OS complete-Abhay proposing piya

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heys guys this is my 1st Os on abhaya. I hope u like it and ya forgive me if there is a mistake and plz do comment. So here i start my os
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Posted: 14 years ago
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(In the college)-Finally piya has been accepted as one of the daughters of the dobrials. Misha and panchi had accepted her whole heartedly as one of their sisters. Moreover,best wishes were coming to abhay and piya as they were finally in a relationship for around a year.abhay,angad, kabir and tracker were sitting in cantene... Abhay was planning to give piya a suprise by proposing her with the help of his friends......(at dobriyal house)-piya was getting ready to go to d college thinking that abhay must have planned something 4 her.............when suddenly panchi and misha jumped in and congratulated her........ And they went to the college......................... (In the college cantene)-angad,kabir and tracker congratulated piya.....but abhay was nowhere to be seen.abhay has made a plan and everyone knows about it except piya.....,so piya after not seeing abhay went back to home feeling very sad.meanwhile piya in the dobriyal house is walking in the corridor when kabir comes. Kabir-hi piya,kaise ho???tumhe pata hai.......abhay.......... misha interupts and asks kabir to shut his mouth by giving him signal. Misha-(to piya)piya,tu mein aur birdie(panchi)kahi bahar chalte hai na.......vaise bhi tu ne aur abhay ne plans nahi banaxe hain. Misha gives piya a dress which was given to her by abhay to wear on a suprise date. It was the same dress which wore in the (new 26th march promo).piya, misha and panchi took her to a room which was full of darkness and then they suddenly dissappeared making piya very scared........when suddenly light came. It was a room decorated with full of rose(just the same in new promo).piya was very happy seeing dis and then hears footsteps coming which suddenly stopped.piya looked back to she who it was.......it was abhay who kneels down with a beautiful gold ring in his hand Abhay-piya main tumse bohut pyar karta hu aur tumse shaddi karna chahta hu, kya tum mujhse shaddi karoge saying dis he made her wear the ring and then piya says a yes and they both hug each other................... So friends hw did u find my os. I hope u liked it and give u'r precious comments and do let me know should i convert it into a ff and also give a suitable title for it.
Edited by anurag24t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey..
nice start..keep going..but please update more..not the CV'S but i hope u can give us something romantic...continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
it was great👏
very very nice👍🏼
update more and soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hei,
atleast v get a proposing part here...if u had idea for continuing this as FF..do continue..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey d Os was lovely.. U should write more.. n if u do then do pm me.. & If ur planning 2 convert it in a FF its a Gr8 Idea.. Do continue soon..lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its realy gd
continue with it dear

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