NivRen FF: Hum Tum- chapter 63 and 64 updated

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Hello Friends my name is Neetika. Like all of you, I am also a diehard fan of NivRen. This is the first serial that I am watching from 6-7 months otherwise it's my habit to watch any serial only for 2-3 months.

'Chand Chupa Badal Mein' is really a very good show.

I am writing an FF based on the hottest Jodi of CCBM 'Viren and Nivedita. It is very different from the story of CCBM. I hope you like it.

THE TITLE OF MY STORY IS

NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM

CHAPTER 1: page 1

CHAPTER 2: page 3

CHAPTER 3: page 5

CHAPTER 4: page 8

CHAPTER 5: page 10

CHAPTER 6: page 14

CHAPTER 7: page 18

CHAPTER 8: page 21

CHAPTER 9: page 24

CHAPTER 10: page 24

CHAPTER 11: page 29

CHAPTER 12: page 29

CHAPTER 13: page 33

CHAPTER 14: page 38

CHAPTER 15: page 38

CHAPTER 16: page 42

CHAPTER 17: page 46

CHAPTER 18: page 49

CHAPTER 19: page 49

CHAPTER 20: page 52

CHAPTER 21: page 52

CHAPTER 22: page 55

CHAPTER 23: page 56

CHAPTER 24: page 56

CHAPTER 25: page 59

CHAPTER 26: page 63

CHAPTER 27: page 68

CHAPTER 28: page 68

CHAPTER 29: page 71

CHAPTER 30: page 77

CHAPTER 31: page 81

CHAPTER 32: page 81

CHAPTER 33: page 83

CHAPTER 34: page 84

CHAPTER 35: page 89

CHAPTER 36: page 94

CHAPTER 37: page 100

CHAPTER 38: page 100

CHAPTER 39: page 100

CHAPTER 40: page 103

CHAPTER 41: page 103

CHAPTER 42: page 107

CHAPTER 43: page 108

CHAPTER 44: page 108

CHAPTER 45: page 108

CHAPTER 46: page 111

CHAPTER 47: page 111

CHAPTER 48: page 114

CHAPTER 49: page 114

CHAPTER 50: page 118

CHAPTER 51: page 122

CHAPTER 52: page 122

CHAPTER 53: page 127

CHAPTER 54: page 130

CHAPTER 55: page 130

CHAPTER 56: page 133

CHAPTER 57: page 133

CHAPTER 58: page 137

CHAPTER 59: page 137

CHAPTER 60: page 138

CHAPTER 61: page 141

CHAPTER 62: page 141

CHAPTER 63: page 143

CHAPTER 64: page 143

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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM

CHAPTER 1

The story starts with a speeding black car. A very handsome charming boy is driving the car. His age must be 24 or something. He is driving the car at a very high speed. He was often advised by his friends to drive carefully and a bit slow, but he never listened to their advise

After 20 minutes , he reached the college and stops the car..His friends saw him coming out of the car and called him "Viren, we are here". Viren turned and started walking towards them. He knew that every girl in the college is staring at him but he didn't care

He said 'hi' to his friends- Vishal, and Vicky..After few minutes, they started playing a game. In this game, every guy should impress a girl and should become friend of her. Firstly, Vishal goes to impress a girl but he was slapped by the girl.Then Vickey also tried but also failed'Both the girl whom Vishal and Vickey were trying to impress went to Viren and said " Hi Viren, aaj tum kitne smart lag rahe ho.." Viren while trying to stop himself from laughing at his friends condition replied "thanks".

When the both girl were gone, Vishal and Vicky joined Viren and Viren started laughing loudly..Vishal said "yaar ye ladkiyaan itna akadti kyun hai? Agar humse dosti kar leti to kya bigad jata? Aur ek yeh hai, jo ladkiyon se baat tak nahi karna chahta to wo hamesha iske piche lagi rehti hain" Then Viren replied "tum logon ko ladkiyon ko impress karna nahi aata " Vishal said " to tum karke dikhao " Viren agreed to play the game and said "Jo pehli ladki ab college main enter karegi, main use impress karke dikhaonga"

They waited for 10 minutes Then a girl wearing a purple suit entered in the college.Viren was looking somewhere else. His friend Vishal said "Viren ek ladki aa rahi hai" Viren turned and saw the girl..The moment he saw the girl, he just got surprised. The girl was looking very simple yet very beautiful.Viren said "isko to maine aaj tak nahi dekha college main kaun hai yeh ladki?" Vickey replied "ladki chahe jo koi bhi ho tune jo kaha tha wo kar". "thik hai main jata hun", Viren replied.

Then he started walking towards the girl and stared at her.He just got blown by her beauty.He was just thinking to execute his plan when suddenly his phone rang up. He picked up the phone and said "hello" "sir kya aap hamari company ka credit card lena chahenge.etc'.." Viren rejected the offer furiously and he was in his own thoughts when he accidentally collided with the girl'.. Due to the collision, the girl got scared and dropped her books and lost her balance''.Viren caught her hand tightly and placed his other hand around her waist''' they both stared at each other for few minutes . "aap thik to hain na?" Viren questioned the girl'..The girl came back into her sense and started picking up her books from the floor and before Viren could say anything, she ran away. Viren admired her. He was joined by his friend after few minutes and they asked what happened to his challenge''..Viren replied "aaj tak kisi ne bhi mere sath aise behave nahi kiya'''janna padega iss ladki ko". Then he questioned himself "who is she?"

Edited by edwardcullen19 - 14 years ago
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Hope that all of you like it.............please forgive my grammatical mistakes
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Wowww that was awesome doll....loved it. Thank you soooo much. Hope you write the next chapter soon. Mwah
My name is shamima.
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love it sooo much waiting for the next part neetika
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Loved your first chapter Neetika. Nicely done. Please continue soon. Waiting for you next update.
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Hey Neekita what a beautiful scene Dear I just loved it

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Hello Neetika!!! 🤗 This is Payal. Glad to make your acquaintance, dear! 😊 And, thank you for writing and sharing this FF with us. Liked the introductory chapter and waiting to read the next chapter(s).
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hey neetika 😊 the first chapter was great 👏 please continue soon
by the way my name is sandy
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Very well written... Viren in college....cool

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