FF: Forbidden Love (Abhiya)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Guys,

I am Ritu!!!
This is my third FF n first FF on pkyek!!!
Hope u like it 😳

Forbidden Love

...We are meant to be
(The Title and tag line are contridicting but thats how the FF will be)
So here is a small Trailer (Idea taken from a Novel)
There is someone special for everyone. They come from different generations. They travel across oceans of time and the depths of heavenly dimensions to be with you again.

They come from the other side, from heaven. They look different, but your heart knows them. Your heart has held them in arms. You are bonded together throughout eternity, and you will never be alone.

Your head may interfere: "I do not know you." Your heart knows.

He takes your hand for the first time, and the memory of his touch transcends time and sends a jolt through every atom of your being.

She looks into your eyes, and you see a soul companion across centuries. Your stomach turns upside down. Your arms are gooseflesh. Everything outside this moment loses its importance.

He may not recognize you, even though you have finally met again, even though you know him. You can feel the bond. You can see the potential, the future.

But he does not. His fears, his intellect, his problems keep a veil over his heart's eyes. He does not let you help him sweep the veil aside.
You mourn and grieve, and he moves on. Destiny can be so delicate.

When both recognize each other, no volcano could erupt with more passion. The energy released is tremendous.

A sudden feeling of familiarity, of knowing this new person at depths far beyond what the conscious mind could know.
A feeling of safety and a trust far greater than could be earned in only one day or one week or one month.

You may be awakened to the presence of your soul companion by a look, a dream, a memory, a feeling. You may be awakened by the touch of his hands or the kiss of her lips, and your soul is jolted back to life.

and to remind you that you are together always, to the end of time.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Characters:- Piya, Abhay, Panchi, Sid

(Introduction to Characters will be done when each character enters the story)

Story (By me)

Part 1

*A girl-1 is working in a Kitchen - Cooking, cutting veggies etc. Girl-2 wearing a Dracula mask comes behind her, all set to scare girl-1.*

Girl-2: Boooooooooooooooooooooooooo *yells in a scary tone*

Girl-1: *gets a start n turns* ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *pushes girl-2*

Girl-2: I wanna drink your blooooody bloood...come to daddy.. uhahahhaha *comes close to girl-1, showing off her Dracula teethes*

Girl-1: Birdieeee (Panchi)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sternly*

Girl-2: Piyaaaaa!!!!!!!! kya yaar scene karaab karr diya *removes her mask n throws it n pouts her lip angrily like baby*

Met Birdie aka Panchi,
Naughty, bubbly n livewire. A happy go lucky girl who doesnt know how to be serious or what's problems or how's it to be sad????

n Now met Piya aka Piyashree (heroine)

Sweet, caring, sensible yet innocent girl. Very efficient n a independent n responsible kinda girl.
Panchi n Piya are sisters.

Scene continues...

Girl-1-Piya: Maine kaha na tujhe..mujhe yeh sab yeh sab...cheezien pasand nai.. *taks the mask Dracula mask n throws in the dustbin*

Girl-2-Panchi: Haan haan jaante ho.. Fattttuuuuuu Chandddddd.. Darpok!! :p

Piya: Its not fattu chand.. it just that *thinks something deeply* kuch nai!!!!

Panchi: Just what?? bol bol excuse bol :p *suddenly smells whats cookin* chocolateeee.. ur makin chocolate ladus?? yeppyyyyyyy *goes to the gas n takes hot chocolate in spoon n has it* foooo its hot

Piya: Birdie !! tu bhi na.. yeh ladki!!! *holds her head* lemme cool it n shape it... then u have.. samji..?? Ab jaa ke phadai karr ya kise aur ka dimag khaa

Panchi: Ok ok jaa rahe hoo *goes from the kitchen*

Piya: *continues doing her work when her eyes fall on the draculla mask, she takes it in her hand n goes into flashback*

@Flashback from Piya's point of view

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---15yrs before---

"Nani, Papa, Panchi n Me!!! We used to live in a small villiage, Ooty. We lived happily in our own small little world. Panchi mujhse dho saal badi hai par acctually, main ushe kahin zyaadha mature thi aur aaj bhi ho. Papa ek professor the.. Aey Vey Proffessor nai.. Kafi intelligent proffessor.. He was almost like a Wikipedia of various subject.. especially "subject vampire"!!!

Vampires?? Sounds so unreal na.. but Papa humien unke bare mein kafi kahaniya sunate the.. Darvane Scary types.. He had collected many proofs ke vampires do exist but log unhe pagal samajte the.. but papa was hell bent on proving vampires existence to the world.

Ek din humne news mein suna ke aaye din sher mein kafi random murders ho rahe hai.."

Dad: Dekha!!! Wo yaha bhi ah gaye... iss se pahele sab mare jaye.. unhe rukhna hoga.. logo ko hoshiyar karna padenga *said in a panic*

Piya: but papa.. wo kaun hai? *asked innocently*

Dad: Vampires!! *said in a panic*

Panchi: Bhooooot Nooo *starts crying badly*

"Panchi!!!! Wo tho mujse bhi zyaadha fattu chand thi. Aaj bhi agar usne galti se koi horror movie dekh liya tho ho gaya uska drama chalo. 15yrs before main aur Panchi Jr. School mein padte the.. aur yeh vampires, murders etc kya hota hai.. I dint understand but ONE DAY"

Dad: *cums rushin into the room* Piyaaa Panchiiii!! kaha ho tum dhono??

"We were playin.. Papa came to us in a panic n picked us up n put us in the cupboard n closed the door (leaving it a bit open for us to breath) Main aur Panchi bahut darr gaye. I hugged Panchi n closed/covered her eyes with my hand. But I peeped from the little gap n strange looking person in a robe entered our room.. n He flinged my papa to the wall.. Papa fell unconcious.. n Nani came in to help papa but that man-in-robe cought hold of my nani.. n pierced his two long teeths into her neck n nani just yelled. That time, i dint know what was happening but it definetely looked scary par aaj jab soochte ho tho... my hair is standin even as i remember it now. That man-in-robe dropped nani to the ground n took a deep breath n walked to papa n said:

Man in Robe: U might be tasteless so i am leaving u this time but if u dont stop your research on vampires.. U'll hav to pay a bloody bloody prize.. if u get it?

"my papa was half in conscious but not in a state to fight back!! That guy took a deep breath n walked towards the cupboard, where I n Panchi were hidding. He took a deeper breath as if he could smell us"

Man in Robe: that smells awesomeee

"He was just about to open the cupboard door when the police came barging in n that man-in-robe jumped out of the window n disappeared within seconds. The police arrested my dad for nani's murder n other murders... they termed him 'mental' n jailed him in the hospital. We were send to the orphanage in Mumbai. Later got to know that dad died.

When I think of it today, it all sounds sooo unreal but it was real.. really real!!
I am a educated girl n believeing in vampires is just not happenin but it happened.. It happened front of me.. I lost my little happy world.. my family coz of.......... I hate them.. n I wanna revenge them!!!!
Revenge a Vampire?? is that possible?? Sounds like, I am my insane like my papa but I am not Insane.... nor was he Insane!!!!
I will continue his research n prove to the world about vampires existence.

Papa used to say, the first quality about vampires is that they are veryyy attractive.. They stand out in the whole crowd. Mumbai mein tho aisa koi vampire ya chera dekha nai who can hold my attention for more than even 7seconds......"

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@Present

Panchi: Piyaaaaa.. u are burning my chocolate!! *comes in a huff puff n starts making choco ladus for herself*

Piya: U impatient girl.. Cnt u see..I am doing it??

Panchi: Doing it or dreamin of ur bf?? 😛

Piya: Pagalll!! btw, I have taken up a job in Ooty

Panchi: Are u mad?? In Ooty???? 😕 leaving a hep n happenin city n u are going to a Ooty for a job??

Piya: Ooty.. one of the most beautiful places in India

Panchi: But thats a senseless move!!! Are they paying u 1crore for this job?

Piya: Noo!! but i always wanted to go back there... I know something is waiting for me over there lies over there

Panachi: Something? Tum aur tumare ajeeb baatien Confused weirdo!!! aur mera kya??

Piya: Tujhe thodi na chodongi.. u are also coming with me

Panchi: Noooooo wayyyyyyyssss... I am nt gonna leave mumbai, my friends, my life n come with u

Piya: Ok cool as u wish.. main akele reh loongi *turns grumpily*

Panchi: Yea stay alonee *walks out then comes back n hugs piya from behind* How can i leave u? Tu tho meri duniya hai re!!! 😉 *says in filmy style*

Piya: Aur tu tho meri jaan hai re 😉 *Hugs her*..

Edited by ritu1618 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ritu awesome presentation i love d concept and base in which u r writting d story awesome
and i will post my comment in detail after game😉
Edited by sanjna4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love ur writing......jhoot boley kawa katey🤣 loved ur style......oppsieee another one🤣 will read later.......now thats like a good girl (ab k baar sach bola) wink
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg ritu..you are rocking buddy awesome...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oyeeeeeeee!! 🤗 just read da intro.. 👏 very interesting yaar!! would love to read further.. but not reading part 1 now coz then i won't be able to control reading further!! 😕 so will continue after examz haan!!! 😆
Ohhh God!! i m saying this after examz dialogue for da 5th time in a day now!!! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb Ritu babes U were dhamaka. I wanna read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjna4

ritu awesome presentation i love d concept and base in which u r writting d story awesome
and i will post my comment in detail after game😉

Thank u Sanju 🤗
(10mins ka mehnaat aisa hi hoga na 😆)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: romaila

i love ur writing......jhoot boley kawa katey🤣 loved ur style......oppsieee another one🤣 will read later.......now thats like a good girl (ab k baar sach bola) wink

lol... next time main tujhe jhut bolne ko nai kahogi 🤣 Thanksss for commenting 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita

Omg ritu..you are rocking buddy awesome...

Thanks Apri 🤗
where is ur FF..?? Im sure thats rockin too 😳

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