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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 5
Once again a GREAT update Anku!
I loved it from the start till the end! You sure know how to keep your reader hooked onto the plot!
I LOVE the interactions between AR, its just so real that I can imagine it! Their usual teasing is just too damn good! The way Armaan understands every feeling, insecurity of Riddhima is truly commendable! Its great that Ridzy is finally, slowly but steadily coming out of her shell full of insecurites, and I LOVE that its all due to Armaan that its happening. Otherwise her pathetic father gave up hope right from the beginning! 😡 I'm curious to know why Ridz doesn't want to go back India, though I know its mainly for the insult that Armaan has to face, I think she loves it, living with Armaan all by herself!
I LOVE the dinner bit, the separate cubicles, when he came and sat next to her instead of being opposite! Truly said Armaan Mallik is unqiue! He don't follow the crowd! he's just P.E.R.F.E.C.T!!
I was wondering what the banner for the part meant, now I know.
Its so adorable the way AR both handled the baby! I had a feeling that Ridzy's gonna feel negative again but you gave me a nice surprise! I LOVED how she took the initiative to talk about their babies! Its great that you haven't gone for the predictable plot! You know I LOVE your writing na?? lol

Part 6
I'm glad that Armaan has took Nikki's advice on board and is involving Riddhima in all the work, that way she'd feel less dependent and more normal around her surroundings and circumstances.

I love how Armaan has done that child care centre thing! Its just so considerate of him to do that, that too just for Riddhima! I mean can a guy get any more PERFECT?
He's just too damn good! I'm loving the interactions between AR more and more with each update!

Keep rocking! Can't wait for the next one!

Edited by ..-Marj-.. - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

wow! loveddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttt

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww

cont super super super soon pleaseeeee

wowww

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shaaz_91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

hey
amazing one
luvd it
armaan iz such a sweetheart...........😍
cont soon
tc
shaaz

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kalikijen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

wow what a part.... awesome update

armaan is sooo sweet...... actually went to the trouble of creating child care centre just so ridds has smething to do....

continue soon

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a.vaishnavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

awwwwwwww anku. this was sucha shonu upd8. i so loved it.......

can i get an armaan rite nw.............. i jsuw ant him............. he is such a sweetheart...... yaar..........

i m happy wid the way the things r turning out........in a positive way..... anku asusual u write beautifully......

i adore kids. n even more i adore ammy/ ksg wid kids...... hehe

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crazyforkaran

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

aww!! i cant stop awwing after the part!!

too too too too cuteeee!!

hehe!!!

you are becoming better and better with each part ankita!!

its beautiful!!

i loved each and every bit of the part!!

suuppeer!!!!

the morning bit was tooo adorable!!

aww armaan and his khula muh!!

i could imagine that scene soo well, it was very well written!!

idea of a play center was very nicee!!

gosh, armaan is so perfect!!

i loved himm!!

<333333

waiting for next,

prarthana..

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jiyaa_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

awwwwwwww how cute

update soon

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Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

awww those kids are making Armaan Riddhima so happy :)

hahah the morning scene was so cute!!! Armaan and Riddhima having their own little nok jhok and then after that just getting back to normal 😆

bechara Armaan got peed on 😆😆 good he'll be prepared for it when he has his own kid 😆

Ridz smile is back 😳 and its so good to read parts where she's happy rather than gloomy :|
the gloomy basket sometimes irritates me because she begins to avoid Armaan alot :| but this Ridz is my fav! happy and smiling and getting irritated and angry with Armaan's small small nataks 😳

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#279

RESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

ANKUUUUUUUUUU <33333333

SO I NEEEEEED to comment on part 5 and 6.

PART 5

OKIE ILOVE LOVE THAT PARTTTTTT! <3

everything was so cuuuuutes! and like i said it was PERFECT thing to read before sleeeeeeeping teeehe.

ARMAAAAAN MALLIK is SO PERFECT! <3 thak ne wali nahi oon telling him perfect again and again! :| 😍 And so is Riddhimaaaa. <3 everything they do is for them ALWAYS ALWAYS! and that's what i LOVEEEEEEEE about this FF yaaar! and you PORTRAY IT SO WELL! <3 so Ahmazzzzingggg! <3 :D ILOVEYOU for writing this ff- SOMETHING WHICH WE ALL WANTED SO BAD! :D

Okieee coming to the lunch bit. ILOVE Flirty Naughty Armaaaaam <3 teeheee

THE BABY PARTTTTTTTT! <3 - HIGHLIGHTTT! <3

Armaaaaan and babies is a BLISS always! and this one was sos so so so WELL WRITTEN! every tiny detail being specified <33 ILOVED THAT! especially him talking in that babyish languageee- AWWW <3 ILOVEHIM!

That scene was such a BLISS! <3 the baby not wanting to go AWW! If i were in its place i would not go aswell LOL

okie so ILOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDD part 6 SO SO MUCH. i'll re-edit this place. LT can go off anytime LOL

Edited by Sani-KarAni-KSG - 14 years ago