Abhiya FF-Love and Tragedy epilogue pg 30(7th May) - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that my FV
song
sad & emotional
poor abhay
amazing update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnt
thanks pm
thank yuuuuu mucht
that song suit well
pls update maaneet
love it


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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc part... cont soon.. thanx for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG.. Awesome Update Dear.. From Angela n Dev's part to Abhay's arrival n den d Song.. It was Gr8.. Sorry m not getting more adjectives. So now Abhay is back n as he said in his thoughts dat he is gonna bring his Piya back to d way she was b4.. Is it really gonna happen.. Hoping 2 C him on d Mission 2 Win Piya Back.. as Maan is on nowadays in Geet.. n dat Shanaya.,hope she is dead. I dont wish 2 C her again in Abhiya's life. & A kind request.. Plz Stop saying if d story getting boring n all.. Its not at all boring.. Its getting intresting day by day.. Loved it.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Piya sat there listening to his song. Her chest pained like hell. It seemed difficult for her to breathe...

Then Arnav signaled her about Marissa's advance towards her and she quickly collected herself and got presentable... Marissa came and sat beside her and asked: Hey PJ! this song....it seems sweet and melodious...can you translate it fer me! Before Piya could refuse...Anvesha herself invited to translate and took away Marissa from Piya...
Abhay thought again: Please Piya! chup ho jao na! kyun mujhe guilty feel karwa rahi ho...itne saal main is belief mein raha that you were dead and now that I see you live in front of me...all the happiness of your well-being seems to go away...!
After the song was over, Abhay got up and returned to his seat...there he again went into a trance...he started reliving the moment when he had first seen her...

* * * * *
It's my first day at College...I hope it goes well and I am behaved...The students here look so cheerful and happy and look at me....I look as if kisi ne mujhe maar ke College bhej diya ho!
I take out my slip and see that my first class is about to begin...It's not tough to locate rooms in such a crowded college...you are bound to get someone who'll help you out...In my case, a girl...wearing specs and her hair is all clogged with oil and tightly knotted in two plates...she says her name in Maala...So I am not the only one who looks strange...
Hey! watch it! Two girls faint in my way...their thoughts are funny...they seem to like me... Great going! My room is near the rear-wing and it's easy to locate it...
The class is all airy and full of windows... Mr. Abhay Raichand! I hear my name being called from the class... Oh! so she is our professor... That's me! She assigns me the books and also the seat...The seat belongs to some girls I guess...coz' it's Piya Jaiswal scratched on the top... A Girl! Good day to begin...
The girl who shares the seat with me smells good... Well that's what my opinion about people is all about...whether they smell good or not! I can hear some foot-steps...distinct from the others...The smell is the same that enthralls the seat...Then the girl comes in my sight... Very beautiful...looks like a fairy's child...Rosy cheeks and pink lips...but lips are a little lustier...
Surprisingly, my throat starts burning...it feels as if someone has placed a piece of coal in my throat...the thirst...almost impossible to stop...whats with this girl! Why does she attract me so much...she is a fragile human after all... OMG! is she the same girl whose life I saved earlier this morning... Oh no! I wish she doesn't drool around... Hi! I am Piya Jaiswal!...you? Abhay Raichand... I cannot afford a hi because it might give her an opportunity to speak further... Well, thanks for saving me in the morning...That was very sweet of you! She is so pretty...and her smile- divine! It's Okay! Shall we concentrate on our studies... Ya'ah! I am sorry...we should... I think i have avoided her to the extent I could...hope she doesn't drool near me further... she is so mouth-watering...
After the class, she pulled me back again... Abhay! I think we should hang out together...that's my way of thanking somebody... Can you just get over it? I mean i think i was wrong saving you... I continued to walk...I just couldn't see her grief-stricken face...She was so lovely...

The next day, I try to apologize...I think it was very rude of me...
From that day...my friendship with Piya strengthened and one day, I gathered courage and proposed her...I even told her what I was... I just couldn't stay without her...though she looked as the most tempting meal...I tried to be full while I was hanging out with her so that I am not a danger for her....
Oh! I so wished Shanaya hadn't returned in my life and ruined it...
Her beau Arjun...he took the Vampire-rules for granted...converting as many people without any need...I mean people who were healthy to have a happy human life were converted to soulless monster by him...when I was questioned about him...I frankly replied...that was his end and Shanaya's enmity against me and my family...She ran away shouting that she would come back one day and she did....
* * * * *

Marissa watched Abhay as was in a trance and then moved towards him and shook him... Mr. Raichand? Ah! Yes... So shall we...? Marissa pointed towards the buffet. Abhay and food...huh? Then he refused...she pleaded again... and he refused again... She was fed up and she went to PJ.
PJ?
Ya'ah!
Make sure Mr. Raichand eats something...
Me?
Yes you my dear... don't refuse or you'll loose your job...
Marissa ..that's not fair...
Everything is fair my dear! if its me!
Sure!

After Marissa went away, Anvesha proffered to serve Abhay but she had something else in her mind...
PJ! Main jaati hoon! You wait here...
No Annie...if I don't face him now..then never...I have my family with me...it's the best occasion...
hmm!

Abhay stood up when he saw PJ proceeding towards him. He thought may she wanted an explanation or reply...he was ready with that...
H...
Mr. Raichand! Please...can you proceed for dinner...our other guests will not serve until you serve...so please...
Piya! I wan...
Please Mr. Raichand...! Can you proceed...
um..okay!
Abhay was shocked by that behavior... He thought she would curse him...talk to him and ask him...but she was still as ice...she was behaving coldly... She never uplifted her gaze while she talked to him. He was astonished... He proceeded for dinner and took some salad and graced the event...
As soon as he served himself, he turned around to see if Piya was still near him...but she was gone...far away from him...at the bar...ordering something...She ordered treble whiskey... He couldn't believe his eyes. Piya Jaiswal who had always organised campaigns against teen-drinking was herself drinking... After one order, she placed another and then again...

Precap
Abhay- Why are you doing this to yourself...You never drank!
PREV- PART 9
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Edited by CIDRoxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hei shivangi,
now as abhay-piya met after 6 years its getting interesting..when will she come to know wat happened actually..hope that;ll be near the final part of ur FF..so before that they both should know that they still have feelings for each other..do continue soon..waiting for ur next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww


m feeling so sad for pia
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Posted: 14 years ago
super update
love it
pls cont soonnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsm nd mindblwing updt dear.
it ws a superb one!!!!!
Plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago

it was lovely👏

piya's such a cold behaviour towards abhay was natural 😆but she is so brave😲
waiting for more of their convo😆
pm me the next part😉
update soon😉
Edited by mansim - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsum part,i truely loved it.now let's see how abhay wins piya.

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