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Posted: 14 years ago
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I can't help it! I love writing 😛 Although this is quite sad...
FOR YOU, MY LOVE
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'You kill that girl... and not just kill her... kill her with a pain that will haunt her, even after her death' the gruff voice announced. 'Don't ' make ' me ' do ' this' Maan bellowed. 'I'll do whatever you want, don't make me hurt that girl... she's innocent, I swear to you!'

'I know she's innocent, Maan!' the old man appeared out of the darkness. 'But you are in love with her, and what better way is there to cause torture to the son of the father who killed my family? I want you to suffer for what your father has done to me! I want you to kill your lover and I promise that I'll free your family... They'll be safe and safer than they would have ever been.'

'I have to kill you' he announced. Tears formed inside his eyes and Geet looked at him in daze. How was she not surprised? Was it because she had always known the doomed outcome of the love that blossomed inside her heart for him?

He was shaking with trepidation, his finger on the trigger. A deep voice called behind bars of the dungeons that they both were in. 'Get over with it, son!' Maan gulped but did not move.
'How could you?' Geet questioned, tears streaming down her cheeks. 'How could you! I loved you and you ' no, this can't be happening... Maan, you loved me and we loved each other! ' Geet cried, trying desperately to make him realize the feelings that he had seemed to have forgotten.
'You fool,' Maan muttered. 'Don't you get it? I played you all along! I made you believe I loved you but I didn't... at all' he smirked but inside him, saying those words killed him. Please, Geet... He begged to her inside his heart and she seemed to have read his thoughts. 'Don't worry,' she smiled.

Geet did not feel convinced. His eyes spoke another story, a different story. She knew that love wasn't a lie... one can't be that good at lying. Her heart went out to him, as she realized

'What are you saying?' he spat.

'You can't kill me, Maan...' Geet announced in certainty. 'I know you love me... even if this started out as a game; I know you loved me...'

'He has my family' Maan said, tears now trickling down his face. 'He has them, every one of them... I'm so sorry' his voice was merely louder than a whisper and he panted. 'I love you so much' he cried and Geet wished to break the chains that held her to the dusty wall and embrace him in her arms.

'Don't cry' Geet whispered. 'Close your eyes and pull the trigger... I ' I love you more' Maan looked into his lover's eyes. How could he live, knowing that these eyes wouldn't be there anymore to astound him with the depth and passion they contained? How could he live without knowing that she would be there for him in his toughest of times? How could he live with the fact that he had been the reason for her death?! Love was excruciatingly painful... Maan stared at the crying figure in front of him in anguish; how easily she had surrendered herself to him, and how fragile she looked, fixed in those heavy chains. How was he to believe that he would be the one to finish off the one he had loved with all his heart? But he had to save his family... his brother, his grandmother, his three sisters, and his mother... they all hadn't deserved the torture that they had gotten due to his rotten father...

As Maan lowered his gun, he closed his eyes and drew in a long breath.

'Maan, what are you doing?' Geet asked; her eyes were wide with fear. Maan cried slowly as he fell on his knees. The gun dropped out of his hand and he let out a painful cry. Geet closed her eyes tight for she could not have witnessed the scene of remorse and immense pain that played in front of her eyes. 'Maan, Kill me already!'

'YOU THINK IT'S EASY?!' Maan shouted. He was raging and his eyes were red. 'Do you think I didn't love you all this while? How can you tell me to kill you?'

Geet remained speechless.

He picked up the gun that lay in front of him, his hands trembling with horror. He placed his fingers on the hard trigger and instead of Geet's, he pointed it on his heart. 'Maan ' Maan... no... No... What are you doing?!' Geet yelled, crying and trying to break the impossibly heavy chains that held her. But she couldn't have and he pulled the trigger.

Everything was gone.

He fell on the hard, rocky ground lifelessly.

'MAAN!' the painful cry of his lover was all he heard in the few last moments of his life. At least now, he would be able to rest peacefully... even if it was in his death.

'Open your eyes Maan, Maan, be alive!' Geet cried. The blood stain where he had shot himself was getting redder.

'What has happened here?!' the same voice of an old man echoed in the dangerously dark dungeon. Upon witnessing that his captive had died, he rushed forwards and unlocked the heavy bars. A few other guards rushed forward to settle Geet down and as soon as Geet broke free, she darted towards the body that lay a foot from her.

He was still breathing, but she knew that it was getting shorter with every passing second. She laid a hand on his heart that was still beating and whispered in anguish: 'Maan, open your eyes, please Maan! Why did you do this to yourself? Maan open your eyes!' she yelled, leaning down on his chest just so her face was right above his heart. 'I can feel it beating, Maan... Maan don't do this to me! Please!' she cried. 'Geet,' a broken voice entered her ears and she instantly raised her head to witness his closing eyes. 'I love ' you' he sighed brokenly and the hand that he was trying to hold up to her now fell limply.
Geet whimpered and shouted in agony and torment. 'Move away girl! The lad is dead!' the old man announced, pulling her by the hair so that she would move. But she did not. She whimpered and shouted and cried in repentance as she held the body of the one who loved her most - close to her heart.

'Should we kill her too? She could report the police about us...' the other man standing beside the old one spoke but Geet couldn't have heard a thing.

'I don't think she'd be stable enough to ' this is worse than death for her...' the ruthless old man chortled deeply. 'Dispose of the body Nathaniel, and take the girl to an asylum or something... I think that's the place which is best suited for her at the moment... also, deliver the news of the lad's death to his family... oh wait! They are already dead!' he laughed wickedly. 'They all got what they deserved...'

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Downhill thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
that ws so painful..but loved it completely
saanjh11 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3
yaar it was tragic but written so well👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
that ws so painful..but loved it completely
thanks for fantastic but painfully os
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love it ..u have written so beautifully...its such Sad OS ! do write more and Pm me plz ..!!
Edited by --Thush-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooopiieee you wrote another OS
and thanx for the PM
literally man it was amazing..
beautifully written and quite a tragic one..
loved the emotions described and the lines..
it was superb
👏👏👏👏👏
it was a sad and depressing OS (no complaints as u had already given a disclaimer)
but it was AMMAAZInG
love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
That was hell senti
Maan jus culdnt do it
Geet wnt be able to live now
Do write sum more n Pm me plz
seemamary thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#8
Awesome update, a painfull one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
hiii
beautiful os
loved it
sooo sad
poor maaneet
thanks NoorFatima 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tragic but amazing.
thanks NOOR Fatima 4 d pm.

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