New FF(MG) Relentless part 5 pg23 poem pg 26

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Awesome update

Loved it

Cant wait da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

nice but confusing part.... If he loves natasha/sameera why he kissed geet???????????

n not his so called lover???????????😔

Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago

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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

amazing...

loved it....

wonder if geet is lying or not?????

plz do cont soon...

thnx 4 d pm..

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

dear this is getting better and better......👏
wanna know something about past......
n BTW I am not getting PM's......😭
continue soon...and plz don't forget to send me PM........😳

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

INTERESTING STORY DEAR 😎

DO UPDATE 😃

NICE POEM 😛

Edited by gawdygory - 14 years ago

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

I'm so sorry i havent updated....pardon me😳

will be back with lots of updates...just stuck with exams & problems...

Dont beat me. & dont forget to suggest me wht to do & ur ecpectation. ur questions as well...

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

hey dont worry abt the updates..............all the best

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: _maan_
poem by Maan (written by my friend👏)

Friend, happy am I in myself
Joyful in my own thoughts
Ask for nothing, go not far away
Just gaze, surround and nearby stay

Let only eyes speak of love,
Soundlessly, offer life.
Composing pleasant sweet nothings,
Out of sight, sing your song.
In secret, pluck and string flowers,
Leave behind your garland.

Ask not for heart, just gaze away
Just encircle and nearby stay

Sweet is life, pleasant is night
Enchanting is southern breeze
This sweet stream glides by itself
One wishes for nothing more.
Lost am I within myself
Awash with my own fragrance
As if surrendered have I
My heart, my life, to myself.

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