New FF(MG) Relentless part 5 pg23 poem pg 26

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He walked through the crowd. Sitting in a barstool, He asked the pretty woman sitting just beside him.

"May I buy you a drink?"

The woman turned to look at the most gorgeous face in this world. Dark hair falling on his forehead, dressed all in black, compelling dark chocolate eyes. He was giving one of his smirking to her. Well, she deserves at least his one breathtaking smile when he was going to take something from her.

"Yes, please." She replied in a trance.

He smiled on his charm. Then he frowned. Why taking so much trouble? & he can't wait to long. He looked back to her to find her staring at him. He looked deep in her eyes.

"You are coming with me whenever I'm going to take." He murmured.

She nodded & walked with him out of the pub. He took her behind a large tree. The place was isolated.

"How can you be so handsome?" the woman said.

He rolled his eyes. He would have spared her again one of his smiles but right now he was hungry.

"just stop talking" he retorted.

He compelled her to not to get afraid. He then set her head on his hand exposing her pale neck. This temptation was something he cant control. His fangs extended, veins under his eyes were visible. His eyes were darker then ever.

He then took what he wanted to take. he tilted his head, bringing his face down to that one vein in her neck. She tried to jerk him away but couldn't cope up with his power. She soon became weak. Her vision getting blurred. He dropped her as she fainted.

He then cleared his mouth. & left. Well, He is what he is.

He the Maan singh khurana.

& this is his story.
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Hello guys😃 this is my second FF on maneet of course...😉 its a paranormal one. I love the vampires diaries...vampires...so made maan a vampire😆 a hottest one😉😳 the plot is mine & the story aswell...just using the names..
reviews pls....it makes me happy..& suggestions r wellcome...i'll add character info's & summary soon...
with love
Tahi
Index
part 1 pg 7
part 2 pg 11
part 3 pg 13
part 4 pg 18
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Characters:

Maan Singh Khurana

Well, all i can say is He cant be Tamed

Geet Handa

Geet the mystery continues...
Alekh singh khurana
He is untamed😉
Adrita rathod

who is she?

sameera handa
& we twist....
natasha rathod
ahemmm.....she is the bomb...😉
others character will be introduced as the story proceed....
P.s: all the characters and places r fictional...i'm using pic to give a face to my imagination..
Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan a vampire...interesting...please add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan ia vampire!
really interesting!
do continue!
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Vampire......... Maan singh khurana a vampire.......o.....m.....g...... Loved it........ Continue soon.
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continue soon.........

maan being a vampire is really interesting
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maan n a hot sexy vampire wt more do v need
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Maan Singh Khurana a Vampire....................
wow...................interesting......................
cont soon and pm me.....................
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continue soon.........
Maan singh khurana a vampire.......wowowwwwwwwwww
cont soon and thanks for pm ........😊
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woe..superb dear..
update soon..
nd plz pm me..

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