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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

wow i wonder if i get such an husband in my life...u completely sent me to dream land

Thanks. Well, no harm in dreaming is there? Who knows you could be the lucky one.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Both parts mind blowing , superb , leave me speechless...

Thank you for thease 2 parts ...

Dev is and sam both love each other but not able to confess i hope they will soon...

I am glad dev and sam both clear things ab geet and all ...both made for each other and dev will find out sam's father i think....

Godbharaye so sweet and nice geet and sam talk very much understanding and Imp i am glad geet read sam's mind ... hope she confess soon to dev and they both get married soon.. as like all time maan make me speechless with his love towards geet ...

awesome thank you now looking how will Arjun Cry



Dont worry the next two updates will be the confession. Geet knows Sam well as Sam knows Geet. Having been with each other all these years they can well read each other's minds. Arjun's downfall will come towards the end of the fic. There is still time for it. Thanks Monika.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: janvis70

Nice updates..glad to see Geet and Dev regain their lost friendship..and of course Dev and Sameera's increasing awareness and feelings ..wonder who Sameera's father is..has he already figured in the story yet?...and Maan and Geet's sweet interactions over the babies..lovely Opti😊


No I've not yet introduced Sam's father in the story. I changed this bit from the original. Geet and Dev make up and now the two couples are thick friends.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

Awesome updates
Plz Plz Plz more more
You Scared me at the end....I thought she was going in labour

Will post another update once I'm done with the comments. There is still time for the delivery.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

😊 wow what understanding....

Yes, the two couples have a good understanding between them. After all I'm writing an fantasy fiction, am I not?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

That was shweet update

Jus loved it
Dev Sam's love stry
Than old frnds cuming togther
Geet knws Sam so well
Frm seeing at Sam she got she loves Dev
Maan is awesum spector lik Geet
Frms far he was watching all eyes locks n sighs od Dev n Sam
Dev was really shweet with Geet
Loved Maan's care
He knws all thsg abt pregnancy is ready for all thgs
Geet is in pain but too happy also
Waiting for more updates

Thanks Afsha. Geet understands Sam very well. Sam's blush gave her away. Maan is happy for Sam-Dev. Maan is a well prepared dad.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: madhavipatil

lovley update dear love the way maan and geet are together ................wow geet came to know that sam loves dev ..................well hope she will confess i really hope to sam to say 1st i love u to dev................

Sam-Dev confession will come up in the next two updates.Lets see if your wish gets fulfilled.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part ????
nice part.................
so finally Sam told Geet everything and Geet's fine with it...................i just love their friendship and bondings in this story.................i mean Maan, Geet, Sam, Dev, Anwesha, Adi, Pinky.....................very understanding and helpful and being there for each other at times of problems and crisis............does Arjun even comes home at night or not? but the lesser he makes the appearance the better for others....................
cont soon...............

Yes, Geet is fine with Sam loving Dev. After all Dev is now her best friend again. What more can she want than to see her two friends happy with each other. I like to keep everything positive and happy. Real world is depressing enough.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Opti,

Nice godh bharai update. Maan and geet are really sweet.

I want sameera and dev' to have a long engagement period. Just like that. It sounds cute. We already have married couples in maan and geet and adi/pinky. I want an engagement romance for sameera/dev.

Sorry Usha. Did not plan for a long engagement for Sam-Dev because their story was an offshoot of the main Maaneet story. So the central characters will still be Maaneet. There are some cute moments for them though.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part XC

One week later

It was the eve of Valentine's Day. Sameera had been busy at work ever since she got back from Bangalore, trying to clear all the pending cases. No matter how tired she felt at the end of the day, she looked forward to spending whatever little was left of the waking hours with Dev, engaging in long conversations with him. He too seemed equally keen to spend time with her, making her laugh till her belly hurt with his poker face witty comments on the events of that day. The guy had no qualms making fun of himself.


For instance that morning she noticed that he came in from outside in his track suit, sweating from head to foot, his hair sticking out like the spines of a porcupine. When asked where he had been he responded that he had hit the gym to develop his body. Sameera was astonished that he would suddenly be conscious of his physique. When she teased him about it, he smiled wryly and said that not every guy was naturally blessed with a good physique like her good friend Maan. Some guys who are pigeon chested like him needed to work out to tighten and tone up their chest and pectoral muscles. When she still pressed on as to why he suddenly felt the need to build his physique he replied that he had been beaten to a pulp by a nymph-like girl in the not too distant past which only underlined how hopelessly under-toned his body was. So he was only ensuring it is well primed to withstand any future blows that may come his way. Sameera smiled guiltily, reminded of her misplaced valour.

That night after they had retired to bed Sameera lay awake for a long time on the bed. Her heart seemed to burst with all the pent up love she had for Dev. She felt she had to let him know how much she loved him and convince him to give a second chance for love in his life. Her feminine intuition told her that he was definitely more than attracted to her. Somehow she felt that his hitting the gym to tone up his body was more to impress her than for anything else. Maybe knowing that she once dated the well-toned Maan whipped up his insecurities. As Geet advised, maybe she needed to make the first move. She needed to assure him that she loved him as he was; nothing can make her love him less. Making up her mind, she went to his room and knocked on his door. Not getting any response, she slowly pushed open the door and realised he was not sleeping in the room.

Wondering where he could have gone, she was about to go searching for him when she saw light streaming from the bottom of the closed library door. She went in and found Dev stretched out on one of the chairs, a book on Finance lying on his chest. He had apparently dozed off while reading the book. Seeing his sleeping face which looked so innocent and vulnerable, she felt her heart strings tugged. She knelt by his side and removed the book from his chest, replacing it with her head. She heard the steady thumping of his heart beat which seemed to reassure her that he was always there for her. She could not restrain her feelings any longer. She felt the sudden urge to pour her heart out to him even if he was not in a position to hear or respond to her. Maybe it is just as well, she thought. She will practice what she will tell him the next day when he was conscious by saying it all to his unconscious sleeping form.

"Dev," she whispered hesitatingly. "I know you are sleeping and may not hear a single word of what I am about to say but I am going to say it nevertheless. I never thought I could ever fall in love with anyone. I fiercely guarded my independence and considered myself self-sufficient. That was before I met someone like you. In your quiet unobtrusive way you made your way into my heart. I could let my guard down and expose my vulnerabilities to you without feeling ashamed of them, for you never let me feel weak or helpless. I feel more human in your presence, more alive. You cheer me up when I am down. At work you give me complete freedom to operate on my own but I know I can always count on your guidance and wisdom when I need it. You are always sensitive to people's problems and difficulties. At the same time you are firm when you have to be. No wonder you are so loved by your employees. But I don't want to be just another employee. I want you to love me as a man would love a woman. I want to own your heart as you own mine. Yes, I can be very demanding you know. I am aware that you have been hurt in love. You may be scared to let yourself fall in love again, wary that you will get wounded again. But let me assure you that I will never play with your feelings. I will never hurt you. I may not have much to offer except my undying and passionate love for you. I am short-tempered, obstinate and willful and may always remain so. I will not promise you that I will change myself for you. I know you would not want me to do that either. Neither do I want you to change anything for me. You don't need to build your physique, for I find you physically attractive as you are. All this may sound very cliched for I am not much of a romantic, but I mean every word I said just now."

She leaned forward and kissed him gently on the lips, feeling their softness and warmth under hers. She hastily withdrew lest he wakes up and retreated to the door. Before she turned off the light she turned to look at his dear face once again and blew him a kiss.

After she left the room, he opened his eyes and smiled as his heart sang a happy song. He had heard every single word she said.


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Edited by Opti - 14 years ago

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