April 11, 2011 SSBN Written Update

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Naina leaves the Patwardan House

The family is together in the living room, and Ayee and her husband are exchanging ideas and make comments on the festivities. In his room, Daksh is engrossed in his reverie, and dreams of all that happened between him and Naina, during the last few months. Every impression is deeply engraved in his heart. He remembers vividly his encounter with Naina in the train in Sikkim, and how she teased him. Now he finds it in a new light, her light hearted banter,. His mind then wanders to Darjeeling at her friend's wedding and all the fun loving girls he saw there, and Naina was the center of their attraction, but he was aloof and lost his chance of knowing her then. He remembers how smiling was all important for her, and wanted him too to do the same. He thinks of speaking to her in the morning and he goes to sleep. He changes his mind and goes to Naina's room, but finds her sleeping and he goes back.

Rohini is coming down, with Sanket, on the way out her mother, expresses her happiness, of her being a grand mother soon. She has taken a piece of jewelry, which her mother in law had presented to her when she was expecting her eldest child, Sanket. She has now decided to present it to Rohini, and tells her husband excitedly about her plans.

When she tells with all exuberance her desire to present this heirloom to her, the sour faced daughter in law, shows an unresponsive attitude towards her mother. She is all focused on what she wants to do, and thinks she has thought it out well in advance and has road rolled her reluctant husband into going along with her plan.

Whatever explanation the mother gives her, Rohini is determined to go ahead with what she has decided. When Ayee praises Naina for telling them the good news, Rohini has another take on that, and she blames Naina, for spoiling her plans. She never wanted anyone to know what she wanted to do. But the parents get the sense of what she is up to. The mother tries to dissuade her and when Rohini tells her that she is not able to give her the heir (waris) now, but will give her one after some years, the mother is disturbed by the skewed logic of this woman. She tells her, that what is in her body, is not an heir, but her own flesh and blood, a child, that is going to be born as a sign of the mutual love between her and her husband, Sanket. The mother wants her to understand this, but Rohini has no love for any one but herself, and her career. Every one else, has to revolve round her whims and fancies, and she finds a willing collaborator in Sanket.

The father too tries to persuade his daughter in law, but no logic will work on a woman who has made up her obstinate mind. It is obvious, no consideration will stop her from getting what she wants, and that is her career even, though her boss has denied her the promotion, but she still has dreams, and in front of these dreams which are ethereal, the reality of the throbbing life of a child growing within her is nothing, but an obstacle, she has to get rid of. Just because it has been made legal. If the old parents were an obstacle in her path, she would have had no qualms to kill them, if the law had decided to legalize it too ! This logic is often used by the promoters of this industry, actually it is an industry, run for profit, and not euphemistically called, a social service, but in reality, is not seen as such, by the immediate people involved, like the grand parents, and her husband. All these are road blocks, in her path of 'success'. Well, she gets her way, and walks out of the house, and her submissive husband trails behind her, as her chaperon. Whether this will be eating her up later in her life, is something which she will have to battle with, when the time comes. Then the psychiatrists will make their money. In the end the stand of the grand parents will stand as a monument for the foolish choices of humans.

The mother collapses in grief, and her sister in law, Shyamal, supports her, and consoles her. The father, Vidhyadhar too is distraught, and is silent. What can't be helped, has to be endured. Shridar too is there, but he is practical. He tells them, that to allow Rohini to do what she wants, as in any case, they should have known what type of a daughter in law they had. She tells her uncle to stop his interference but he annoys her all the more. He makes a sign to her mockingly, with his hand asking her to go out.

When she has gone out, Shridar tells his brother, the reason why he has been so firm on his children. He says, his lenient ways, have made Sanket a spineless male, chasing a woman, who decides about his fate.

When all this is going on, Daksh is in his dreams, thinking of Naina, and goes to find her where she is. A new day has dawned. When he is about to knock on her door, Kaka Shridar, tells him that she has left, and gives him the letter she wrote to him. Naina writes: "I wanted to wish you a proper good bye, but I have to leave, before the Bus goes. I am not sure if I will be coming back" She concludes the letter by offering him her love. Signs it, Naina. (Later we will know, that this letter was addressed to the Ayee. but a deliberate confusion is allowed to persist. Naina, if she was leaving the house, for good, would have discussed the repayment of the deposit with Kaka, but he does not tell about it, as he wants Daksh to be misled. Akruti should know about it, as Naina would surely have told her about her plans to go to Mrs. Achrekar's wedding and delegated some work for her too, which later she will do.- she too does not get to talk to Daksh, nor he asks her. In the meantime, she had no reason to tell Daksh about it, and that is why, he follows in search of her, not knowing what the reason of her departure was.)

Daksh can not allow her to go, without trying to stop her,. He gets into his car and drives to the Bus Depot, and on the road, Naina drags her suitcase along the road, and hops into a rickshaw, and goes to the bus station. When she reaches there, she searches for the bus for which she has purchased a ticket. We are not yet told of her destination. But when she finds the bus, she shows her ticket to the conductor, and gets into the bus.

Daksh, reaches the bus station, and goes around the buses, searching for Naina, and once he spots a girl, looking like Naina, from behind, and softly he calls her name, but when the girls turns around, he finds that it is not Naina, and he apologizes.

After some time, he finds Naina in a bus, and he goes out to meet her. He tells her that he needs her and wants her to stay. He uses his father and mother and their hurt feelings as an excuse. Naina tells him that she understands, but says, she has to go. The story ends there, as Daksh goes home empty handed, not knowing what lies in store for him, and he will definitely be thinking what it would have been like, if only he had behaved in some other way, rather in the way he treated her. Is it not what happens to us, when we choose the wrong path, instead of the one suggested by our common sense. Our sense gets clouded because of our preconceived notions, as in the case of Rohini and Daksh, each one in different spheres of life. Yet the result is the same, - disappointment with our choice.

The story has left us in suspense, Where is Naina going? The whole story revolves round her, and will that mean, we will be leaving the Patwardhans behind, and go to some other city where she is going? After all, tomorrow we should know, or perhaps we will stay for some time with Daksh and his misery, and share it with him? :Let us wait and see what happens tomorrow...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Another episode with the end as suspense.....

thanks again for the update....

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thank u so much!!!!!!!!!ur updates r mindblowing!
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Thanks for the update..
ROhini is iritating...grrr
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Thanks for the update xx....

I wanna know where Naina is going & why!?!!... such suspense😲.... & I hope tomorrow isn't a Rohini centred episode..... but my guess is that it is going to be
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Thanks for the update 😊

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