Humsafar - A Story - Ceased : Apology - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Everyone needs a companion, someone who will hold our hand while walking on the various paths of life, someone who will understand our silence and who will take care of us when we are at our worst - a companion for life ...

Parents dedicate all their lives to their kids thinking that when they get old, their kids will hold their hands and would walk with them - would understand their unspoken needs just like they did ... But us kids, we often take their love for granted and believe that whatever they did was their duty - but then don't the kids have any sort of duties towards their parents? Shouldn't the kids too care for their parents' happiness? Are all the duties just for the parents while the kids enjoy their rights?

We work day and night to make our lives beautiful, grand and everyday climb the steps towards success while also moulding a wonderful life for our kids but just for a moment let's pause and turn back to see our parents who stand there far behind;lonely yet smile at our success ... But we never do that and keep walking ahead while they try to catch up with us and day after day start losing hope of seeing us turn around towards them ...

But Vaidehi Chakraborty and Vanraj Bose after dedicating their lives to their kids and getting in return just sadness and loneliness - decided to live for themselves, to do what their hearts desired and became each other's companions but how would their kids react to this development in their parents' life? Would they be able to accept it or become the barriers towards their happiness? When the kids have all the rights to take decisions of their lives then why not the parents? Is the role of the parents only confined to the family photographs and nothing else? If they have the duties then why shouldn't they have their rights?

All the questions will be answered in the second journey of Vaidehi and Vanraj where they filled emptiness in their lives with their companionship and became each other's Humsafar ...

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Writer's Note
The story is not based on any sitcom character and is a figment of my imagination ... The characters involved are the creations of my heart and do not hold any resemblance to any characters seen on television.
Thank you.
Jaee D. Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome back dear...such a realistic concept...so lets start with a new journey...will wait for ur pms...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey.. šŸ¤—
Your imagination is amazing.. ā­ļø
Loved the synopsis.. ā¤ļø
Concept is superb.. 😃
Perfectly matches with the reality.. 😊
The synopsis really touched my heart.. ā¤ļø
I felt goosebumps, really.. 😳
Good job..šŸ‘šŸ¼
Keep it up.. šŸ‘
So please add me to your pm list.. 😃
Update soon.. šŸ˜›
Love.. Bidz 😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Synopsis itself says how beautiful this story will be. It is really a different but interesting concept...šŸ‘

I'm sure this will be another awesome story! Looking fwd to it!
Thanks for the pm!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jaee
Nice start
beautiful concept
loved it-its very touchy an realistic
do cont it...
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beautiful start..every single word in the synopsis was beautiful. and what i liked the best is the banner. It tells your story it self. It is gorgeous. *touchwood*.

Continue soon. šŸ¤—


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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful synopsis Jaee... I would love to be a part of this journey
Thanks for the pm
God Bless You
~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jaee! I love this Topic. Amazing concept.. & its very realistic. Waiting for you to continue! <3 Do Pm me.! Will wait for you to continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great concept...
Loved it and excited to read the journey from ajnabee to humsafar...
Cont soon...
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lovely concept!!!
waiting 4 ur next update...
thanks 4 the pm

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