Friendship or Love?|RadevFF|2nd Part updated pg5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know I know you guys are probably like another fanfic??😆 I mean I haven't ended my other fanfic Hum pyaar karte hain😉 .. and then the cbians Fanfic I didn't finish because Anu and me didn't have time⭐️
But we will try to update that fanfic too.. I had this story in mind and thought it.. Hope you guys like it😃




Friendship or Love?
Introduction
Radhika and Dev are in the sixth grade. They are bestest friends. They have another friend whos name is Sia😉 Radhika is a total tomboy. She isn't that good looking.. But Dev on the other hand is very good looking so he has had some girlfriends (I know I know that their only in grade 6 and they already are dating?😆 But nowadays these grade 4ers have been dating but their dating is just hanging out together and just by name😉😆) Dev is dating Vishaka at the moment. ( I wanted to add some of the CB season 1 people in it too) Vishaka is Radhikas worst enemy. Radhika is not shy at all and very bubbly. She loves playing sports and she just acts like a boy😉

Then one day Dev asks Radhika out but Radhika says no. Their friendship isn't so strong anymore. Bu the starting of grade 5 they talk to eachother occasionally. She hangs out with Sia and Vishaka. Vishaka and Sia are her best friends now.
Then another school build and the people that live close to the school have to move to the new school. Vishaka Sia and Dev move there. Radhika is alone now.
Then she starts talking with the popular girl and she is now one of the popular girls. She turned out to be really super pretty and boys say shes "HOT"😳
She is still a tomboy though. And she doesn't date that many boys.
Then in highschool grade 9 their school has to be taken down so they go to another school.
What happens when she meets her old bestfriends, and the boy that was her best friend in grade 4??


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Tell me what you think about it? I will continue if I get good reviews 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
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When you say 4th grade do you mean like when their 9? b/c here in the us 4th grade is when your 9-10 years old could you clairfy the ages 😕

other than that I really your idea it seems like a good concept , bring Vishaka in it is a good idea
Edited by _Sahra_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Sahra_

When you say 4th grade do you mean like when their 9? b/c here in the us 4th grade is when your 9-10 years old could you clairfy the ages 😕

other than that I really your idea it seems like a good concept , bring Vishaka in it is a good idea


Yes it is 9-10 years of age
I think Canada and US works the same way😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I like the concept of the story it pretty goood...but isn't 4th grade to young to have gf...hmmm continue with the first part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess84

I like the concept of the story it pretty goood...but isn't 4th grade to young to have gf...hmmm continue with the first part soon

I know but nowadays 4th graders do have gfs/bfs
But its not like having a bf/gf in high school
its just people say their going out and everything.. And they just hang together nothing more.. Just for name as i had explained there😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotie

I know but nowadays 4th graders do have gfs/bfs
But its not like having a bf/gf in high school
its just people say their going out and everything.. And they just hang together nothing more.. Just for name as i had explained there😃

OHHH so i wasn't worng... anyway it's true 4th graders do that but alot 5thand 6thgraders on the other hand do date😲 ( i think you should change it to 7th or 6 it would be more logically they also just say their going out and everything and they just hang together nothing more )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Sahra_

OHHH so i wasn't worng... anyway it's true 4th graders do that but alot 5thand 6thgraders on the other hand do date😲 ( i think you should change it to 7th or 6 it would be more logically they also just say their going out and everything and they just hang together nothing more )

Alright Ill change it to 6th grader? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cool ideas keep it up dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu17

cool ideas keep it up dear


Thank you😃 Glad you like it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG! hotie, this is amazing, i want to read this, update please. and please pm me when ever you update. this is amazing 👏
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