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Posted: 14 years ago
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I don't know why I wrote this but while watching Guddu, and what Runjhun said, the thoughts very much presented itself. , He was very much trying to scare Runjhun, but compared to the first time he touch her, there was no threat in his voice, no abrupt nature.He didn't back her into the corner. He was gentle, his tone soft, almost like he was trying to seduce her instead of frighten her. He could have handled her roughly if he was really trying to scare her (which I'm sure he was, I'm not questioning his intention) but he was nonetheless gentle (yes I know I've repeated the word a million times). On another note I know a lot of people mentioned it was smart of Runjhun to bring up Neelu, but I think that just came out of nowhere for Runjhun. She was trying to be in a different place in her thoughts. Trying not to think of what might happen and the next thing to come to her mind was Neelu. I don't think it was really a brainwave, but it's been the other thing that's been bothering her, subconsciously. So it was the first thing that came to her. I thought it was very placed by the CVs.

The Gentle Predator

The gentle predator

His scent lures my senses

But it draws me gently.

The gentle predator

His arms clasp my hands

But it holds me lightly

The gentle predator,

His gaze rips my soul

But it tears me softly

The gentle predator,

His touch sears my skin

But it burns me tenderly

The gentle predator

His voice terrifies my heart

But it scares me quietly

The gentle predator

This person, my enemy

But he entangles me faithfully





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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice poem Wafah! Thank u.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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She thought Guddu will not stop because she did not know what was his intentions what she thinks he's her husband and all what he's doing is his right.She already have the doubt-curiosity somewhere in her mind and that just passed by and being the wife with all the right she asked her hubby who's Neelu?Not to forget while going in the kitchen she also thinks to herself she must find out who's Neelu????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice poem.......apt for Gunjhun I think ........the question came from a wife's subconcious mind who wanna know about the girl whose name ...her husband calls ....sweeetly in his sleep.......before submitting herself to her husband as she was not knowing......hhow Guddu will react on hearing Neelu's name
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What a beautiful poem Wafah.....
It's a good warm-up for me for tonight.......
It is almost time for me to go home but before that ...I should buy some Ice-cream......I think.... ....
I need it when I am watching the episode tonight..........
The song of Katy Perry " Firework" just pop into my head....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written, Wafah. Yes he is a predator, if you think about him in terms of real life. But in this show he is a loveable predator as you put it so well, who is so subtly but definitely going through a metamorphosis.
The funny part is that we all knew the outcome of this SR, but with a slight twist from the writers that was almost a "DUH" moment for some of us, Neelu put an abrupt end to the suspense. Even though I knew from the update, I burst out laughing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahem........



Edited by PRnerd - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fifi, you are too funny. 😃
Totally butchered my favorite book, Pride & Prejudice, but very creative! 😭😕😆
My Mr. Darcy, a predator? NO WAY!
Edited by gardes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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They could have used a better looking predator of the group...hahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Gardes n Wafah...he does have a certain charm though😆..maybe it is the hair😆

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