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Rohini20 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
woo..waiting...👍🏼

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey muski dear
sorry 4 nt commenting 4rm last two parts yaar😕
bt wat 2 du was bzi with my studies😡 today also i came as no class
bt believe me oooo i just loved them
the 2nd last part was tou just awesum
i saw a glimpse of geet which was in london similar kind of a scene wen she thought they cunsummate bt they actuallly didnt nd hse was cursing herself 4 that same here once she was the same she was thnking assuming wat happened wat next
nd in the same way cursed maan yeh appne kya kiya
she surely can never change although we dont want even we want our purani geet back bubly i kno nt exactly bt sumhow want that jhalli geet nd this rough n tough although i love her too i read nd im like
yeh ladki hai k kya hai
o lord boyz wont b even like this the way u are showing her no pain nuthign as she is actually so feelingless bt this mu geet saying sumthing else he is understanding sumthign else
i was like at that time
abbe tune kisi aur ki biwi ke sath kuch nahi kiya apni hi biwi ke sath kiya hai us me regret kesa😡
bt still dont kno whom to blame bt still loved it yaar
the part was lovely the way at ethe nd he made her unconcious nd nt leaving him thats our maan
surely he will kno soon everything finally he gt tk kno she is gk
superbly written part
just loved it

keep writing
god bless u

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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting muskan......................................................😍
vrsharma thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

waiting for the update

bye the way muskan, when maan will come to know abt his family
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Posted: 14 years ago
aur kitni der abb tho boss bhi ghar gaya i dont want to spoil him by staying so late please abb tho kardo
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Posted: 14 years ago
still waiting......how much more time......
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear
the last part was also awesum yaar👏
i really felt crying this time wen the dr. said how many places she had to stitch seems like sum hopeless case she dont damn care abt her life least bothered still failing nuthign happens to her
the life the circumtances has made her so hard so stubburn that now she really dont tnk abt anything now
maan was so depp hurted bt still feels she didnt him 2nd chance wat a pity wat will happen wen he will kno he dont need a 2nd chance there is no option called 2nd chance he was the 1st nd he will remain till her last breath

his family hmmm wat 2 say abt them better nt to discuss
bt still im hoeful soon ull clear everything
ooo he just missed a beat mk alone how could b wen he is there 4 her always till last breath
i just love the way he pampers his sweet heart she deserves it
actually men are completely different wen they are with their children esp. daughters
they could make them du wat they have nt evn thought in their wildest dreamz
ooo i love wen he wpied his kisses 4rm her cheeks sho shweet wala bacha cutie pie typz maan trying his best to make it up woth her bt as geet said she is nt geet neither she loves him more than ehr although she too lover dad adad addaa bt still she is the only 1 in the world who can trouble him so much nd he is always ready to give in no matter wat
hope he will succeed in manaofy her
keep writng love them
god bless u

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Posted: 14 years ago
FOR ALL THOSE CURSING MUSKAN😭
ITS ONLY BEEN 6 DAYS SINCE MAAN & GEET HAVE MET
MU WILL BE CLEARED ON THE 8TH DAY
-truly magical-
part 154
Maan - sweety dehko na main ne kitne pyar se banaya hain aap ke liyen
she crossed her hand & went to the living room. Maan lifted his brows & wondered wat next. He helplessly followed her.
Maan - beta kuch tho ka lo. Plz
she doesn't respond.
Maan - do u want to have ice-cream
she was looking away..like she never heard anything. He rubbed his temple & looked around. He pulled out the video game. He began to play. She still didn't show any interest. He played the whole game expecting her to join, he purposely lost the game.
Maan - dehko yeh wala part nahi ho raha
she silently took the joy stick & finished the game. He jumped in joy..hurray & gave her high 5. she kept the controls on the table & left from there. She went to her room. He followed her with some milk.
Maan - mk please thoda milk pee lo
she was really upset. She ignored him still.


KHURANA MANSION
Daadi was really worried with Geet's condition & Maan's involvement.
Daadi - Maan samjthe kyun nahi, all this can create problems in her life
anni - agar woh hi bhai ko involve kar rahi hain, uske shaadi ke baad tho hum kya kar sakten hain
Daadi - Geet aise nahi main usse jaanthi hoon. She is from a very respectful family
anni - then why can't she leave bhai alone
Arjun yelled - tumhe jiske bare main nahi jaanthi uske baren main chup hi raha karo
anni - yah right how can I forget u still hold that soft corner for her
Arjun raised his hand & then stopped in mid air - u all can never understand her
he got disgusted & left from there. He never knew wat happened between Maan & Geet in past but hated that Maan never told any one about their relation. He was sure they were really close in London. He had seen their house, if he was married then why didn't Maan tell anyone. He hated Maan for that. Now knowing Geet moved on.. somewhere he felt bad for them.. but really he still couldn't believe she could !!! if Maan couldn't then how can she??

Geet's House
Maan was still trying to get her to have something. It was afternoon, lunch time. She looked weak already he was getting worried & tensed. He lifted her & kissed her again, he almost had a tear in his eyes - sweet heart please kuch khaa lo
she couldn't see the tears in his eyes. She hugged him & shook her head.
Maan - we will celebrate ur b-day again today I promise, I will take u to the farm house. just u & me
mk - mama???
he was little reluctant & nodded
mk - mujhe sun......sun......sh.....sh....sh........ine ....ine ...ine se milne hain
Maan was reminded of every single moment he had spend with Geet !!! their first horse ride together, sunshine, badsha & oscar. her innocent questions did he rape her. He smiled & hugged mk tight. Wat amused him the most was Geet had shared every single thing about her life with mk. Mk knew about him, prem, Rano, now even the farm house. It was too much for her to know & remember.
He fed her lunch. But she was still looking dull.
Maan - abhi bhi naraz ho
she kept quiet.
Maan - please sweet heart smile kardo
she gave a dead smile.
He closed his eyes in pain. How could he be responsible to snatch the smile off her face.
Just give her some time she will be fine bilkul aapne papa pe gayen hain..needs time!!!. the last part was clearly a taunt needs time!!

Maan instantly opens his eyes & looked at Geet. Mk ran hugged & pounced on to her. His heart ached thinking her pain, mk's leg rested on her waist. He wanted to tell mk to move her leg from her waist. But he couldn't he just looked away. Geet bit her lips in pain. chot lagi ?
She immediately pulled her hands away. Kanha Geet pointed at her waist. She got down & kissed her waist. so...so...so...rry....rry.....rry with tears rolling down her cheek
Geet - oh!!!!no no baby not at all.. u can never hurt me. U love mama na & kisses her.
Mk smiled & kissed her..
mk - mama mama...sun......sun......sh.....sh....sh........ine ....ine ...ine se milnege aaj
Geet - really !! she looked at Maan with a sparkle in her eyes.
Maan couldn't believe the delight in geets face. He thought she may not even let him back in her house, forget..mk..geet was way too much to ask. He immediately looked down & nodded.
Mk jumped off from her lap
Geet - where r u going
mk - packing
Geet smiled
the moment mk left Maan held her arm why did u come back from hospital, abhi tho drug ka asar utra bhi nahi hoga
Geet jerked her arm back in anger - I am fine
she was still angry with him for sending her to the hospital like that.
Maan - dr said it would take 12hrs
Geet - no drug can keep me down for 12hrs..she so much wanted to say only u could.
then she looked at him with a blush touching her cheek.. Maan didn't understand why she was turning all pink. Geet remembered staying back on bed with him for almost 24hrs in London.
He didn't want to his thought go wild, he just looked down & inched away from her.
Maan - are u ok with that..he pointed at her waist
she nodded.
He still looked down on the floor - u should be resting
Geet - thats wat Gautam says..so I am off for next two days
he gulped down his saliva & looks away. He couldn't bare to hear that name from her mouth.
Mk runs excitedly down the steps -2 days farmhouse???
Geet didn't know how was Maan placed she looked at him blankly
he immediately lifted mk - 2 days farmhouse
mk kisses him ...love u
Maan - love u too sweet heart
geet's heart felt so filled to hear those words from his mouth, she looked at him longingly, wanting him to say those words to her too, it never mattered but suddenly today she wanted hear it from him. Longing for his touch his words as she is been in dark for years Yes!!!, longing for him, wanting you to mark the places were they have been, her body and her soul. She felt he is the only one who makes her right and the one who makes her whole

Mk & nanny went towards the car. Maan held geet's wrist & stopped her. She looked at the grip & him her heart began beating excitedly she thought he was going to say something. He was looking down, struggling to meet her eyes. His mouth went dry. Woh.. I didn't he gulped his saliva & looked away. He tried again I ..he closed his eyes tight.. she leaned forward & kissed his lips..& hugged him very dearly. Tears welled down his eyes. She felt the urge to cry probably she was crying but there was no tears ..it had dried long back. Her heart was crying, there was no tears in her eyes. there was only pain, aching deep inside. Yes !!!! her heart was crying, since she wanted to cry, and cried she did, so vivid she cried for the memories, but no tears are coming from her eyes.


Precap
picnic as requested by cool_gal17
-PREV PART 153 NEXT PART 155-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
INTEZAAR😳 INTEZAAR😳 INTEZAAR 😳INTEZAAR 😳
MERI ANKHO KO TERI UPDATE KA
MERE BRAINZ KO TERI UPDATE KA
MERE DIL KO TERI UPDATE KA
INTEZAAR INTEZAAR INTEZAAR INTEZAAR
IIINNNTTTEEEEZZZZZAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR

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Posted: 14 years ago
ress
yeyey...me first me first....😳
Luvly update as usual...Mk is so cute...oh god...ye gautam abhi badi problem ban gaya...kithne der thak ye sab chaltha rahegah....it is so sad tht annie failed to understand geet.....selfish bitch...😡😡.atleast arjun did...so grateful of him...even after getting beatings from maan...😳..😆..!!!Hope mk plays a cupid to unite maan stupid with geet....why is he this stupid...wen he knows geet is a commited one....will she kiss him lyk tht if she was married to sumone..buddu maan....feel lyk giving him a slap for doubting her pure luv....continue soon..!!!

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago

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