You Make Me Smile :) [UPDPart2-Pg8] *ArSh FF*

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HEEELLLO :D :D :D :D !
I am BACK!
Who's I am?
I am is ME!
Who's Me?šŸ¤“
Me is JANHVI šŸ˜Ž
*waves to everyone*
Hello everybody! My name is Janhvi, and I back yet with another FF šŸ‘
Yes, I haven't finished any FF I have started till date.
No, I do not promise I will finish this one.😳
But but but but, I promise to TRY!
Like Pinky Promise😳
Soo, this new FF of mine is on ArSh (Armaan-Shilpa)
I had this really cute, stranger type idea in my head so ii thought why not Write It Out! ā¤ļø
Once again, I am an HORRIBLE updater, but I promise to try but till I "Sudhaar jaao" please please please bear with me :)
Thank You!


Love, Janhvi <33
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|:| Prologue |:|


Yahoo Messenger

3:00 a.m

Mr. Charming: Waise Ms. Ghum Shuda apki duty kaal kitne baaje hain?

3:00 a.m

Me: Hmm, around 12ish I think? Kyon?

3:01 a.m

Mr. Charming: Toh chalo koi baat nahin. Mein tumahra time waste kar sakta hu! Waise bhii tum kaafi ajeeb ho! Kitnii bhi late sone jao, tumari BADI si aakhe always wake up at like 5 freaking a.m.

3:01 a.m

Me: Oooye, hello. It' 7.

3:01 a.m

Mr.Charming: Same thing. Suraaj khud 8 baaje se phele nahin uththa.

3:02 a.m

Me: Kaunse duniya mein rehte ho?

3:02 a.m

Mr.Charming: Jee hum rhene toh apke dil mein chahte hain J

3:02 a.m

Me: Shut up!

3:03 a.m

Mr.Charming: DEKHA! Isiliye! Isliye, ii am not in your Dil. Becha tumare husband se bhii karza logi dil mein rent ke liye! Kanjoos Kahekii!

3:04 a.m

Me: Ok, done? Mein jaao?

3:04 a.m

Mr.Charming: Mera sapna itnii jaldi maat poora karo. Don't go SO soon madam.

3:04 a.m

Me: Shuuut up Ammy! I'm tired, aur mujhe sonaa hain!

3:05 a.m

Mr.Charming: Aur mujhe bhook lagi hain, mujhe khaana hain. Hameshaa complaint karti rheti hoon. Khabhii hamari bhi toh sun liya karo!

3:08 a.m

Mr.Charming: So gayi kya?

3:10 a.m

Mr.Charming: So gayi. Ok madam jee. Take care. Good night.

Mr.Charming is offline, and will receive your messages when online.

****

I woke up to the laptop screen blank on me. I checked to see if it was still plugged in, and it was. I moved the cursor, and saw that he'd left at 3:10 a.m.

Wow, 3:10 a.m! Why the heck does this even happen? I have NEVER seen him. He's only seen my picture, and the only picture I've seen of him is the one where he's wearing this dark green sweatshirt, and HUGE sunglasses that hide half of his face along with the stupid flash of the camera.

I tell myself everyday that I'll stop talking to him, but he's ALWAYS online. He usually insists that we talk on the phone'But being a human, and a girl, I don't know if I can trust someone just like that. We even met TOTALLY randomly! How you ask?

It's ALL because of the all mighty : Yahoo Messenger. One day, one horrible day, I decide to click that "CHAT ROOM" link. && some Mr.Charming started talking to me.

There was something though...something in the way he talked. I don't know what it was. We'd ALWAYS fight. I think that was it. He was different from all the other guys who'd fake "loving" me. GAAAAAH. LOVE! Stupid word.

My alarm started ringing on my phone '

It starts in my toes..

And I crinkle my nose,

wherever it goes, I always know..

That you make me smile,

Please stay for a while now

Just take your time..

Wherever you Goo..

I had a passion for Colbie Caillat 'she suddenly became my favorite singer, and I found myself listening to her so much.

"FREAK", I screamed out loud! "It's 10 and I have so much crap to do before that! Bhaag Shilpa!"

****

Ammy

Hopefully she gets up as I saw the laptop lying there. I feel bad keeping her awake for such long time'But everything makes me want to just keep talking to her rather than stop talking to her.

Her being a Medical Student makes everything so complicated! She only HARDELY has free time'and that's always at night; wonder what she does all day?

Whatever! CRAP! Did I just think that? She always says "whatever." And I absolutely hate it!

Time to get ready! Cricket match today! My phone started ringing'

"Hello", I answered.

"Oooye, you coming", talked the other voice.

"Haan yaar, just getting ready"

"Alright! Oh and hey; we're not playing in Oakland! We're going to Fremont! Meet us there?"

"Yeah", I finished. "See ya there!"


Alrighty! So there you have it ! That was the Prologue!

Do tell me what you thought about it, and whether I should move on or not!

Don't forget to hit the LIKE button :)

I shall send PM's to those who will hit the like button, so if you'd like you receive PM's please do Click it!

Thank You !


-Janhvi <33 😳

Edited by shine_bright - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Table of Contents

* Prologue : Page 1 *
* Part 1 : Page 4 *
* Part 2 : Page 8 *

Edited by shine_bright - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Coffee šŸ¤—,

Meri pyaari jaaan!!!!!!! What do I say? Like seriously, I am so used to saying, "you are a kamini" but no this time I need to say that, "you are a jaanemaan" Not kidding! Dude, agar mujhe malum hota ki mere party pe jane k baad tu FF likhegi to mai mahino pehle chali jati you know. 🤣!

Jokes apart! I love it, love it, love it, love it, love it, love * infinite *infinite!!!!! Oye, prologue hi itna pyaara hai, I can't wait for the part itself. You jaldi jaldi likho, mujhe parna hai [ABHI] well jaldi ... ASAP!

&& Dare you not be the not updating writer. Guess what? You can't be one coz SEE [aakhein khol bi] who is here? Yeah that's right. ME aka Alisha aka your looser is here. So that means that if you dare to not update then you will get galliyaans from me. Forget that I will bug you and you know I can stalk you bad. So sochna bi maat uska aur update karti rehna aur mujhe entertain karti rehna. Haha!!!!!!

After all this, do i still need to answer to your question of if you should continue this or not? Well, Ms. Coffee, agar aap ko already pata nahi lag gaya then YES you SHOULD actually YOU MUST CONTINUE and that too ASAP! SAMJI?

Aur haan PM list mai add karna agar nahi bi kiya then no problem, stalker aaisehi nahi bani hu mai.

OKKKKK< OMGSH THE PROLOGUE I can't get over it! Simply fantastic.

Much Love,
Aap ki Losser <3

Edited by shininggal2008 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro..plz add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc intro
plzz add me to the pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaa... Lovely prologue shona... it reminds me of something..lol.. tell u wen we talk.. šŸ˜† šŸ˜† mwaah..update soon. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic prologue, you must continue and please do add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyaa jenny!!!!!!šŸ¤—
i didnt knew dat u write ffs , crap i didnt knew dat u such a fab writer.😃 seriously d prologue ws jus oosum blossum!!! loved it loved it...ahhan i love wen ppz meet through chatting nd fall in love..its so romantic naah..falling in love wid whom u dont no nd all..nd yes gal defo move on...😃....loved ur comcept
beautiful <3<3......n arsh haayeeešŸ˜ luking fwd to dis one
continue super soon ya
love ya :)))
edited to add a PS:
loved d name : u make me smile...simply cute :))
Edited by pixie_n - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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damn ! m late

res for now..
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*EDITED*

Hey Miss HF šŸ¤—(long, since i called u this, isn't ? 😳)

U know, ur pm was more of a shock than a surprise ! šŸ˜† Like I wasnt expecting you to start off another story when we have like NO CLUE about the previous ones ! *mad at you*

So, Lazy bum , u better keep off your laziness coz this time m NOT at all sparing you for leaving another story just like that !😔 Everytime you make us fall in love with the story and leave us dangling in between šŸ˜’

Anyways, coming back to the prologue. It was one of a kind, like online friends and perhaps, acquaintances .. I like that. Sounds interesting.

Shilpa, to me, just was a replica of you. šŸ˜‰ One more, Wat-ever catch phrase victim!! 😲 Tu aur CG kam the kya? U got urselves one more company.. 🤣 Shilpa is a doctor but I wonder wat Armaan is? A cricketer? šŸ˜›

M really intrigued. Wonder what destiny has in store for them!? ā˜ŗļø U are such a wonderful writer, hun.. Please dont let ur talented be wasted.. u knw u can utilize it by updating daily , isn't it?šŸ˜‰ (did i ask for something more? *makes an innocent face*🤣)

Cnt Soon n Sooner. Thanks for d pm.

Love ya loads ..Muaaahh
Vini
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Posted by: PeachyPisces Ā· 1 years ago

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

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