meri galti hai.

Nakku – saab aap bhi na ……….. ab chaliye andar.

Roop – haan Bhau aapki pareshani me humne khana bhi nahi khaya bahut bhookh lagi hai ab chaliye na.

Dutta – to apni vahini ko bol na yahi tab se mujhe yaha khada rake hai.

Nakku – main…… aap khud hi waha khade hai. Ab andar chaliye. Khana khate hai.

(sab khana khane ke liye dinning table per aate hai. Sab khana kha hi rahe hote hai ki tabhi ek BG aakar kehta hai ki Dutta se koi milne aaya hai. Dutta khana chod kar us aadmi se milne ke liye uthata hai to Nakku use rokti hai.)

Nakku – sab pehle khana to khtam kar lijiye. Meri aai kehti hai ki khana beech me chod kar nahi uthna chahiye.

Dutta – mujhe pata hai per koi zaroori kaam ho to phir koi farak nahi parta mujhe milne jaane de warna wo andar aa jayega.

Nakku – aa jane do per aap nahi jaoge.

(Dutta aage badhta hai to Nakku uske saamne use rokane ke liye aa jaati hai. Dutta phir se aage badhta hai Nakku phir saamne aa jati hai per is kosis me wo balance sambhal nahi pati or girne lagti hai per tabhi koi aakar use girne se bacha leta hai. Wo aadmi Nakku ko dekhta rehta hai tabhi Dutta ki aawaz per uska dhyan tootata hai.)

Dutta – are Raghav tum. Main to tujhse milne aa hi raha tha per ye hai na Nakku meri patni ye ………… kahir accha hua tune ise girne se bacha liya. Or Nakku tu thik hai na. Jab dekh tab Baccho jaise zid karti rehti hai agar aaj gir jaati to.

(Nakku AS or baki sabke paas chali jaati hai. Dutta sabse Raghav ka introduction karata hai.)

Dutta – AS ye Raghav hai. Mere mushkil ke dino me isne meri bahut madad ki thi. Or Raghav ye meri AS hai. Ye meri behne Kala tai, Leela tai, Roop ye mere jija Kishor or Sudarshan hai. Or ye meri patni Nakusha.

Raghav – Namsate Vahini saheb.

(Nakku ko Raghav ka bartav kuch accha nahi laga. Kuch der rukne ke baad Raghav chala gaya.)

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Baji – us din hume pata nahi tha ki humare ghar per kaun sa toofaan aane wala hai.

Ravi – toofaan?

Baji – haan toofaan. Aisa toofaan jisme humare ghar ki saari khushiya sab kuch barbad ho gaya.

Ravi – lekin hua kya uske baad?

Baji – uske baad……..

AS – are Baji Ravi beta tum dono ab tak jaag rahe ho bahut raat ho gayi hai so jaao.

Baji – ji AS abhi jaa hi rahe the. Ravi bhai abhi bahut raat ho gayee hai abhi sone chalte hai baki ki khani kal sunauga.

(Baji or Ravi apne apne kamre me sone chale jaate hai.)

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Posted: 14 years ago
itne dinno baad wo bhi chotta sa update.....not fair...😔

but stll at least u updated...it was wonderful part...nakku was so cute when she said dutta has got new trick to make evry1 worry....hmm....who is this raghav...thanks for pm..waiting for more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god, after so many days we got an update from you nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
so finally an update

lovely update dear.


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

another ff...is dat also on ltl or is it on kmh??

im sur i read an ff cald kmh on ltl...sory gt a fish memory ccnt rmmba weda i read dat ff or not...dont think i cudv mised it tho😆😆
ps. cn u please at least tel us whether the endings gona b hapy or not i.e. D gona cum bak or not...u c b4 i read (ie.book or story) i read the ending 1st so if its hapy il cary on wit it otherwise theres no way am gona read it...unfortunatly cnt do dd same wit ffs lol ikno its stupid thng 2 do but i cnt help it lol n b4 u ask it doesnt ruin da story 4 me at all..it actualy makes it beter😳

ye FF bhi LTL ka hi hai.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ..... after so long

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